初中英语九年级主题作文9-兴趣爱好

主题：兴趣爱好

导读本单元的主题是用英语谈论兴趣爱好,如日常生活中同学们喜爱的音乐、电影、书籍等等洞学们可以运用所学定语从句等句式深层次地表达自己内心的真实感受,培养积极的、有意义的兴趣爱好，树立正确的人生观和价值观.可适用于本单元的关联主题有很多，如Myhobby(hobbies),...changesmealot,Ilike...best等等.题目回放每个人在生活中都有自己的爱好.请以Myhobby为题，谈谈自己的爱好.写作要求：.你的爱好是什么？.你为什么喜欢它？.90词左右，文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名.审题指引1审体裁：记叙文，可夹叙夹议.2审内容：描述自己的爱好，说明喜欢的原因，并简单谈谈自己的感受.3审时态：主体时态为一般现在时或一般过去时.4审人称：以第一人称为主.框架设计开头：点出主题，说明自己的爱好是什么.中间：具体论述自己的爱好，以及喜欢的原因.结尾：呼应主题，谈谈自己的感受，段落素描Firstparagraph:Differentpeoplehavedifferenthobbies.Ilike...(Nodoubt,people'shobbiesvaryfrompersontoperson.Asforme,Ilove...)(...)Thebody:Ilove...inmysparetime.WhenI...,Ialways...onweekends.NowIfindthat...makesmerelaxedwhenIfeelstressedout.Also,...helpsme...Mostimportantly,...(...)3・Lastparagraph:Ihavebenefitedalotfrom…,andIwillkeepthehabitof...(Inmymind,...bringsacolorfullifetome.Iwillnotgiveupthishabitinmysparetime.)(...)范本淬炼AMyhobbyDifferentpeoplehavedifferenthobbies.①Asforme,Ilikereadingbest.Ilovereadinginmysparetime.AfterIfinishmyhomeworkonweekdays,Ialways②dosomereading.Onweekends,IusuallyreadbooksinsteadofwatchingTVor③visitingtheInternet.NowIfindthatreadingmakesmerelaxedwhenIfeelstressedout.Also,readinghelpsmemakegoodfriendsbecausereadersshowthesameinterestandcanhelpeachother.Mostimportantly,reading④broadensmyhorizons,andhelpsme⑤improvemyreadingabilityandevenmywritingskills.Ihave⑥benefitedalotfromreading,andIwillkeepthehabitofreading.①asforme,至于我，用该短语引出下文.②dosomereading,进行一些阅读.③visittheInternet,访问互联网.④broadenmyhorizons,拓宽我的视野.⑤improvemyreadingability,提高我的阅读能力.⑥benefitalotfromreading,从阅读中受益匪浅.亮点点评.本文紧扣主题，开头用简洁的语言点出自己的爱好即阅读，中间段落从多个方面论述了阅读的好处，结尾用一句话概括主题，结构合理，逻辑清晰..用asforme,also,mostimportantly等衔接语，使行文通顺流畅..运用状语从句和宾语从句等从句丰富了文章句式..文中运用了一些好词妙语，如insb/ssparetime,insteadof,feelstressedout,broadensb.'shorizons,improvesb/sreadingability,benefitalotfrom等.BMyfavoritehobbyIhaveanumberofhobbies,®amongwhichreadingismyfavorite.Inmysparetime,Ilosemyhearttoreading.Inmymind,readingis②aneffectivewaytobroadenmyhorizonsandimprovemystudies.Moreover,wheneverIfeeltiredinmystudies,Iwillreadsomestoiybooksorpicturebooks,③whichmakemerelaxed.Mostimportantly,Icanmakefriendswiththosewholovereading.Inall,reading④makesabigdifferencetomeinmylife.Ihavebenefitedalotfromreading,andIbelievethatreadingcanmakemylifecolorfulandmeaningful.①among,在・・・・・・（三者或以上）当中,后面是which引导的非限制性定语从句.②aneffectiveway,有效方法.③which引导非限制性定语从句.④makeabigdifferenceto...，对••…产生很大影响.亮点点评.本文开头直接点明主题，主体段落从多个层面阐述了阅读这一爱好带来的好处，结尾总结感受.首尾呼应，层次分明，结构严谨..使用inmysparetime,inmymind,moreover,mostimportantly,inall等衔接语，使文章衔接更加流畅..文中使用定语从句、时间状语从句、宾语从句等复杂句式，使语言结构更丰富饱满..比起上面二类文，文中词汇运用更为丰富，如使用了losesb.*sheartto,effective,makeabigdifferenceto,colorful,meaningful等.佳作赏析AIlikeplayingtheguitarNodoubt,@people'shobbiesvaryfrompersontoperson.Asforme,Iloveplayingtheguitar.WheneverIhavetime,Iwouldliketoplaytheguitar.Ithelps②developmyintelligence,focusattentiononwhatIamdoing,and③promotemyappreciationofart.Besides,ithelpsmerelaxafterthe④five-day-longbusyweekdays.Inmymind,⑤playingtheguitarbringsacolorfullifetome.Iwillnotgiveupthishabitinmysparetime.①people'shobbiesvaryfrompersontoperson,人们的爱好因人而异.②developmyintelligence,发展我的智力.③promotemyappreciationofart,促进我的艺术欣赏.④five-day-long,为期五天的.⑤playingtheguitar是动名词短语充当主语.亮点点评L本文整体脉络清晰，结构合理，首尾呼应.2.使用nodoubt,asforme,besides,inmymind等衔接语，使文章过渡自然.3•简单句、复合句（如含状语从句、宾语从句的复合句）交替使用，丰富了文章句式.4.词^匚和短语丰富多变，用vary,developsb.