2023届高考英语作文复习-求助信

2023届高考英语作文复习一一求助信

1.假设你是李华，一名高三学生，你最近获得了某境外大学的英语面试机会。请你给你的外

教James写信寻求帮助，内容包括：遇到什么问题？需要什么具体的帮助？

（语言需要帮助？自我介绍需要polish?不清楚外国人面试沟通技巧和礼节?胆子太小需要外教

帮忙rehearse一下?）说出想要得到什么具体的，有实际操作意义的帮助

写信目的；

求助原因；

你的期待。（期待能得到老师的帮助，不只是期待得到回信。）

DearJames,

I'mwritingtoseekforyourhelponmypreparationsforanEnglishinterviewofaforeign

universitynextweek.

Significanceattachedtoit,itmattersalottomakemyselfstandoutamongthecandidates,thus

I'mindesperateneedofyourinstructionsonmyoralexpressionssinceyouhaveliteracyin

idiomaticEnglish.Besides,Kmreallyatalossforsomepracticalinterviewtechniques.Plus,would

youbesokindastoremindmeofwhatcourtesyshouldIkeepinmindonthisoccasion?

Thanksforyourattentionandyourpromptreplywillbehighlyanticipated.

Yours

LiHua

DearJames.

I'mLiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudent,andI'mwritingtoinquireaboutthepreparationfor

aninterviewforaforeignuniversity.

DuetothelackofexperienceJ'mworriedabouttheupcominginterviewwhichisofparamount

importancetomyfurtherstudy.Additionally,theprocessanddetailsofitarestill

bewilderingme.Onaccountoftheexperienceyouhaveabroad,youradviceonhowto

prepareforitwillbehighlyappreciated.

Iwouldbeindebtedifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience

DearJames,

Sorrytobotheryou.I'mwritingthislettertoseekyourhelp.NextFridayIwillhaveaninterviewfor

admissiontoNewYorkUniversityintheUS,whichhasbeenmydreamuniversityforyears.

Neverhavingbeenthroughaninterviewbyaforeignuniversity,IfeelveryunsureofmyselfAs

you'reanexpertinadmissioninterview,Kmindesperateneedofyourprofessionaladviceand

guidanceonEnglishself-introductionandinterviewskills.

Yourhelpishighlyexpectedandthanksamillion.

Yourssincerely

LiHua

DearJames,

IamLiHua,astudentwhohasobtainedexceedinglypreciousopportunityforaninterview

ofanoverseauniversityrecently.ThusJ'mintremendousneedofyourassistance.

Confrontedwiththebrandnewchallenge,I'mwhollyatalossaboutwhatqualitytheyvaluemost.

Worsestill,beingyoungandinexperiencedJfrequentlyfindmyselfextremelyanxiousand

nervouswhenhavingconversationswithforeigners,whichcouldbeamajordrawback,So'll

bemuchobligedifyouwouldgivemesompracticalandeffectiveadviceonhowtoaddressthese

problems.

I'msurethatwithyourprofessionalguidancetheinterviewwillbeatriumph.Earnestly

anticipatingyourpromptreply.

Yours,

LiHua

2.假如你是李华，在英国朋友Alex的帮助下，你的英语有所进步。但是目前你在英语写作

方面遇到一些困难，请给Alex写封邮件，内容包括：

1.感谢帮助；

2.说明困难；

3.寻求建议。

DearAlex,

IwouldliketoexpressmysincerethankstoyouforyourhelpwithmyEnglish.

Withoutyourselflessguidance,!wouldn'thavemadesomuchprogress.However;Istillfindithard

togethighmarksinmycontinuationwriting.Myessays,notverywellorganizedintermsof

plot,lackscoherence（'情节/连贯方面）.Besides,mydescriptionofpeople,theiractionsand

emotionsisnotvividenoughtoimpressreaders（语言方面）.

Wouldyoubesokindastooffermesomecopingtechniquestodealwiththesituation?

Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.（92words）

Yours,

LiHua

3.假定你是国际学校学生李华，在即将到来的西方文化节中，你班将上演哑剧"TheGoldRush",

你希望得到外教James的指导和帮助。请你根据以下要点提示给外教James写一封邮件。内

容包括：

1.邀请外教观看排练。

2.希望外教给予指导。

DearMr.James,

Iamwritingtoaskforafavorfromyou.Couldyoupleasecomeandwatchourmime'TheGold

Rush”,whichisintendedforthecomingz/WesterncultureFestival”?

Thisbeingthefirstmimethatourclassisgoingtoputon,weareconfrontedwithvarious

barriersandproblemsduringourfirstrehearsing.Itisreallyachallengetoentertainthe

audiencewithnonverbalcommunication.Ournextrehearsalisscheduledat3:30thisFriday

afternooninourschoolauditorium.Ifyouareavailablethen,couldyoubesokindastobepresent

andoffersomeguidanceorinstruction?

Pleasefavormewithanearlyreply.

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DearGeorge,

I'mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.

Toofferstudentsanopportunitytoenjoythebeautyofpoems,theEnglishPoetryRecitation

ContestistobeheldnextFriday,inwhicheachparticipantisrequiredtoreciteanEnglishpoem

infiveminutes.However,!haveencounteredatrickyprobleminselectingEnglishpoetry,for

whichIsincerelyhopethatyoucouldrecommendoneforme.BesidesJ'vebeenexertingmyselfto

readpoems.YetIfailtograsptheskillsofit.Wouldyoubekindenoughtoprovidemewith

professionalguidance?

Yourgenerousassistanceandimmediateresponseareenthusiasticallyexpectedandtruly

appreciated.

Yours,

LiHua

DearAlex,

DisturbedbymyslowprogressinEnglishlearning,I'minurgentneedofyourguidance.

Whatbothersmemostwasmyinefficiencyandlackofmotivationinmemorizing

words.Duetothelimitedvocabulary,\alwaysfindmyselfstumpedbythechoiceofidiomatic

andaccurateexpressionsinwriting.Additionally,whendoinglisteningexercise,the

unfamiliarwordsaddtomydifficultyfollowingthedialogues,thusmakingitimpossible

toformegetanidealresultintheexams.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.

DearGeorge,

I'mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.Recently,apoetryrecitationcontestwillbehel