高中英语-writing教学课件设计

写作Nothingisimpossibleforawillingheart.Twoheadsarebetterthanone.Practicemakesperfect.thebeautifulpinetrees(奇松)thestrange-lookingrocks(怪石)猴子观海飞来石theseaofclouds(云海)hotsprings(温泉)scribblevi乱涂乱画假设你是某高一学生李华，去年国庆期间你去了黄山旅游，美丽的黄山让你流连忘返。但在旅游途中你也注意到个别游客的不文明现象，如乱丢垃圾、乱涂乱画甚至吸烟等。请你给黄山旅游网英文版编辑发一封邮件，叙述你的所见，发表感想号召人们文明出游，保护环境。注意：1.词数120左右(开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)；2.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。参考词汇：胡乱涂写scribble,plasticbagsattract,sights(风景）befamousFor,protect

enviroment,tryone’sbesttodoDeareditor,DuringtheNationalDayholiday,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yourssincerely,LiHuaFollowthesixsteps:1.认真审题，把握主题2.抓准要点，勾勒题纲3.紧扣要点，扩写成句4.添加过渡，确保连贯5.修饰文章，提升层次6.查错补漏，工整抄写1.体裁：2.时态：3.主题：

记叙文一般过去时和一般现在时你的所见（黄山之美、游客不文明现象）及感想

假设你是某高一学生李华，国庆期间你去了黄山旅游，美丽的黄山让你流连忘返。但在旅游途中你也注意到个别游客的不文明现象，如乱丢垃圾、乱涂乱画甚至吸烟等。请你给黄山旅游网英文版编辑发一封邮件，叙述你的所见，并发表感想。注意：1.词数120左右(开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数)；2.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。参考词汇：胡乱涂写scribble1.认真审题，把握主题Phenomenon（Whatyousee

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Comments（Whatyouthink）2.抓准要点，勾勒题纲1.thebeautyofHuangshanMountainthebeautifulpinetreesthestrange-lookingrockstheseaofcloud2.sometourists’badbehaviorleaverubbisheverywherescribblesmokingprotectourenvironmentstoptourists'badbehaviorPhenomenon:Comments:2.抓准要点，勾勒题纲provide30percentofenergy;studentswillfeelsickandsleepy;havebreakfasteverymorning;…3.紧扣要点，扩写成句DuringmytripIwasdeeplyattractedbythebeautifulscenery---thebeautifulpinetrees,thestrange-lookingrocks,theseaofcloudsandsoon.Asweallknow,...AsfarasI’mconcerned,…Phenomenon:Comments:40%percentofstudentsdon’thavebreakfast.provide30percentofenergy;studentswillfeelsickandsleepy;havebreakfasteverymorning;…4.添加过渡，确保连贯forexample,what'smore,even,so...DuringmytripIwasdeeplyattractedbythebeautifulscenery---thebeautifulpinetrees,thestrange-lookingrocks,thesplendidseaofcloudsandsoon.Asweallknow,...AsfarasI’mconcerned,…5.修饰文章，提升层次1.单词变短语DuringtheNationalDayholiday,IvisitedHuangshanMountain.2.简单句变复合句Therewasoneortwotourists.

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weresmoking.DuringtheNationalDayholiday,IwentonatourofHuangshanMountain.Therewasoneortwotouristswhoweresmoking.6.查错补漏，工整抄写检查：时态语态、单词拼写、大小写、冠词、句子结构（句子无主语、主谓一致…)书写工整，卷面整洁！Goodhandwritingalsocounts!AGoodCompositionFixedphrasesEffectivelinkingwordsComplicatedgrammarpatternsbutfor;muchtoo;takepridein;makeeveryeffortto…forexample;what'smore;for;so,…非限