*sintelligence,focussb/sattentionon,promotesb/sappreciationof等增加了文章的生动性.Reading,myfavoritehobbyIlovereading,①whichhasbecomemyfavoritehobby.WheneverIhavetime,I②amburiedinreading.Firstofall,readinghelpsmebroadenmyhorizonsandgainknowledgeaboutdifferentareas.③Whilereading,Ifeelasiftalkingwithawisemanorlisteningtoalecture.Moreover,Ithinkthebestwaytorelaxistoreadbooks④thatIaminterestedin.Mostimportantly,readinghelpsmedevelopagoodhabitoflearning,and⑤improvemytestperformance.Inaword,readingismyfavoritehobby,andIhavebenefitedalotfromit.Iwillalways⑥maintainthishobby.①which引导非限制性定语从句.②beburiedin…,埋头于・・・・・・③whilereading=whileIamreading.©that引导定语从句.⑤improvemytestperformance,提高我的考试成绩.⑥maintain,维持.亮点点评.文章开篇直接点题，中间段落从不同角度叙述阅读带来的益处,结尾总结并回应主题.结构完整,要点全面，思路清晰..用firstofall,moreover,mostimportantly等衔接语，使文章表达流畅，语句通顺，衔接自然..句式灵活多变，使用非限制性定语从句、whenever引导的时间状语从句以及充当表语的动词不定式等,增强了文章的感染力和可读性.CSwimming,myfavoritehobbyAstheoldsayingruns,①“Oneman'smeatisanotherman'spoison."Myfavoritehobbyisswimming.Whentimeandweather②permit,Iwouldliketogoswimming.Ithelpsmereducemylearningpressure,andrelaxafterabusydayofschoolwork.Moreover,swimmingisaneffectivewaytohelpmekeepfitandstrong.Anotherpointworthmentioningisthatswimming③givesgreatdelighttome.Whileswimming,IfeelasifIwereafishswimmingfreelyintheocean.Inmyheart,swimming④playsanimportantroleinmylife.Iwillmaintainthishobby.①Oneman'smeatisanotherman'spoison.萝卜青菜，各有所爱.②permit,许可.③givegreatdelighttome,给我极大喜悦.④playanimportantrole,发挥重要作用.亮点点评.文章框架设计完整，详略得当.首段用谚语作为起始句，较有新意..文中moreover,anotherpointworthmentioning,inmyheart等衔接语运用恰当,使句子和段落过渡自然.句式富于变化，使用状语从句、表语从句等句式，增强了文章的可读性..词汇、短语丰富,如使用了saying,reduceone'slearningpressure,keepfitandstrong,mention,givegreatdelightto,playanimportantrole等词语，增强了文章的感染力.素材宝库.好词妙语itgoeswithoutsayingthat...不用说（不言而喻）..…asforsb.对某人来说andsoon等等among..・在・・・・・•当中gain/acquiremuchknowledge获得很多知识broadensb.'shorizons开阔某人的视野aneffectivewaytodosth.做某事的有效方法improvesb.*stestperformance提高某人的考试成绩whatstruckmemostwasthat…最打动我的是・..…afterall毕竟makefriends交朋友asamatteroffact事实上owingto…因为・・・・.提分佳句Goodmedicinetastesbitter.良药苦口.Healthiswealth.健康就是财富.Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.治学无坦途.Nowayisimpossibletocourage.勇者无惧.Successcomestothosewhopersevere.坚持就是胜利.Knowledgestartswithpractice.实践出真知.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹果,医生远离我.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻.Readingistothemindwhatexerciseistothebody.读书健脑，运动强身.Asthesayinggoes,“Readingmakesafullman.”就像谚语所说的那样，“读书造就充实的人了Asforme,Ilikereadingmost.对于我来说，我最喜欢读书.Readingisagoodhabitforme,andIhavebenefitedalotfromit.阅读对我来说是个好习惯，我从中受益颇多.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatdifferentpeoplehavedifferenthobbies.不言而喻，不同的人有不同的爱好.Itnotonlyimprovesourabilitiestoreadandwritebutalsobroadensourhorizons.它不仅提升我们的阅读和写作能力，而且能开阔我们的视野.Itnotonlyhelpsmefacethedifficultiesinmylifebravelybutalsohaveabetterunderstandingoftheworld.它不仅帮我勇敢地面对生活中的困难,而且更好地理解这个世界.写作预热1.句子改错Readinghelpmebroadenmyhorizons.Nomatterwhateverdifficultywemeetwith,weshouldnevergiveupourdreams.Icangetahighgradesbyreading.Doyouwanttoknowwhatismyfavoritehobby?IalwaysreadingsomethingIenjoywhenIamfree.答案:l)help改为helps2)Nomatterwhatever改为Nomatterwhat或Whatever3）去掉a4)ismyfavoritehobby改为myfavoritehobbyis5)reading改为read2.句子翻译1）正如谚语所说的那样，“健康就是财富了2）我们应该读那些不仅有趣而且有帮助的书.3）更重要的是，我们要坚持那些使我们的生活丰富多彩的业余爱好.4）这是我曾经听过的最动人的乐曲之一.5）当我心烦或疲惫时,我喜欢看能让我振奋起来的电影.答案:Asthesayinggoes,"Healthiswealth.”Weshouldreadthosebooksthatarenotonlyinterestingbutalsohelpful.Themoreimportantthingisthatweshouldkeepthose