人教版（2019）选择性必修第一册 unit1 People of Achievement Writing课件

Unit1

PeopleofAchievementWriting技法点拨1.人物简介，其文体是记叙文。2.人物介绍涉及人的出生，家庭背景，教育，生平经历，成就和评价等。3.要注意人称和时态的合理使用。Howtowriteadescription/anintroductionaboutsomeoneyouadmire?Anintroductionaboutsomeoneyouadmire人物简介的步骤可概括为五个字：概貌育平评1.概指概况：age，sex，birthplace，background2.貌指外貌：appearance，character，qualities，hobby3.育指教育：educationprocess4.平指生平：bigeventsinone’slife（inorderoftime）5.评指评价：evaluation亮点句式：1.Bornin1999，heisnowa21-year-oldstudent,studyinginauniversity.2.Hewasbornintoapoor/richfamilyandlivedahard/happylife3.HewasadmittedtoBeijingUniversityin2011,whenhewasonly16yearsold.4.Hegothisbachelor’s/master’s/doctor’s/degreeinmathematicsfromBeijingUniversity.5.Heturnedprofessionalattheageof15.6.Heisamong/oneofthemostoutstandingpersons.7.Heishonourned/regarded/considered/knownasfatherofrice.8.HehasmadegreatcontributionstoChinesemedicine.9.Hedevotedhimself/hislifetimetoteachingremotevillagekids.10.SuchisAlbertEinstein,agreatperson,thegreatestscientistofthe20thcentury.写作训练假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jenny来信让你介绍你崇拜的科学家，根据内容给她回信。梁建英，1972年生，中国高铁总设计师；1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作；研制出时速300-350千米高速动车组；2019年获奖。注意:①词数100左右；②适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；写作思路三明确：人物介绍涉及她的出生，教育，经历，成就和评价等。四结构：根据要点，本文可分为三段：一、引出自己钦佩的人物梁建英；二、详细介绍她的情况及成就；三、她的影响及我的态度。此外，而且besideswhat’smoreinadditionmoreover因此asaresultasaconsequenceandthereforeandthus然而，不过howeverneverthelessthough写作词汇与句型1.中国高铁动车组总设计师thegeneraldesigneroftheChinahigh-speedEMU2.致力于……devoteoneselfto…3.研究中国高铁的发展researchintothedevelopmentoftheChinahigh-speedrailway4.研制出时速300-350千米高速动车组inventthe300-350km/hhigh-speedEMU5.在2019年获奖be/getawardedin20196.在高铁方面起着领先的地位playaleadingroleinhigh-speedrailwaysDearJenny,ThescientistIadmiremostisLiangJianying,whoisthegeneraldesigneroftheChinahigh-speedEMU.Bornin1972,LiangJianyinggraduatedfromcollegein1995.Sincegraduation,shehasbeendevotingallhertimetoresearchingintothedevelopmentoftheChinahigh-speedrailway.Afterwards,sheinventedthe300-350km/hhigh-speedEMU,makingitmoreconvenientforustotravelquickly.ItisbecauseofheroutstandingcontributionstoourcountrythatChinaisplayingaleadingroleinhigh-speedrailwaysallovertheworld.Asaconsequence,shewasawardedin2019.However,shenevershowsanysignsofpride.【参考范文】LiangJianyinghassetagoodexampletous.Fromher,