八年级写作辅导课

如何写好英语作文？主讲人甄玉珍台山市甄玉珍名教师工作室2018.9.26审好题，形成思路，形成写作框架写作演示厅假如你们学校将要举办一场演讲比赛，请你以MyDream为题写一篇演讲稿。要求：1．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校；2．80词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。题型分析：本篇写作是一篇演讲稿。要求同学们谈论自己的梦想。写

作时应使用第一人称，主要时态为一般将来时。行文见路：本文可分三个层次。首先可开门见山写出自己的梦想是什

么，然后叙述自己为什么有这样的梦想以及如何实现梦想。高分点拨：充分利用本话题所学的句型，如：I’mgoingtobe…whenIgrowup./Mydreamisto…／Iwanttobe…

等；然后用IthinkI’mgoingto／Iwill…结束全文；行

文中应注意运用恰当的关联词语，如:first,then…等。另

外，要注意演讲稿的格式，开头有称谓语Hello／Hi，everyone,最后一般用That’sall！Thanks．作为结束

语。审题：文体、时态人称、要点行文：开头（引出话题）主题要点结尾（总结归纳与情感升华）措辞：可用语言（尤其是可画龙点睛的高级表达方式）层次与流畅度注意事项思维导图的“思”与“导”有利于谋篇布局，形成行文思路:WritingtipsMyDreamEndingBeginningBodyWhy?Whatisyourdream?I’mgoingto/wanttobe…whenIgrowup.Mydreamistobe…Howtomakeitcometrue?Ilike…Ithink…Because…That’sall!Thanks!

(注意演讲稿的格式，开头称谓和结束语)studyhardreadmorebooks…….定稿MydreamistoaEnglishteacher.Ithinkthisworkveryinteresting.Iwillveryhappy.Ilikeverymuch.BecausebeateachercanhelpstudentslearningEnglish.Iwanttoreadsomeaboutanimal’sbooks.Ioftenwithmyfriendgototheplaygroundpalybasketball.It’sMydream.英语的五个基本句型：句型1：Subject(主语)＋Verb(谓语)1)LiMingworksveryhard.2)Theaccidenthappenedyesterdayafternoon.3)

Springiscoming.4)Welivedinthecitytenyearsago.句型2：Subject(主语)＋Link.V(系动词)＋Predicate(表语)1)Thiskindoffoodtastesdelicious.

2)Helookedworriedjustnow.3)Springcomes.Itisgettingwarmerandwarmer.英语的基本句型：句型3：Subject(主语)＋Verb(谓语)＋Object(宾语)Hetookhisbagandleft.

2)LiLeialwayshelpsmewhenIhavedifficulties.3)SheplanstotravelinthecomingMayDay.4)Idon’tknowwhatIshoulddonext.(从句)句型4：Subject(主语)＋Verb(谓语)＋Indirectobject(间接宾语)＋

Directobject(直接宾语)Herfatherboughtheradictionaryasabirthdaypresent.

2)

Theoldmanalwaystellsthechildrenstoriesabouttheheroes

intheLongMarch.3)

Herfatherboughtadictionaryforherasabirthdaypresent.英语的基本句型：句型5：Subject(主语)＋Verb(动词)＋Object(宾语)＋

Complement(补语)1)Youshouldkeeptheroomcleanandtidy.2)Wemadehimourmonitor.3)Hisfathertoldhimnottoplayinthestreet4)MyfatherlikestowatchtheboysplayingbasketballWritingtipsMyDreamEndingBeginningBodyWhy?Whatisyourdream?I’mgoingto/wanttobe…whenIgrowup.Mydreamistobe…Howtomakeitcometrue?Ilike…Ithink…Because…That’sall!Thanks!

(注意演讲稿的格式，开头称谓和结束语)studyhardreadmorebooks…….Writing:MyDreamBeginningWhatisyourdream?I’mgoingtobe…whenIgrowup.Mydreamistobe…Hello!Everyone!Hello!Mydearteachersandclassmates!Everyonehasadream.Weallhaveadream.Iwantto/amgoingtobeateacherwhenIgrowup.Mydreamistobeateacher.Writing:MyDreamWhydoIwanttobeateacher?BecauseIthinkbeingateacherisagreatjob.Icanteachmany

students,andtheycanlearnalotfromme.

Iliketostaywithchildren,too.Itmakesmehappy.BodyWhy?Ilike…Ithink…Because…Writing:MyDreamNowI’mamiddleschoolstudent.Imuststudyveryhard.AndIhavetoreadmorebookssothatIcanknowmorethings.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.BodyHowtomakeitcometrue?studyhardreadmorebooks……IamsurethatIcanbeagreatteacherinthefuture.Writing:MyDreamHello!Mydearteachersandclassmates.Everyonehasadream.IwanttobeateacherwhenIgrowup.WhydoIwanttobeateacher?BecauseIthinkbeingateacherisagreatjob.Icanteachmanystudentsandtheycanlearnalotfromme.Iliketostaywithchildren,too.Itmakesmehappy.Now,I’mamiddleschoolstudent.Imuststudyveryhard.ThenIhavetoreadmorebookssothatIcanknowmorethings.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.IamsurethatIcanbeagreatteacherinthefuture.Doyouthinkso?That’sall!Thankyouforlistening!一篇好的英语作文应该是怎样的？评价标准：（适用于写作技能形成阶段）定稿Beginning开门见山，引出话题（意简言赅）★★★★★Body切合题意，要点齐全★★★★★语言准确★★★★★结构得体、流畅（层次分明，连接语使用得体）★★★★★适当发挥★★★★★Ending总结归纳，情感升华（意简言赅）★★★★★定稿The

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