英语议论文写作指导对比分析正反观点

英语议论文写作指导对比分析正反观点第1页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

正反观点对比对同一件事情，人们常有不同的看法，即正反两种观点。在写作时，常使用一般现在时。写作格式一般是：提出问题→两种不同观点→对两种不同观点的论据（理由）逐项作对比。有时题目会要求说出自己的观点，可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由，最好不要重复前面的已谈到的理由。写作方式一般采用集中比较。在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：第2页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月正反观点对比常用句型(1)Wehavea(heated)discussionabout…我们对……进行了一次讨论。We’vehadadiscussionaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.(2)Wehavehadasurveyon…我们对……开展了一次调查。We’vehadasurveyonwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedtocarrymobilephonestoschools.(3)Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.

在这个问题上意见有分歧。(4)Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.有两种不同意见。第3页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月(5)Othershavedifferentopinions.其他人有不同看法。(6)Sixtypercentofthestudentsarefortheidea,whilefortypercentofthestudentsthinkotherwise.有60%的学生支持这个观点，然而有40%的学生则不这样认为。(7)Sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkitnecessaryto…,butfortypercentofthestudentsdon’tthinkso.60%的学生认为……是必须的，而40%的学生则不这样认为。(8)Ontheonehand,…Ontheotherhand,…一方面……，另一方面……第4页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月在对某一观点作进一步论证时，可用下列句型：(1)What’smore,…还有就是……What’smore,wecangetagoodknowledgeofthecultureandsocialcustomsofthecountrywherewestudy,aswellasimproveourEnglish.(2)Besides,…除此之外……Somestudentscannotdisciplinethemselves.Besides,it’sfartooexpensivetostudyabroad,whichisaloadtothefamily.当然在提出多个论据时，也可用First,…Second,…Third,…来列举论据。第5页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月80%studentssupportit.Theprogrammeiscreativeandunique.Itprovidesastageforyoungpeopletoshowtheirtalents.Itletsyoungpeoplegainmoreconfidencethanever.20%studentsthinkthattheprogrammemisleadstheyouthtosomedegree.Letthemfeelsuccessdoesn’tcomefromhardwork.Beingyourselfisn’tthesameasbeingdifferentfromothers.Iamforthisprogramme.Aslongasourstudyisnotdisturbed,wecanwatchit.

第6页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月80%studentssupportit.Theprogrammeiscreativeandunique.Inaddition,

itprovidesastageforyoungpeopletoshowtheirtalents,andhelpsyoungpeoplegainmoreconfidencethanever.Onthe

contrary,20%studentsthinkthattheprogrammemisleadstheyouthtosomedegree.What’sworse,theywillfeelsuccessdoesn’tcomefromhardwork.After

all,beingyourselfisn’tthesameasbeingdifferentfromothersinbehavioursorappearance.Inmy

opinion,Iamforthisprogramme.Aslongasourstudyisnotdisturbed,wecanwatchit.

第7页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Deareditor,Iamwritingtotellyouaboutmyclassmates’opinionsaboutaTVprogramme----SuperGirl.

Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.80%ofthemareforthisTVprogramme.Theyarguethatthisprogrammenotonlyprovidestheyoungwithastagetoshowtheirtalentsbutalsogivesachancetothemtobuilduptheirself-confidence.What’smore,thisprogrammeiscreativeandadvocatespersonality,whichmeetstheyouth’sneed.第8页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

Onthecontrary,20%ofthemareagainstthisprogramme.Reasonscanbelistedasfollows.Foronething,itmisleadstheyouthstosomedegree,perhapstheywillmisunderstandthattheycansucceedwithoutanyhardwork.Foranother,beingyourselfdoesn’tmeanbeingdifferentfromother’sbehaviourorappearance.However,everycoinhastwosides,thisprogrammeisnotanexception,ithasit’sownadvantagesanddisadvantages.Yours,LiMing第9页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月常见错误*拼写

1.Theiropinionaredevidedonthisprogramme.

Theiropinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.Theiropinionsaredividedonthisprogramme.第10页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月2.Itmakepeoplefeelthattheycansuccesswithoutmakeanyeffort.Itmakespeoplefeelthattheycansucceedwithoutmakinganyeffort.Itmakespeoplefeelthattheycanachievesuccesswithouthardwork.第11页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月3.Itwillmisledtheyounginsomeways.Itwillmisleadtheyounginsomeways/inaway/tosomeextent/tosomedegree.第12页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月4.Iteffectsourstudy.Itaffectsourstudy.Ithasabadeffect/influenceonourstudy.

