英语四级写作课件

大学英语四级写作备考讲座WritingforCET4..大学英语四级写作备考讲座WritingforCET4..1提纲（Outline)1、四级评分原则和标准(PrinciplesandStandards)2、常见错误(Mistakes)3、应对策略(Strategies)..提纲（Outline)1、四级评分原则和标准(Princip2评分原则1、检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级教学要求。2、采用总体评分（GlobalScoring)方法阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（rewardscores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3、从内容和语言两方面对作文进行综合判断。作文应表达题目所规定的内容。评分要考虑文章是否切题，是否清楚而合适地表达思想，语言错误是否造成理解障碍。..评分原则1、检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级教学要3评分标准（按百分制评判）1、满分15分2、阅卷标准分五等：2分，5分，8分，11分，14分3、档次评分标准

2分，5分，8分，11分，14分..评分标准（按百分制评判）1、满分15分..42分—一塌糊涂条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。Nowdays,SocialappearedmoremorefreeAdmissionstomuseums.it’sinordertopeoplewastedmoney.Inadition,richinpeople’slifeandincreasemoreknowldegesButsomepeoplethoughtfreeAdimssionstomuseumshavebroughtmuchproblems.Inhand,aplentyofpeoplevisited…..2分—一塌糊涂条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均55分—糊里糊涂基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重语言错误。Inordertoenrichthecultureofpeople,moreandmoremusuemswereprovidedfreeadmissions.Somebodythoughtitwouldtakesomeproblemslikethat.Thefirst,becauseoffreeadmissionsofMuseumswereattractedalargenumbersofpeoplewhointerestedinallaroundtheworld.Andthosewhotakepartineffectedthetrafficcrowedaroundthemuseums,eventhoughaffectedpeoplewholiveinnexttothemuseumlife…..5分—糊里糊涂基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重68分—马马虎虎基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，有一些是严重错误。Thereisaninterestingandinstractivepicturewhichgoeslikethis:Moreandmoremuseumsarefreeforpeople.Theywantmorepeoplegotomuseums.Butsomepeoplearguethatitmakesometroubleforfreeforpeople.Thereasonistheeconomyofthemuseumswouldbeworsethanbefore.Worstofall,itmaytakeamessformorepeoplecometothemuseums.…..8分—马马虎虎基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强711分—清清楚楚切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误Nowmoreandmoremuseumsarefreewithoutchargetothepublic.Doesthatmakeanysence?Freeadmissiontomusuemshelpsussavemoney,butitalsoencouragesustogotomuseumstolearnsomethingelseandgetmoreknowledge.Thiscontributestoimprovethelivinglevelofthepublic.Itcancertainlyletusknowmoreaboutourcountryandtheworld,whichhasagoodeffectonourdevelopment.Everycoinhastwosides.Itcanalsobringsomeproblems.Forexample,…..11分—清清楚楚切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错814分—漂漂亮亮切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误。ExampleFreeAdmissiontoMuseums?越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放,目的是……有人认为这样做会带来一些问题在我看来……..14分—漂漂亮亮切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无9Nowadays,moreandmoremuseumsareopentothepublicforfree.Freeadmissionstomuseumswillmotivatepeople’sinterestsinhistory,artsandscience.Inthisway,museumscanprovidepeoplewitheasieraccesstoknowledge,whichisofvitalimportanceforthewholenation...Nowadays,moreandmore10

However,somepeopleholdthatfreeadmissionstomuseumscanbringaboutmanyproblems.Sinceanybodycanenteramuseumwithoutpaying,themuseumcanbeovercrowdedanditwillbeadifficultjobformuseumstomaintaintheircollections.Besides,museumswillfacefinancialproblemssincetheycan’tmakeprofitsfromtheadmissionfee.Duetothedecreaseinprofits,museumshavelessmotivationtoup-datetheircollectionsandout-of-datemuseumscan’tavoidthefatetocloseupinthelongrun...However,somepeopleho11

