读后续写练习勇敢司机帮助警察抓小偷 高三英语二轮专题

高考英语读后续写语篇练习勇敢司机帮助警察抓小偷1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Acoupleofdaysago,thereweremanypeopleonthebus.Halfwaydowntheroad,thedriversuddenlystoppedthebusbythesideoftheroadandsaid,“I’mgoingtohavedinnerfirst.I’mhungry.”Thenhebegantoeatfriedricenoodleswhiletalkingonthephone.Afterawhile,manypassengersurged(催促)thedrivertogoahead,butthedriverrepliedrudely,“Can’tyouseeI’menjoyingmynoodles?I’msohungry.”Afterafewminutessomeonewantedtogetoffthebus,butwasrefusedbythedriver.HeexplainedthatnobodycouldgetoffbecauseitwasNOTabusstop!Standingbesidethedriver,Iwatchedhimhavethelastofthenoodles,thinkingthatwecouldfinallystartnow.However,thedrivertookoutanotherbagofsoup!4续写原文IbegantofeelalittleangrybecauseIwouldbelateforanimportantmeeting.SoIurgedthedrivertohurryup.However,thedriversuggestedpolitelythatIshouldaskforaleave.Whenthesoupwasabouttobefinished,thedriverpickedupthephoneagain,lookingintherear-viewmirror(后视镜)fromtimetotimeasifhewerewaitingforsomeone.Atthistimeallthepassengersonthebusbegantoshout,“Wehavewaitedtoolong.Startrightnow!”Suddenly,apolicecarstoppedinfrontofourbus.Weallthoughtthatthepolicemencouldhelpusandwecouldgoatonce.5段首句Para1：Tooursurprise,thetwopolicemengotonourbuswithhandcuffs.

Para2：Watchingthethieveshavingbeencaughtbythepolicemen,allthepassengerssmiledwithdelight.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者有一天坐公交车时，司机突然把车停在路边说要吃晚饭，有人要求司机继续开车，司机都拒绝了，作者感到很生气，司机喝完汤后又拿起手机，时不时地看后视镜，好像在等人，突然，一辆警车停在公共汽车前面，乘客们都认为警察可以帮助他们。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：Tooursurprise,thetwopolicemengotonourbuswithhandcuffs.由第一段首句内容“令我们吃惊的是，那两个警察戴着手铐上了我们的车”可知，第一段可描写警察上来抓小偷的过程。10续写思路分析Para2：Watchingthethieveshavingbeencaughtbythepolicemen,allthepassengerssmiledwithdelight.由第二段首句内容“看到小偷被警察抓住，所有的乘客都高兴地笑了。”可知，第二段可描写乘客们对司机改观。11续写思路分析续写线索警察宣布有小偷——意识到司机做的事——警察找出小偷——钦佩司机——认为司机是英雄12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①意识到：realizethat/accompanyhim/keephimcompany②找出：findout/digout③钦佩：showadmirationto/feeladmirationfor情绪类①高兴：delight/happiness②钦佩：admiration/worship13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Ladiesandgentlemen,justnowwereceivedacallsayingtherearetwothievesonthebus,andsomeone’smobilephonehasbeenstolen.(由that引导的宾语从句，省略了that)[高分句型2]Onlyatthattimedidwerealizethatthedriverhadinformedthepolicemenofthetheft.(部分倒装句)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Tooursurprise,thetwopolicemengotonourbuswithhandcuffs.“Ladiesandgentlemen,justnowwereceivedacallsayingtherearetwothievesonthebus,andsomeone’smobilephonehasbeenstolen.”Onlyatthattimedidwerealizethatthedriverhadinformedthepolicemenofthetheft.Thenthedriverlockedthedoorsofthebus,whilethepolicemencheckedthepassengersonebyone,andfoundoutthetwothieves!Finally,thethieveswerearrestedandtakenaway.16范文呈现Watchingthethieveshavingbeencaughtbythepolicemen,allthepassengerssmiledwithdelight.Obviouslynoneofushadeverseensuchascenebefore,andweallshowedouradmirationtothedriverinsilence.Minuteslater,thedriverlookedatmeandsmiled,“Sorryforkeepingyouwaitingforsolong.Doyoustillconsidermeasarudeguy?”Ishookmyheadandsaidloudly,“Absolutelynot,youaremyhero!”17范文译文令我们惊讶的是，两名警察戴着手铐上了我们的公共汽车(手铐).“女士们，先生们，刚才我们接到一个电话，说车上有两个小偷，有人的手机被偷了。”这时我们才意识到司机已经通知了警察这起盗窃案。然后司机锁上了公交车的车门，而警察则逐一检查乘客，发现了两个小偷！最后，小偷被逮捕并带走了。18范文译文看着小偷被警察抓住，所有的乘客都高兴地笑了。显然，我们谁也没