初二英语写作(教学课件)

初三英语在线课程上课老师：蔡老师上课时间：18：45-19：45初三英语寒假课程第二讲：作文写作精讲初三英语在线课程初三英语寒假课程第二讲：作文写作精讲作文写作的字、词、句、段、篇

字：工整、清楚；词：不拼写错误；能适当掌握高级词汇；句：不出现语法错误；句子要逐渐使用复杂的从句句型，为文章添彩；段：段落内容有逻辑性；篇：合理安排文章布局；要有逻辑与联接；作文写作的字、词、句、段、篇

字：工整、清楚；绝对好用的替换词Good–wonderful,excellent,gorgeous,fabulous,amazing,magnificent;Important–significant,essential,necessary,carryalotofweight;But—However,So—therefore,hence,绝对好用的替换词Good–wonderful,excelPrimarily,Firstly,oneofthemostessentialreasons,tostressfirstSecondly,abovefromthefirstpoint,InadditionThirdly,Lastbutnoleast,Inconclusion,tomakeaconclusion,tosummarize…Primarily,Firstly,oneofthe举例Forexample—Forinstance,totake….asanexample,tostateafactasanvividexample,举例Forexample—经典句型：1、It’ssaidthat…2、Nomatterwhat/which/who/where/when/whose+从句3、Itis/was+被强调部分+that(who)+剩余部分经典句型：1、It’ssaidthat…4、Ithappened(chanced)that+从句=sb.Happened/chancedtodosth.=sb.didsthbychance5、由as引导的非限制性定句从句/由where,when引导的定语从句4、Ithappened(chanced)that+6、It+谓语+时间段+before+主语+谓语(before引导的是时间状语从句）7、When/Solongas/Aslongas/Once+从句，+主句（从句也可放在主句之后）6、It+谓语+时间段+before+主语+谓语(b8、Nosooner+had+主语+done…than+主语+did9、倍数表达句型倍数+morethan,倍数+asmuchas..10、形容词、副词、名词+as/though+主语+谓语+主句8、Nosooner+had+主语+done…th句式多变化要抓住英语高考作文得高分的”关键点”,就需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词汇这两道关。（1）句式要有变化。改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地以主语开头，接着是谓语，宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语放在句首，或用分词作状语等。句式多变化要抓住英语高考作文得高分的”关键点”,就需要把好增[原文]Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.[修正]

Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.[原文]Wemetattheschoolgate[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.[修正]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’the(2)在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语从句等。①强调句[原文]MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.Ithadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.[修正]MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.(2)在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如到②由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于中文中的“所……”，有很强的概括，如：[原文]Wehadtostandheretocatchoffender.[修正]Whatwehadtodowas(to)stand

there,tryingtocatchtheoffender.初二英语写作(教学ppt课件)③由with或without引导的短语。如：

Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.④分词短语．如：Satisfiedwiththeresult,hedicidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.③由with或without引导的短语。如：⑤倒装句Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.⑥省略句Ifso,victorywillbeours.Youcanmakesomechangeswherevernecessary.⑤倒装句⑦对比，这在中文中也是常使用的方法．如Failureisnotacrime,butfailuretolearnfromfailureis.WhenIplay,Ifeelexcited,andafteritIfeelrelaxed.⑦对比，这在中文中也是常使用的方法．如(3)通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。[原文]Hestoppedusanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.[修正]Hestoppedusanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.(3)通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。[原文]Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.[修正]Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesandplayingchess.[原文]Wehadashortrest.Then历年上海中考题分析历年上海中考题分析2007年上海市中考写作题：Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“AStoryaboutMyParent(s)”.(以“爸爸/妈妈的故事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）2007年上海市中考写作题：我的父亲母亲先中文构思尽量避免复杂的词句将中文翻译成英文加入适当的连词，组成文章注意全文用过去式写作我的父亲母亲先中文构思关于职业的单词scientist科学家detective侦探fisherman渔夫firefighter消防员journalist新闻记者lawyer律师barber理发师singer歌手engineer工程师关于职业的单词scientist科学家worker工人painter画家writer/author作家businessman商人pilot飞行员dentist牙医nurse护士accountant会计waiter/waitess服务员librarian图书管理员surgeon外科医生worker工人pharmacist药剂师anesthetist麻醉师manager经理governor政府官员President总统policeman警察policewoman女警察waiter服务员waitress女服务员driver司机，驾驶员pharmacist药剂师真题举例1）AStoryaboutMyParent;2)Inmum’sfamily,thereweresevenpeople:mum’sparents,mum’stwobrothersandtwosistersandmum.Whenmumwasyoung,herfatherwasadoctorinthesmallvillageandhermotherwasjustaworker;3)Atthattime,forlackofTVandcomputer,everydayafterschoolmumalongwithherbrothersandsisterswouldgohometohelptheirmotherwiththehousework.Forexample,theyhelpedtomakesupperorwashclothes.Mumtoldmethatthoughthelifeatthattimewasveryhard,shefelthappy.真题举例1）AStoryaboutMyParent;Mymumwasborninasmallvillage.Inherfamily,thereweresevenpeople:mum’sparents,mum’stwobrothersandtwosistersandmum.Whenmumwasyoung,herfatherwasadoctorinthesmallvillageandhermotherwasjustaworker.Atthattime,forlackofTVandcomputer,everydayafterschoolmumalongwithherbrothersandsisterswouldgohometohelpedtheirmotherwiththehousework.Forexample,theyhelptomakesupperorwashclothes.Mumtoldmethatthoughthelifeatthattimewasveryhard,shefelthappy.Mymumwasborninasmallvil比较型作文写作常用词组:PreferAtoBIshowmystrongpreferencetoA.ComparedwithA,IshedmorelightonB.IncomparisonwithA,IfindthatBismore..比较型作文写作文章层次1、开启段落，指出自己的选择结果。2、列出原因，将一些可比项进行比较。横向与纵向。3、总结文章层次1、开启段落，指出自己的选择结果。开启段落Infacingthehighschoolentranceexamination,wehavetomakechoicesaboutwhichschooltoattend.Betweenthetwochoices,Iwillchoose…..Thereasonforthatisareasfollowing.开启段落学会对比南方大学:学费8000/年招生20人无优惠政策北方大学:学费5000/年招生10人加20分优惠选择南方：1、虽然学费贵，但是招生人数比北方的多；2、自己是南方人，适合南方的生活，离家近。选择北方：1、学费便宜；2、有加分政策；3、可以体验不同的学习生活，学会独立。学会对比南方大学:学费8000/年招生20人无优惠政策如何转折Though

thetuitionishigherinthesouthernUniversity,yet

Ipreferthewaysoflivinghereinthesouth.TheNorthernUniversityoffersanadditional20scores.However,Istillhaveastronginclinationto

theSouthernUniversity.如何转折Thoughthetuitionishigh如何结尾Concerningthereasonsabove,Iwouldnothesitatetochoose….Inconclusion,concerningtheconvenience,thetuitionandtheotherreasons,Iwillchoose..Inall,toconclude,toputallthereasontogether,如何结尾Concerningthereasonsabo上海2002年的中考英语作文根据英文提示，以“我的心爱之物”为题写话，不少于50个词。内容必须包括英文提示中的3项要求，标点符号不占格：题目：MyFavoriteThing(s)Whatthething(s)is(are)W