第13页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月5.Onthecountry,somestudentagainstedtheprogramme.Onthecontrary,somestudents

areagainsttheprogramme.…,somestudentsarenotinfavourofthisprogramme.…,somestudentsdonotenjoythisprogramme.第14页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月*搭配(词性)Intheotherhands,20%studentsdon’tagreetothem.Ontheotherhand,20%ofthestudentsdon’tagreewiththem.Ontheotherhand,otherstudentshavedifferentideas.第15页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月2.Lettheyoungertofindmoreself-confident.Lettheyoung/theyouth/youngpeoplegain/buildupself-confidence.Helptheyoungbemoreself-confident.…equiptheyoungwithself-confidence.第16页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月3.Thisprogrammeisnotonlycreationbutpersonality.Thisprogrammeisnotonlycreativebutunique.Thisprogrammeiscreativeanditappealsto/advocatespersonality.第17页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月*高级(句式)Thereare80%studentssupporttheSuperGirl.80%studentssupporttheSuperGirl.Thereare80%studentswhosupporttheSuperGirl.Thereare80%studentssupportingtheSuperGirl.第18页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月2.Itprovidesthestagetoyoungpeopletoshowourtalents.Itprovidesyoungpeoplewithastagetodemonstratetheirtalents.Itprovidesastageforyoungpeopletoshowtheirtalents.(offeropportunitiesto…/givechancesto…)第19页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Deareditor,Iamwritingtotellyouaboutmyclassmates’opinionsaboutaTVprogramme----SuperGirl.Opinionsaredivided.80%ofthestudentsareinfavorofthisprogramme.Theysaythatthisprogramme,SuperGirl,appealsthatweshouldhavepersonalities.Itnotonlyoffersusastagetoshowourselves,butalsoletsusfindmoreconfidence.第20页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

Onthecontrary,otherstudentshavedifferentideas.Theyholdtheviewthatthisprogrammewillmisleadteenagersinsomeway,becausesomepeoplehaveafeelingthatwecansucceedwithoutanyhardwork.ThoughSuperGirladvocatespersonalities,itdoesn’tmeanthatthisprogrammehasnothingincommonwithothers.第21页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wecanreasonablydrawtheconclusionthateverycoinhastwosides.Inmyopinion,SuperGirlisjustlikeadouble-edgedsword.Havingweighedupbothsides,Ifindthatitsbenefitsfaroutweighitsdisadvantages.Wemustmakeproperuseofthisprogrammeforthesakeof(出于……起见)

keepingtidewithsociety.Yourstruly,LiMing第22页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：门票：entrancefeeDearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.60%的同学认为40%的同学认为1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，

会影响城市形象1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木2002年高考题范文第23页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月DearEditor,I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe'vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks(提出问题).Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60％ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefee.Theybelieveapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves.Changingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.Whatismore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.过渡句观点一论据一论据二第24页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Ontheotherhand,40％

thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkers,andtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.Theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.

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可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观点，可接下来说明自己的观点。观点二论据一论据二第25页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月对比类写作

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第26页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月★★★议论文的框架---对比观点题型（1）

要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1．

有一些人认为。。。2．

另一些人认为。。。3．

我的看法。。。

Thetopicof①-----------------（主题）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②-----------------（支持A的理由一）Whatismore,③-------------(理由二).Moreover,④---------------(理由三).

第27页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧----------------（我的观点）.Thereasonisthat⑨--------------------(原因).Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.第28页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月（2）

给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Somepeoplebelievethat①----------------（观点一）.Forexample,theythink②-----------------（举例说明）．Anditwillbringthem③---------------(为他们带来的好处).Inmyopinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一).Foranotherthing,⑤---------(反对的理由之二)．FormallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．第29页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

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第30页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

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第31页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Practiceinclass面对繁重的高中学习任务，高中生对参加学校活动有着不同的看法，请以TakingPartinSchoolActivities为题，用英文写一篇120词左右的短文，着重介绍两种不同的观点和态度，最后谈谈你个人的看法。

▲很多学生持拥护态度，认为既可以学到实践知识，又可以得到放松；

▲不少学生漠不关心，认为学生就应该学习，学校活动与学习无关，同时嘲讽积极参加学校活动的学生。标题和开头已给，不计入总词数。词数；120词左右。TakingPartinSchoolActivitiesAsforschoolactivities,studentsmainlyholdtwoviews．第32页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Mainerrors1.时态：现在的时态2.Therearemanystudentssupportit.Therearemanystudentswhosupportit.Therearemanystudentssupportingit3.要有清晰的、完整的句子的痕迹Thoseinfavorof…thinkitisgoodforus.Becauseitcanhelpusgetrelaxed.第33页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月MainerrorsThoseinfavorof…thinkitisgoodforus,

becauseitcanhelpusgetrelaxed.Thoseinfavorof…thinkitisgoodforus.Itisbecauseitcanhelpusgetrelaxed.第34页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月清晰的句子的痕迹Itcanhelpusmakemanyfriends,theywillgiveusmanyproposer.Itcanhelpusmakemanyfriends.Theywillgiveusmanyproposer.Itcanhelpusmakemanyfriends,andtheywillgiveusmanyproposer.Mainerrors第35页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

