读后续写微技能指导3

读后续写微技能指导3

—融情于景Emotion+Environment细节描写Myeyeswerewideopen.Myfaceturnedpale.Mylegsweretrembling.Myheartwasbeatingwildly.Mytearswerewellingup.Myheart

Myface

Myeyes

Mylegs

eyes/face/mouth/heart/ear/hand/body...Mytears

emotion细节描写eyes/face/mouth/heart/ear/hand/body...Shewashappy.1.____________shone/glittered/sparkledwithjoy.2

____________litupwithpleasure.3.___________

waspoundingwithexcitement.

Her

eyesHerfaceHerheartShewasexcited.1.Hewassoexcitedthathecouldhardly_______.2

Theman______forjoywhenhewonthefirstprize.3.___________

glittered/sparkledwithexcitement.

speak

jumpedHer

eyesemotion生动动词Afeelingoffearslowly__________onme.Afloodofterror__________________me.Asenseoffright_____________________me.

...蔓延表示某种情感侵袭/涌入Iwasscared.overtook/overwhelmedwashedover/floodedovercreptupShewasangry.

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其他表达）

Angerfloodedoverhisbody.Hewasseizedbyastrongsenseofanger.

emotionTranslation1.他正要反应，突然感觉自己舌头打结，手心出汗。2.她悲伤而疲惫，瘫倒在扶手椅上。Hewasabouttorespondwhenhefelthistonguetiedandpalmssweating.Sadandexhausted,shecollapsedintoherarmchair.Thewindwas__________wildlyandtherainwas_________fromtheheaven.Theworldwas______________withaseaofdarkness.Environmenthowlingpouringburdened/loadedspecific

trees/flowers/breeze/sun/stream...comfortable/sad...EnvironmentEmotionAsenseofhorrorcreepinguponme,Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.

Thewindwashowlingwildlyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdrakness.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afloodoffearwashingoverme,Iimmediatelyturned1.2.

aroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.

“景”“情”过渡fear/fright情景交融情要细致景要细致过渡要融洽把自然现象当作人来描写1.Thewindstoodupand

gaveashout.大风凛冽，发出怒吼。2.Thebreezegentlykissedhercheeks.

微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。3.Themistswallowedhimup.

薄雾把他包围起来。4.Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。5.Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。景物描写

把含蓄抽象的概念当作人来描写

1.Fearseized/swallowedhim.

恐惧把他吞噬了。2.Angerchokedmywords.我气得说不出话来。3.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.我突然想到一个好主意。4.Anxietytornhimintopieces.她焦虑不安，十分崩溃。5.Courage/Confidencedesertedhim.

他没信心了。6.Afeelingoffearslowlycreptuponme.

恐惧慢慢地在我心头蔓延。情感描写Practice请根据相关提示写一篇短文，要求：1.情与景结合；2.词数80左右。提示：1.Lastmonday,John's