专题08应用文写作-2023年高考英语真题题源解密（新高考卷）

专题08应用文写作（2023·新高考卷I、卷II应用文写作）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；1.说明问题；2.提出建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考答案】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】DearRyan,【表达观点】I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.【佐证观点】Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.【提出建议】Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建议：suggestion→advice选择：choose→select2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（运用了现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）【命题意图】2023年新高考I卷、II卷应用文写作设置的情境是，外教准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，要求考生给外教写邮件说明这样分组存在的问题并提出建议。这就要求考生在审题的时候，首先思考题干中的关键信息“存在的问题”是什么，再提出可以解决问题的具体建议。这不仅仅考查了学生对实际问题的思考，能够培养学生发现问题和解决问题的能力，同时也要求学生具备一定的英语表达能力，包括语法和词汇的运用能力，以及英语写作的组织和表达能力。因此，该应用文写作既注重实用性，又具备语言能力的综合考查，还考查了学生的思辨能力，体现了英语这一学科的应用价值。【考查要点】写作体裁是建议信；题材是指出随机分组的不合理并提建议。应用文写作依然是书信格式，延续了以往的提纲式写作，考查的主题也十分贴近学生的学习与生活。很多中小学都有外教老师，考生大多有与外教老师交流的经历，所以考生对“外教口语课分组训练”这一主题应该有亲切感，完成写作任务难度并不大。不过对于随机分组练习口语的弊端，可能有的学生思维无法短时间内展开，会有一种很难的感觉，其实这里重点要审题，针对“随机”二字来提建议，比如应该按照口语的能力来分组，更有针对性。【课标链接】应用文属实用文体，有严格的语境限制，比如确定的时间、地点，确定的对象、范围，确定的行文目的等。因此，应用文写作应力求主旨鲜明，格式正确，语言简练，语气因人因事而异。书信、电子邮件是常见的应用文写作考查题型，主要包括询问信、致歉信、致谢信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信等，其次应用文还有：通知、发言稿、便条、日记、通知、调查报告扥。写作时要注意格式正确，包含称呼语（salutation），正文（body），结束语（complimentaryclose），签名（signature）。应用文写作是通过要点提示、图画、表格等限定内容、人称、时态、字数和文体的一种写作类型，而且大多数应用文已经形成了稳定的通用格式和体例，所以考生在写作中所受限制较多，自由发挥的空间不大。在考场答题时，考生应遵循＂准确审题＂、＂遣词造句＂、＂形成篇章＂、＂检查誊写＂的答题步骤。【1】（2022·新高考卷I、卷II应用文写作）假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1.节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearCaroline,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。【详解】1.词汇积累建立：establish→setup了不起的：amazing→fabulous帮助：aid→assistance许多：plentyof→alotof2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.拓展句：Youareourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,whoseaidcanhelpusalot.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.(运用了状语从句的省略)【2】（2021·新高考卷I、卷II应用文写作）你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.读报的经历；2.喜爱的栏目；3.期望和祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。YouthandMe________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】YouthandMeIthasbeen10yearssinceYouthwasfounded.Inmymemory,itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.Besides,IevensubmittedmyownfictiontoYouth.RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇应用文，向校刊Youth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。【详解】1.词汇积累建立：found→establish沮丧的：upset→depressed得到：receive→obtain赏析：enjoy→appreciate2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.拓展句：Notonlycanthesestoriesrelievemystress,butalsotheycanbroadenmyhorizon.【点睛】[高分句型1]Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.(运用了as引导的让步状语从句还运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)分析近年的高考试题，可以发现写作第一部分体裁为应用文写作；从话题来说，应用文写作并非是时尚热点话题，而是与学生生活息息相关的话题。为此是主流，但是我们复习重点要全面。除了十大常考书信题型以外，还要复习通知、演讲稿、倡议书、投稿信、英文报道以及宣传稿等新型写作模式。 2.复习内容侧重于学生的日常生活话题，如班会，主题活动等。当然文化，核心价值观等正确思想导向的话题以及能够促进德智体美劳全面发展生活化素材也需要多复习。 3.增强临时应变的能力。比如今年的应用文写作就就是给老师提出建议，不知道写什么的时候，就可以结合平时生活正的各类话题来构思。【1】（2023届浙江省诸暨市高三5月诊断性考试英语试题）假定你是李华，最近一直在使用ChatGPT辅助自己的学习，颇有收获和感受，现请你在班级发言，内容要点包括：1.使用体验和评价；2.使用建议和希望。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dearfellowstudents________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】Onepossibleversion:Dearfellowstudents,HaveyoubeenusingChatGPT?Ihavebeensinceitwasreleased.Asafanofit,Iinteractwithitalot,seekingbetterideas,differentsolutionsandvariouslearningmaterials.Franklyspeaking,ChatGPT,thispowerfulandinterestingchatbot,makesformystudy.Itprovidessupport,guidanceandevenmotivation,enablingmetoworkautonomouslyandefficiently.ButhoweverintelligentChatGPTis,itisjustatooldevelopedtoserveus.Asstudents,weshouldneverdependtoomuchonit,letalonebereplacedordominatedbyitinourstudy.Weshoulduseitwisely.Hopefully,weallwillembracesuchAItechnologyasChatGPT,usethemproperlyandgetthemostoutofthem.That’sall.Thankyou!【解析】【导语】本文是应用文。假定你是李华，最近一直在使用ChatGPT辅助自己的学习，颇有收获和感受，现请你在班级发言，内容要点包括：使用体验和评价；使用建议和希望。