2023全国1卷英语真题读后续写课件高考英语复习

全国I卷读后续写xx老师2023新高考xx老师2023高考真题出处分析AWildRide(2021)LightingtheCandle系列TheHornBook《号角》杂志(1924年美国波士顿创刊）续--句子分析Para1：Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Whatwasthecontest?Whatwasthenews?Para2:Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation(颁奖典礼).WhydidIgotomyteacher’soffice?Whathappenedintheawardpresentation?读--原文分析WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest（竞赛）.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.Writingwassodifficultandpainful（痛苦的）formethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaper（作业）onthesinking（沉没）oftheTitanic（泰坦尼克号）byactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.自我否定自我尝试表演一出戏努力；尽力有一个很好的机会读--原文分析自我怀疑自我尝试自我坚持不像是登记借阅读--原文分析WhenIhandedintheessay（文章）tomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.自我突破让步1actoutaplay

2applyyourself

3haveagoodshotatthis

4unlikelytobe

5checkout

6givewayto让步不像是登记借阅表演一出戏努力；尽力有一个很好的机会读--原文分析no;didnotlovedifficultandpainfulsuretofailImysocialstudiesteacher→giveitatry

laughed→encouraged

→Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.

→Ikeptgoing.

→enjoy;notcareifIcouldwin

→laughedandsaid“writeagain”→

。。。→。。。续--句子分析Para1：Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.什么消息?我有/没有得奖？我、老师（其他同学）的反应？颁奖典礼的情况？Para2:Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation(颁奖典礼).我说什么？老师的反应是什么？（师生互动）这件事情对我写作的影响？如何升华主题？第一段的结尾一定要与第二段开头衔接写--万能模板回顾

动作描写：Withoutasecondthought,句子。没有多想/毫不犹豫，....没有多想，我马上将这个好消息分享给我的老师，并紧紧拥抱他。Withoutasecondthought,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________.心理描写：Awaveof+情绪名词+sweptover人.谁感到一阵xx。我们都感动非常激动。Awaveof_____________sweptover_______________.Isharedthisgoodnewswithmyteacherimmediatelyandhuggedhimtightlyexcitementbothofus写--原文句子仿写

原句：Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.

句型：bewillingtoapplyyourself

改写：我骄傲地说“如果你愿意全身心地投入，你可以做成任何事情，甚至是你讨厌或者不擅长的事情。”I__________said,"Ifyouarewillingtoapplyyourself,__________________________________________________________________________.愿意全身心地投入proudlyyoucanachieveeverything,eventhoseyoudislikeorarenotgoodat写--原文句子仿写

原句：thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.

句型：AgavewaytoB

改写：后来，我的其他爱好都要让步于写作，它成了我每天必备的事情。Later,_________________hadtogivewayto________,whichbecame________________________________.A让步给B；B超过了Amyotherhobbiesmust-havethingeverydaywriting写--万能模板

A’s+adj.+words

whisperedinB’smind.

A...的话在B的脑海里回响。

改写：1.我的老师鼓励的话在我脑海里回响。____________’s____________wordswhisperedin______mind.2.他鼓舞人心的话还在我们的脑海里回响。__________________wordsstillwhisperedin______mind.3.街头艺人的真诚的话在我脑海里回响。(juggler)____________’s____________wordswhisperedin______mind.MyteachermyencouragingHisourinspiringThejugglermysincere写--万能模板

原句：Itseemedasif+句子。仿佛...

改写：1.仿佛他早就知道了结果。Itseemedasif_____________________________________.2.仿佛写作带我进入了一个新世界。Itseemedasif_____________________________________.3.仿佛所有希望都消失了。Itseemedasif_____________________________________.hehadknowntheresultalreadywritingtookmeintoanewworldallhopedied写--范文赏析-Para1Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.IwassohappytohearthenewsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.“Iknewyou’dwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaidexcitedly.Thencamethebigday.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomyteacher.Isaid,“It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn’thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”衔接句（衔接Para1-2）I：→happy→thanksmyteacher：→proud→excited写--范文赏析-Para2

Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,hesaid“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”“YouknowIdidn’tlikewritingbefore,butnowIamcrazyaboutit!Iwilltrymybesttocreategoodworks.”Isaidseriously.Sincethen,IhavewrittenmanygoodworksandnowIam