TakingPartinSchoolActivitiesAsforschoolactivities,studentsmainlyholdtwoviews.Manystudentsareveryenthusiasticaboutschoolactivitiesbecausetheythinkthatlearningfromtextbooksisnottheironlytaskandtheyshouldtakeanychancetogetsomepracticalknowledge.Besides,afterlonghours’study,theycanrelaxthemselvesbyparticipatinginschoolactivities.第36页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月However,alargegroupofstudentstakelittleinterestinthemandspendmostoftheirtimeonstudy.Theybelievethattheyshouldmakefulluseoftimetostudyandthatschoolactivitieshavelittletodowiththeirfurtherdevelopment.Thussometimestheyevenlaughatthosewhotakeanactivepartinschoolactivities.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ipreferthefirstview.Ontheonehand,wecanlearnagreatdealfromotherstudentswemeetinactivities.Furthermore,modernsocietyrequiresmanyqualitiesofyoungstudents,so“bookworms”can’tkeepupwiththetimes.requiressth.ofsb.要求某人某事第37页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

TakingPartinSchoolActivitiesAsforschoolactivities,studentsmainlyholdtwoviews.Somestudentsareinclinedto

approveofit.Theybelievethatbytakingpartinschoolactivities,studentscannotonlylearnsomepracticalknowledge,butalsorelaxthemselves.

However,otherspaylittleattentiontoit.Obviously,theythinkstudyisstudents’onlytask.Whatthismeansisthatschoolactivitieshavenothingtodowithstudy.Besides,theysneeratthosewhotakepartinitactively.第38页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月AsforasIamconcerned,theformeropinionholdsmoreweight.Ontopoftheabove-mentionedpositiveeffectsitmightbringabout,theschoolactivitiesalsoenrichourschoollifeandhelpustounderstandeachotherbetter.So,we

cannot

emphasizetheimportanceoftakingpartinschoolactivitiesenough.第39页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

如何把句子写得丰富些？很多学生持拥护态度，认为既可以学到实践知识，又可以得到放松。Somestudentsareinclinedto

approveofit.Theybelievethatbytakingpartinschoolactivities,studentscannotonlylearnsomepracticalknowledge,butalsorelaxthemselves.Manystudentsareveryenthusiasticaboutschoolactivitiesbecausetheythinkthatlearningfromtextbooksisnottheironlytaskandtheyshouldtakeanychancetogetsomepracticalknowledge.Besides,afterlonghours’study,theycanrelaxthemselvesbyparticipatinginschoolactivities.第40页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Homework根据教育部通知，从2007年9月1日起，中小学生每天要跳校园集体舞。通知发出后，在社会上引起了热烈的讨论。假如你是李华，请根据下表提供的内容给“ChinaDaily”编辑写一封信反映讨论情况，并提出自己的看法和理由。注意：(1)词数100-120；

(2)开头已写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：集体舞groupdancing

社交能力sociability第41页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月赞成1．能锻炼身体：丰富校园生活。2．增进学生之间耳相了解。3．培养社交能力，是一种健康的交流方式。反对1．在农村学校无法实施，教师没有能力教，

也没有合适的地方。2．校园集体舞不能达到锻炼身体的目的，只

是一种表演。你的看法…．Deareditor,TheDepartmentofEducationannounced…第42页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月能锻炼身体，丰富校园生活begoodforhealthandcanenrichourschoollife培养社交能力improvetheirsociability.不能达到锻炼身体的目的can'thelpstudentstokeepfit

第43页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月DearEditor,TheDepartmentofEducationannounced

inJune,2007thatfromSept.1,2007primaryandsecondaryschoolstudentswillhavedanceclass,whichhasledtoaheateddebate.Somepeoplethinkgroupdancingisgoodforhealthandcanenrichourschoollife.Ithelpsstudentsunderstandeachotherbetter.Alsoitcanhelpstudentsimprovetheirsociability.Itisahealthymeansofcommunication.第44页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月

Butotherpeopleholdtheoppositeview.Theyfeelthatinthecountryside,theteachersdon'thaveenoughexperienceinteachingdancingandalsothereisn'tenoughroomforstudentstolearndancing.Lastbutnotleast,groupdancingisjustaformoraperformance,whichcan'thelpstudentstokeepfit.

Astome,groupdancingmayleadtoanincreaseofboysandgirlsfallinginlove(witheachother)oncetheyhavemorechancesforphysicalinteraction.Yours,LiHua第45页，课件共49页，创作于2023年2月Homework假设你是林明。你班最近就“大学生是否应该经济独立”的话题展开了讨论，大家发表了不同看法。请你根据以下所给内容，写一封信给《21世纪英语》报高中生版反映讨论情况。讨论情况如下：

1．35％的同学认为：通过打工可以获得工作经验，了解社会；同时还可以体会到父母挣钱的不易，避免乱花钱的不良习气。

2．50％的同学认为：通过打工来付学费会影响自己的学习，自己可以通过好好学习来报答爹娘，回报社会。