大学英语四级写作指导课件

2009年6月CET作文题目

四级作文题：

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1.越来越多的博物馆免

费对外开放的目的是什么？

2.也会带来一些问题；

3.你的看法？

1使用正式词汇来替代口语词汇SorryThanksGladCausetroubleAskforhelpEasyKindfamousApologizeforBegratefulfor/appreciateDelightedBringinconvenienceRequestassistanceConvenientGenerous,thoughtfulprestigious2使用正式词汇来替代口语词汇MostUseResult(成果)AboutBuyStopFinishGetWishpersonThevastmajorityofUtilize/putintopracticeAchievementAsto,concerningPurchaseCease/terminateComplete/bringtoanendObtain/attain/acquireIntendtoIndividual3使用高级词汇来替代低级词汇Ithinkthat…ManypeoplethinkthatGoodBadMoreandmoreHelpfulBeinterestedinAttractsb.CauseBeagainstBeconvincedthatItiswidelysharedthat…Favorable/promising/superiorNegative/unfavorableIncreasing/growingBeneficial/rewardingAppealtosbCaptureone’sheartLeadto/resultin/triggerFrownonsth4使用高级词汇来替代低级词汇LimitBuildBigForcesb.todoSth.ispopularCommonFinallyButDifficultLikesth.verymuchRestrict/confineErect/constructMassive/tremendousCompelsb.todo…haveuniversalappealUniversalEventually/ultimatelyNeverthelessChallengingBeenthusiasticabout/bekeenon/befondof5使用高级词汇来替代低级词汇NowadaysOnlyBoringDamageRememberthatWantBecauseofSo如此、太So因此、所以CurrentlyUniqueadj./merelyadv.TediousRuin/devastatebearinmindthatDesireOwingto/dueto/thankstoExtremely/fairlyConsequently/accordingly6制造长句名词前后加上修饰语

－adj./介词短语/同位语/定语从句动词前后加上状语－

时间/地点/方式状语/目的状语Thegovernmentneedstobuildmoreroads.

A_________government,which_________willbuildmoreroadsthat_________________.Governments________needtobuildmoreroadsinorderto___________and_________.7加长后的句子Aresponsiblegovernment,whichcaresaboutitspeople,willbuildmoreroadsthatconnecttheoutlyingruralareas,especiallythosecomparativelypoorareas.Governmentsatalllevelsneedtobuildmoreroadsinordertoboomitseconomyandimprovepeople’slivingstandard.8句式变化之二插入句－分词短语Parentsshouldnotturnablindeyetotheside-effectofplayingcomputergamesonchildren.插入句－不定式Thedirectcourseofdrugabuseisignoranceandcuriosity.9句式变化之二插入句－分词短语Parents,strictlyspeaking,shouldnotturnablindeyetotheside-effectofplayingcomputergamesonchildren.插入句－不定式Thedirectcourseofdrugabuse,totellthetruth,isignoranceandcuriosity.10句式变化之二强调句Itis+被强调的部分+that+其余成分Twooutofthetwentyapplicantssaidthattheirpersonalinformationhadbeenleakedout.11句式变化之二并列修辞Icame,Isaw,Iconquered.Studiesservefordelight,forornament,andforability.Agovernmentofthepeople,forthepeople,andbythepeople12句式变化之二双重否定Nothingisimpossible.Wewillneverfailtocompletethejob.Chinesepeoplewillneverfailtomakemoreachievementinspacetechnology.13句式变化之练习Therearefewerandfewercitizenswholiketoseefilms.

变化后：

Filmsarenowlosingtheirappealformanycitizens.14句式变化之练习2.Therearemanypeoplewhocomplainofseverehousingshortages.变化后：Housingshortagebecome_____________.15句式变化之练习3.Ifyoucomparethetwomethodscarefully,youwillfindthedifference.变化后：Carefulcomparisonofthetwomethodswillshowyouthedifference.16句式变化之练习4.Ifweonlyapplybookknowledge,wewillnotgetgoodresult.变化后：17句式变化之练习5.Inordertopreventtheproblembecomingtooserioustosolve,wemusttakeanimmediatestep.变化后：Animmediatestepmustbetakenbeforetheproblembecomestooserioustosolve.18句式变化之练习6.Inordertobuildastableandprosperousnationpeopleshouldmakenewefforts.变化后：19句式变化之练习7.MoreandmorepeoplenowprefertostayathomeandwatchTV.变化后：PeopleinincreasingnumbersprefertostayathomeandwatchTV.20句式变化之练习8.Moreandmorepeoplewhobecomericherandrichercanaffordacar.变化后：21句式变化之练习9.Moreandmoreteenagerssmokecigarettesinrecentyears.变化后：Teenagesmokingisontheriseinrecentyears.22句式变化之练习10.Moreandmoretreeshavedisappearedinthecity.变化后：23用于文章开段落的语句Whenaskedabout…,/Whenitcomesto/Facedwith….,mostpeoplebelievethat…butotherpeopleregard…as…/consideritdifferently.Whenitcomesto…,people’sopinionsdiffer.Someholdtheopinionthat…,whileothersclaimthat…Thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleasto…..Somepeopleclaimthat…,whileothersbelievethat….Thereisageneraldiscussiontodayastotheissue/problemof…Thosewhocriticize…arguethat…Theybelievethat….However,peoplewhoadvocate…,ontheotherhand,arguethat…24起、承、转、合Generallyspeaking,Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…Thereisnodenyingthat…（总起）Inthefirstplace,Tobeginwith,First,（分起）However,Nevertheless,Ontheotherhand,