寻找：seek→lookfor各种各样的：various→avarietyof提供：provide→offer明智地：wisely→advisably简单句变复合句原句：Franklyspeaking,ChatGPT,thispowerfulandinterestingchatbot,makesformystudy.拓展句：Franklyspeaking,ChatGPT,whichisapowerfulandinterestingchatbot,makesformystudy.【点睛】[高分句型1]Iinteractwithitalot,seekingbetterideas,differentsolutionsandvariouslearningmaterials.(运用了非谓语动词作状语)[高分句型2]ButhoweverintelligentChatGPTis,itisjustatooldevelopedtoserveus.(运用了however引导的状语从句)【2】（广东省茂名市第一中学2022-2023学年高三下学期5月月考英语试题）假定你是高三学生李华，下周六晚上6:00-8:00你校将在礼堂举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会。你的外籍老师Linda非常喜欢音乐，请你写一封信邀请她参加此次活动。内容包括：1.发出邀请；2.活动时间和地点；3.活动内容和意义。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节使行文流畅。DearLinda,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearLinda,OurschoolwillholdamusicalconcertnextSaturday.Knowingthatwehavegreatinterestinmusic,I’mwritingthislettertoinviteyoutoattendit.Theconcertwillbescheduledinourschoolhallfrom6:00pmto8:00pmthisFriday,lasting2hours.Duringthisconcert,notonlycanweappreciateclassicalfolksongsofChinaandwesterncountries,butwecanalsohaveachancetolistentothemusicoriginallycomposedbygiftedstudentsaswell.ItisguaranteedthatyouwillbedeeplyimpressedbythecombinationofChinesefolkmusicwithwesternmusicalinstruments.Iamsureyouwillenjoyyourselfandhavefun.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外籍老师Linda写一封信，邀请她参加下周六晚上6:00-8:00你校将在礼堂举办一场融合中西文化元素的音乐会活动。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：attend→joinin感兴趣：havegreatinterestin→showgreatinterestin欣赏：appreciate→enjoy过得愉快：enjoyyourself→haveagoodtime2.简单句变为复合句原句：Theconcertwillbescheduledinourschoolhallfrom6:00pmto8:00pmthisFriday,lasting2hours.拓展句：Theconcertwillbescheduledinourschoolhallfrom6:00pmto8:00pmthisFriday,whichwilllast2hours.【点睛】[高分句型1]Knowingthatwehavegreatinterestinmusic,I’mwritingthislettertoinviteyoutoattendit.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Duringthisconcert,notonlycanweappreciateclassicalfolksongsofChinaandwesterncountries,butwecanalsohaveachancetolistentothemusicoriginallycomposedbygiftedstudentsaswell..(运用了notonly……butalso句型、部分倒装结构和过去分词作后置定语)【3】（重庆市2022-2023学年高三下学期5月月考英语试题）假设你是明启中学高一学生李明，你在TheEveningNews这份报纸上看到一篇关于改造你所在的城市的文章，文中提到了将河边的一块空地改造成自然保护区(naturereserve)。你认为这个改造方案的提议不受年轻人欢迎，请写一封信给该报的编辑，谈谈你的看法，你的文章必须包括：1.你不赞同建自然保护区的原因;2.提出一个替代的方案并说明原因。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Deareditor,IamLiMingfromMingqiHighSchool.HereIamwritingtorespondtoyourarticleaboutestablishinganaturereservebytheriver.Actually,Idon’tthinkitpopularamongyoungpeople.Althoughanaturereservecanbebeneficialinprovidinghabitatsforwildanimalsandplantsandprotectingourenvironment,itshouldbeacknowledgedthatacitywithsuchalargepopulationcannotaffordtospareavastspacetofunctionsimplyasanaturereserve.Theremaybeamorefeasibleandbeneficialplan,whichcantakeintoaccountboththewildlivesandthecitizens.Arecreationalwetlandpark,Ibelieve,isanalternativeforyoutoconsider.Inthispark,foronething,thewildlives,especiallythosebirds,canseekshelterandthewaterqualitycanbeimproved.Foranother,thecitizens,astheyappreciatethenaturalecologyandgainrelief,canhavemoreoptionstohavevariousactivities.Toillustrate,teenagerscangobikingorhikingandthefamilywithchildrencangocamping.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiMing【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学高一学生李明，你在TheEveningNews这份报纸上看到一篇关于改造你所在的城市的文章，文中提到了将河边的一块空地改造成自然保护区(naturereserve)。你认为这个改造方案的提议不受年轻人欢迎，请写一封信给该报的编辑，谈谈你的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累建立：establish→setup考虑：takeintoaccount→takeintoconsideration各种各样的：various→avarietyof可行：feasible→possible2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：HereIamwritingtorespondtoyourarticleaboutestablishinganaturereservebytheriver.拓展句：ThereasonwhyIamwritingisthatIwouldliketorespondtoyourarticleaboutestablishinganaturereservebytheriver.【点睛】[高分句型1]Althoughanaturereservecanbebeneficialinprovidinghabitatsforwildanimalsandplantsandprotectingourenvironment,itshouldbeacknowledgedthatacitywithsuchalargepopulationcannotaffordtospareavastspacetofunctionsimplyasanaturereserve.(运用了Although引导让步状语从句)[高分句型2]Theremaybeamorefeasibleandbeneficialplan,whichcantakeintoaccountboththewildlivesandthecitizens.(运用了which引导非限制性定语