Inmyopinion,freeadmissionstomuseumsaregoodforthepublic,butontheotherhandtheymayposeproblemstothemuseummanagement.Governmentsshouldprovidehelptomuseumsandguidethemtoservethepublicbetter...Inmyopinion,freead12常见错误1、篇章：引子过长，结构混乱2、句子结构：缺乏基本的句子意识，只有词汇的堆砌3、词汇：拼写、动词时态、名词单复数、形容词副词比较级别、固定搭配、词汇的选择等方面错误..常见错误1、篇章：引子过长，结构混乱..13应对策略1、篇章：开门见山，直奔主题（紧扣所给提纲写出主题句）。使用合适的方法展开主题句（常用方法如：列举，因果，举例等）2、句子结构：适当使用从句、倒装句、非谓语动词、插入语，从而使文章句子结构稍微复杂而富于变化。3、词汇：尽量使用与主题相关的一些重要词汇，避开用得过于泛滥的词汇。..应对策略1、篇章：开门见山，直奔主题（紧扣所给提纲写出主题句144.丰富多变.丰富多变主要体现在词汇和句型两方面。同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃至一篇文章中最好不要重复出现，应尽量使用同、近义词替换(无法替换的关键词除外)。例如：think可以替换为reckon,assume,argue等词。此外，句型也应富于变化，不要拘泥于“主谓宾”句型，可以使用“主系表”、过去分词和现在分词短语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句型。...4.丰富多变.丰富多变主要体现在词汇和句型两方面。同一词语在155.长短互现。四级作文如果量化成句数，只需写十句左右；六级只需12句左右。全文应以短句为主，长短句相结合。所谓短句是指十个词左右的句子，不能全篇都是五六个词的短句。同时，全文应有一定数量的长句，一般15~20词即可。精炼的短句可以放在段首表示强调；复杂的长句可以进行具体的论证、举例或描述。..5.长短互现。四级作文如果量化成句数，只需写十句左右；六级只16常用从句1、Which引导的非限定性定语从句2、状语从句（结果、原因、时间、比较）So…that…;because/since;before/after,not…until…;while/whereas3、名词性从句（同位语从句、宾语从句）..常用从句1、Which引导的非限定性定语从句..17倒装、非谓语动词和插入语的使用1、notonly…butalso…Onlyby…can…Notuntil…do…2、分词做状语，动名词做主语或宾语3、适当插入一些副词或介词短语等Thismeasure,undoubtedly(inmyopinion),willeliminatethewasteofwater...倒装、非谓语动词和插入语的使用1、notonly…but18英语四六级作文八种常用句型..英语四六级作文八种常用句型..19一.原因

1.Anumberoffactorsmightcontributeto(leadto)(accountfor)thephenomenon(problem).2.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.3.Thefactorsthatcontributetothissituationinclude...4.Thechangein...largelyresultsfromthefactthat...5.Oneofthemostcommonfactors(causes)isthat...6.Anothercontributingfactor(cause)is...7.Perhapstheprimaryfactoristhat…8.Butthefundamentalcauseisthat..一.原因..20二.比较

1.Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.2.TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.3.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.4.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.5.AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.6.AandBdifferinseveralways.7.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.8.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow...二.比较..21三.批驳1)Itistruethat...,butonevitalpointisbeingleftout.2)Somepeoplesay...,butitdoesnotholdwater.3)Manyofushavebeenundertheillusionthat...4)Acloseexaminationwouldrevealhowridiculousthestatementis.5)Itmakesnosensetoarguefor...6)Toomuchstressplacedon...mayleadto...7)Suchastatementmainlyrestsontheassumptionthat...8)Contrarytowhatiswidelyaccepted,Imaintainthat.....三.批驳1)Itistruethat...,but22四.后果1.Itmaygiverisetoahostofproblems.2.Theimmediateresultitproducesis...3.Itwillexerciseaprofoundinfluenceupon...4.Itsconsequencecanbesogreatthat.....四.后果1.Itmaygiverisetoa23五.举例1)Agoodcaseinpointis...2)Asanillustration,wemaytake...3)Suchexamplesmightbegiveneasily.4)...isoftencitedasanexample...五.举例1)Agoodcaseinpointi24六.证明1)Noonecandenythefactthat...2)Theideaishardlysupportedbyfacts.3)Unfortunately,noneoftheavailabledatashows...4)Recentstudiesindicatethat...5)Thereissufficientevidencetoshowthat...6)Accordingtostatisticsprovedby...,itcanbeseenthat.....六.证明1)Noonecandenythefac25七.开篇1)Manynationshavebeenfacedwiththeproblemof...2)Recentlytheproblemhasbeenbroughtintofocus.3)Recentlythephenomenonhasbecomeaheatedtopic.4)Recentlytheissuehasarousedgreatconcernamong...5)Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover...6)Neverinourhistoryhastheide