高中英语-Unit5-Writing课件-新人教版必修1

人教课标高一必修1Unit51a2a3aAbiographyissimplythestoryofalife.Biographiescanbejustafewsentenceslong,ortheycanfillanentirebook—ortwo.4aShortbiographiestellthebasicfactsofsomeone’slifeandimportance.Biographiesanalyzeandinterprettheeventsinaperson’slife.5aBiographiesareusuallyaboutfamouspeople,whichtellusalotaboutaparticulartimeandplace.Theyareoftenabouthistoricalfigures,buttheycanalsobeaboutpeoplestillliving.6a

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Findoutthebasicfactsoftheperson’slife.Startwiththeencyclopediaandalmanac.7a

Thinkaboutwhatelseyouwouldliketoknowabouttheperson,andwhatpartsofthelifeyouwanttowritemostabout.Somequestionsyoumightwanttothinkaboutinclude:8aWhatmakesthispersonspecialor interesting?Whatkindofeffectdidheorshe haveontheworld?Otherpeople?Whataretheadjectivesyouwould mostusetodescribetheperson?Whatexamplesfromtheirlife illustratethosequalities?9aWhateventsshapedorchangedthis person’slife?Didheorsheovercomeobstacles? Takerisks?Getlucky?Wouldtheworldbebetterorworseif thispersonhadn’tlived?Howand why?10aDoadditionalresearchatyourlibraryorontheInternettofindinformationthathelpsyouanswerthesequestionsandtellaninterestingstory.Writeyourbiography.11a忠实历史，实事求是，再现传主的精神风貌。突出展示人物个性和写出典型事迹。12a以时间为序以空间变换为序以时空转换为序13aLookatthelifeofNelsonMandelaandfindoutwhathappenedtohimin1999.InpairsdiscusswhatqualitiesmakeMandelaagreatman.AndwriteasummaryofNelsonMandela’slifeusingthefollowingtimeline.14a18/7/1918bornnearTranskei(SouthAfrica)1937enteruniversitybutdidnotcompletedegree1940completedlawdegreeattheuniversity15a1944formedANCYouthLeague1952setuplawofficetohelppoorblackpeopleinJohannesburg,laterthisyear,lawofficeclosedbygovernmentbecauseheattackedanti-blacklaws1961governmentbyandforwhitepeoplesetupinSouthAfrica16a1962sentencedtofiveyearshardlabourforencouragingviolenceagainstanti-blacklaws1963ANCbegantoblowupbuildings1964sentencedtoprisonforlifeonRobbenIslandforbeingoneoftheANCleaders17a1982movedtoaprisoninCapeTown1990releasedfromprison1991becamePresidentoftheANC1993wontheNobelPeacePrizebecamePresidentofSouthAfrica1999_____________________________18a19a第一步认真审题(analyzetherequirements）第二步谋篇布局(drawupanoutline)第三步联句成篇(organizethesentences)第四步锦上添花(getthearticlepolishedup)第五步查漏补缺(checkthemistakes)20a审主题审体裁审人称审时态asummaryofNelsonMandela’slifeabiographythethirdthepasttense21a按时间顺序列出提纲22aNelsonMandelawasborninTranskei,SouthAfricaonJuly18,1918.Heentereduniversityin1937butdidnotcompletehislawdegreeattheuniversityin1940.23aHeformedANCYouthLeaguein1944.In1952hesetupalawofficetohelppoorblackpeopleinJohannesburg,laterthisyear,hislawofficewasclosedbygovernmentbecauseheattackedanti-blacklaws.24aIn1961governmentbyandforwhitepeoplewassetupinSouthAfrica.In1962hewassentencedtofiveyearshardlabourforencouragingviolenceagainstanti-blacklaws.In1963ANCbegantoblowupbuildings.25aIn1964hewassentencedtoprisonforlifeonRobbenIslandforbeingoneoftheANCleaders.In1982hewasmovedtoaprisoninCapeTown.26aIn1990hewasreleasedfromprison.In1991hebecamepresidentoftheANC.In1993hewontheNobelPeacePrize.In1994hebecamePresidentofSouthAfrica.27a逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序空间顺序first,second,then,finallyatlast,soon,immediately,suddenlyhere,there,ononeside…ontheotherside,infrontof,atthebackof,nextto28a逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇对称顺序转折顺序foronething,fortheotherthing,ononehand,ontheotherhandbut,however,while,though,otherwise29a逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇因果顺序条件顺序because,since,as,thanksto,asaresult(of)aslongas,solongas,onconditionthat,if,unless30a逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇让步顺序递进顺序though,as,evenif/though,whether,who(what,when,where)everwhat’smore,besides,tomakethematterworse,what’sworse31a逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇表示总结inaword,altogether,allinall,ingeneral32aHeformedANCYouthLeaguein1944.

打破常规formed取代founded33aGovernmentclosedhislawofficebecauseheattackedanti-blacklaws.Hislawofficewasclosedbygovernmentbecauseheattackedanti-blacklaws.被动提色显技巧34aIn1961governmentbyandforwhitepeoplewassetupinSouthAfrica.In1962hewassentencedtofiveyearshardlaborforencouragingviolenceagainstanti-blacklaws.In1990hewasreleasedfromprison.35aHislawofficewasclosedbygovernmentbecauseheattackedanti-blacklaws.AfterthebanningoftheANCin1960,NelsonMandelaarguedforthesettingupofamilitarywingwithintheANC.

In1961governmentbyandforwhitepeoplewassetupinSouthAfrica.合理过渡离不了36aBesurethatyoudidn’tmakeanyspelling,logicalandgrammaticalmistakes.37aNelsonMandelawasborninTranskei,SouthAfricaonJuly18,1918.HisfatherwasChiefHenryMandelaoftheTembuTribe.Mandelahimselfentereduniversityin1937butdidnotcompletehislawdegreeattheuniversityin1940.38aIn1944heformedANCYouthLeagueandwasengagedinresistanceagainsttherulingNationalParty’sapartheidpoliciesafter1948.

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in1952hesetupalawofficetohelppoorblackpeopleinJohannesburg,laterthisyear,hislawofficewasclosedbygovernmentbecauseheattackedanti-blacklaws.39aAfterthebanningoftheANCin1960,NelsonMandelaarguedforthesettingupofamilitarywingwithintheANC.In1961governmentbyandforwhitepeoplewassetupinSouthAfrica.InthatconditionMandelawassentencedtofiveyearshardlaborforencouragingviolenceagainstanti-blacklaws.40aIn1963for