初中英语-中考英语作文写作教学课件设计

BeBetter英语中考作文写作技巧

2020年的冬天，因为突如其来的新冠肺炎，全国各地都延迟开学，学生在家上网课。请你谈谈相对于传统教学网课的优缺点，并给返校学习同学们提出建议，帮助他们迅速适应学校生活，提高学习效率，备战中考。提示：1.分析网课的优缺点。

2.给同学们提出建议。

3.词数80~100.（标题和开头句不计入总词数）

DuringtheSpringFestivalof2020,WeChineseexperiencedaperiodofterriblediseasecausedbynovelcoronavirus.Tokeepushealthy,wehadtostudyonlineathome._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhavethefollowingproblems?Ioftenmakemistakessuchasspellingthewrongwords,missingtheverbs,usingthewrongtensesandsoon.Ican'tusethelinkingwordsproperly.IoftenuseChinglish.

Studyonlinehasmanyadvantages.Wecansavethetime.Wecanseethescreenclearlyandtakenoteseasily.Therealsohavesomedisadvantages.Itishardtofocusontheteachersandclassesallthetime.WhenIhavequestionstoasktheteacher,Ican'talwaysasktheteacher.Now,wereturnbacktoschool.Herearesomeadviceonhowtostudyatschoolbetter.Togetgoodgrades,weneedtolistenteacherscarefullyandasktheteacherforhelpwhenyouhaveproblems.Alsowecanmakeplans.Thefinalexamiscoming.Let'sstudyhardandgetagoodgrades.

Step01CorrectthemistakesPleasehelpmecorrectthemistakes.

Studyonlinehasmanyadvantages.Wecansavethetime.Wecanseethescreenclearlyandtakenoteseasily.Therealsohavesomedisadvantages.Itishardtofocusontheteachersandclassesallthetime.WhenIhavequestionstoasktheteacher,Ican'talwaysasktheteacher.Now,wereturnbacktoschool.Herearesomeadviceonhowtostudyatschoolbetter.Togetgoodgrades,weneedtolistenteacherscarefullyandasktheteacherforhelpwhenyouhaveproblems.Alsowecanmakeplans.Thefinalexamiscoming.Let'sstudyhardandgetagoodgrades.

Studyingonlinehasmanyadvantages.Wecansavethetime.Wecanseethescreenclearlyandtakenoteseasily.Italsohassomedisadvantages.Itishardtofocusontheteachersandclassesallthetime.WhenIhavequestionstoasktheteacher,Ican'talwaysasktheteacher.Now,wehavereturnedtoschool.Hereissomeadviceonhowtostudyatschoolbetter.Togetgoodgrades,weneedtolistentoteacherscarefullyandasktheteacherforhelpwhenyouhaveproblems.Alsowecanmakeplans.Thefinalexamiscoming.Let'sstudyhardandgetagoodgrades.

注：1.单词拼写是否正确，2.主谓是否一致，3.动词搭配是否完整，4.人称、时态、语态是否正确。

Step02Addthelinkingwords关联词（thelinkingwords）1.表示并列:2.表示选择:3.表示转折:4.表示因果:5.表示条件:6.表示对比:7.表示解释:8.表示顺序:9.表示强调:10.表示结论:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smore，notonly…butalsoor,either…orbut,however,although\though,afterall,anywaybecause,so,since,for,asaresultif,unlessinstead,not…but,while,ontheonehand…ontheotherhandforexample,suchas,totellthetruthfirst(ly),first(ofall),second(ly),next,finally,intheendalso,besides,especially,actually,infactallinall,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshortPleasehelpmeaddthelinkingwords.

Studyingonlinehasmanyadvantages.Wecansavethetime.Wecanseethescreenclearlyandtakenoteseasily.Italsohassomedisadvantages.Itishardtofocusontheteachersandclassesallthetime.WhenIhavequestionstoasktheteacher,Ican'talwaysasktheteacher.Now,wehavereturnedtoschool.Hereissomeadviceonhowtostudyatschoolbetter.Togetgoodgrades,weneedtolistentoteacherscarefullyandasktheteacherforhelpwhenyouhaveproblems.Alsowecanmakeplans.Thefinalexamiscoming.Let'sstudyhardandgetagoodgrades.

注：关联词可以让文章脉络清楚，要点明确。

Studyingonlinehasmanyadvantages.First,wecansavethetime.Second,wecanseethescreenclearlyandtakenoteseasily.Italsohassomedisadvantages.Itishardtofocusontheteachersandclassesallthetime.What’smore,whenIhavequestionstoasktheteacher,Ican'talwaysasktheteacher.Now,wehavereturnedtoschool.Hereissomeadviceonhowtostudyatschoolbetter.Togetgoodgrades,weneedtolistentoteacherscarefullyandasktheteacherforhelpwhenyouhaveproblems.Alsowecanmakeplans.Thefinalexamiscoming.Let'sstudyhardandgetgoodgrades.

Step03UsetheadvancedsentencesTrytochangethesentences1）合并为简单句；Mybrotherhelpedmeinmaths.Imadegreatprogress.Imadegreatprogressinmathswiththehelpofmybrother.

Trytochangethesentences2）学会使用感叹句；

Itisnecessarytohelpothers.

Hownecessaryitistohelpothers！Trytochangethesentences3)善用复合句；

Weneedtohelppeople.Thepeopleareintrouble.Weneedtohelpthepeoplewhoareintrouble.Trytochangethesentences4）巧妙使用强调句；

Wecanachieveourdreamsbyworkinghard.

Onlybyworkinghard,canweachieveourdreams.Pleasehelpmechangethesentences.

Studyingonlinehasmanyadvantages.First,wecansavethetime.Second,wecanseethescreenclearlyandtakenoteseasily.Italsohassomedisadvantages.Itishardtofocusontheteachersandclassesallthetime.What’smore,whenIhavequestionstoasktheteacher,Ican'talwaysasktheteacher.Now,wehavereturnedtoschool.Hereissomeadviceonhowtostudyatschoolbetter.Togetgoodgrades,weneedtolistentoteacherscarefullyandasktheteacherforhelpwhenyouhaveproblems.Alsowecanmakeplans.Thefinalexamiscoming.Let'sstudyhardandgetgoodgrades.

注：句式多变，长短合适，就易避难。

Studyingonlinehasmanyadvantages.First,wecansavethetimethatweusuallyspendonthewaytoschool.Second,wecanseethescreenclearlyandtakenoteseasily.Italsohassomedisadvantages.Itishardtofocusontheteachersandclassesallthetime.What’smore,itislessconvenienttoaskquestionsathomethanatschool.Now,wehavereturnedtoschool.Hereissomeadviceonhowtostudyatschoolbetter.Togetgoodgrades,weneedtolistentoteacherscarefully.Whenyouhaveproblems,wecanasktheteacherforhelp.Alsowecanmakeplanstomanageourtimebetter.Thefinalexamiscoming.Let'sstudyhardandgetgoodgrades.

Step04Usesome

sayingsAsthesayinggoes,“___________.”集中注意力于学习Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateourmindonourstudies.

其他谚语:1.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.2.Practicemakesperfect.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.4.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.5.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.6.AllroadsleadtoRome.

注：使用恰当的谚语会让你的文章增色不少。

Studyingonlinehasmanyadvantages.First,wecansavethetimethatweusuallyspendonthewaytoschool.Second,wecanseethescreenclearlyandtakenoteseasily.Everycoinhastwosides.Italsohassomedisadvantages.Itishardtofocusontheteachersandclassesallthetime.What’smore,itisless