高考英语书面表达课件

书面表达1.书面表达1.“考试大纲”对写作的要求明确规定要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能：（1）（2）在一定的语境中,

准确使用

语法

和词汇；

使用一定的句型、词汇，

清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。

2.“考试大纲”对写作的要求明确规定在一定的语境中,准确使用书面表达答题步骤?·认真审题，明确要求；----列提纲·分析要点，遣词造句；----翻译造句·扩展成文，认真检查。

-----过渡词（注意时态、人称等）Tips3.书面表达答题步骤?·认真审题，明确要求；----列提纲（注一、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点;二、语言基础知识薄弱，语法和拼写错误较多;1．句子结构错误

①双谓语现象②句子结构混乱

2．动词使用错误

①时态错误②语态错误③滥用be动词

3．名词单复数错误

4.不规则动词及常用词拼写错误

5.汉语式英语三、词义模糊，用词不够准;四、行文清晰，句子与句子间缺乏衔接.尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误Tips4.一、审题不够仔细，遗漏要点;尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误Ti1.

卷面整洁,书写漂亮

；

2.用词造句，扬长避短；3.

要点写全,亮点突出；4.结构完整，脉络清晰

作文阅卷时间紧，且采用globalscoring（整体评分）方法，因此阅卷老师不可能慢悠悠地欣赏你的大作。首先文章结构要完整合理。句与句、段与段之间运用恰当的过渡词。因此，应适当运用关键词组、套句，以吸引阅卷老师的“眼球”。

英语作文如何得高分？

切实加强对写作的总结，积累一些非常地道、非常具有表现力的优美的词组和句型并有意识地用于自己的习作中。

Tips5.1.卷面整洁,书写漂亮

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2.用词造句，扬长避短；列举要点常用词:

first(ly),second,third,finally,lastbutnotleast,inthefirstplace,firstofall,tostartwith,foronething,foranother增加论点:

what’smore,furthermore,also,in

additiontothis/that,additionally,besides,apartfromthis/that,nottomentionthefactthat(aswellas)常用过渡词6.列举要点常用词:firs陈述相对或相反观点:

However,Ontheotherhand,But,Nevertheless,Despite,Inspiteof,Regardlessof,其它过渡词:Inotherwords,Thanksto,Owingto,Dueto,As/Solongas,Onconditionthat,Asaresult,Therefore,Consequently,Surely,Withoutanydoubt,Asisknowntoall,Totellthetruth,Tobehonest,Honestlyspeaking,Tospeakfrankly,Importantly,Intermsofsth.总结语:Aboveall,Inconclusion,Inshort,Inaword,Inmyopinion,Personally,7.陈述相对或相反观点:Ho半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型

Inmyopinion,…Personally,（onlyinthiswaycanwe…）Takingeverythingintoaccount,Ithink…Asispreviouslystated,…Inconclusion,…Onthewhole,…Inaword,AsfarasIamconcerned,……I’moftheopinionthat…Allthingsconsidered,…8.半开放式书面表达结尾常用句型Inmyopinion,高考英语书面表达之话题训练

9.高考英语书面表达9.☆

很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看法。请根据下面表格提示，以HomestayService

为题写一篇短文，并发表你自己的观点。10.☆很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持

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现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编辑写一封信发表观点。11.☆现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请你根据下列表格所给信息给

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人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的观点,并表达自己的看法.(2005年江西高考)12.☆人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.请你用英语

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假如你是李华,是某农村中学的学生.你校打算在教室里安装空调,让学生讨论.请根据下表中讨论的结果,给校英语报刊投稿,并表明你的观点.13.☆假如你是李华,是某农村中学的学生.你校打算一.书面表达(满分30分)

三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论.讨论的题目是:学习英语要不要从儿童开始?请你根据下表中的提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下讨论的情况.14.一.书面表达(满分30分)14.Para1Para2Para3Para4Opinions/adviceAdvantages/approvalDisadvantages/objectionGeneralintroductionThestructureofthiskindofcomposition15.Para1Opinions/adviceAdvantage很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不同的看法。请根据下面表格提示,以HomestayService

为题写一篇短文,并发表你自己的观点。①②______________④③16.很多初到国外的中国学生都选择了家庭寄宿。对此，不同的人持有不Studyingabroadhasbeenpopularinrecentyears.

However,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.GeneralintroductionPara.117.Studyingabroadhasbeenp

AdvantagesSomepeoplethinkthatstudentsshouldstudyabroadifpossible.To

start

with,itisgoodfortheirEnglishimprovement,especiallytheycanbecomefluentinspokenEnglish.Para.2

Finally,

theydon’tworryabouttheirfoodandhousing.

Inaddition,theywillhaveabetterunderstandingofculturesandcustomsofthecountry.18.AdvantagesSomepeop

Disadvantages

Ontheotherhand,otherpeople

holdtheopinionthattherearesomedisadvantages.

Theythinkthestudentsaren’taccustomedtothefoodofferedbythehomestayfamily.

Andthecostoflivingishigher.Para.3

What’sworse,therewillbesomelimitstotheirlife.19.DisadvantagesOnthe

OpinionsoradviceInmyopinion,itisgoodforthestudentstostudyabroad.Whilestudyingabroad,theycanbroadentheirknowledge.SoIhopetherearemoreandmorestudentsstudying

abroad.Para.420.OpinionsoradviceOntheotherhand,otherpeopleholdtheopinionthattherearesomedisadvantages.Theythinkthestudentsaren’taccustomedtothefoodofferedbythehomestayfamily.Andthecostoflivingishigher.What’sworse,therewillbesomelimitstotheirlife.

Studyingabroadhasbeenpopularinrecentyears.Butpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeoplethinkthatstudentsshouldstudyabroadifpossible.To

start

with,itisgoodfortheirEnglishimprovement,especiallytheycanbecomefluentinspokenEnglish.Inaddition,theywillhaveabetterunderstandingofculturesandcustomsofthecountry.Finally,theydon’tworryabouttheirfoodandhousing.Inmyopinion,itisgoodforthestudentstostudyabroad.Whilestudyingabroad,theycanbroadentheirknowledge.SoIhopetherearemoreandmorestudentsstudying

abroad①②④③21.Ontheotherhand,otheStudyingAbroadStudyingabroadhasbeenpopularinrecentyears.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.

Somepeople

thinkthatstudentsshouldstudyabroadifpossible._____________________________________________________________________________

Ontheotherhand,otherpeople

holdtheopinionthattherearesomedisadvantages._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theythink…Besides,/what’smore/furthermore/moreover/…To

start

with…

In

addition…

Finally…Personally,/Inmyopinion/Ithink,…①②④③22.StudyingAbroadTheythink…Besi

现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请你根据下列表格所给信息给报社编辑写一封信发表观点。①②④③23.现在越来越多的人购买小汽车，请你根据下列表格所给信息给Nowadaysinourcity,moreandmorepeopleowncars.Ithinktherearegoodreasonsforowningacar.

First,withacarapersoncangetaroundfreely,withoutspendingalotoftime.

Second,acariscomfortabletotravelin.

Finally,itissafetodriveacarthancycle.

HoweverIamafraidmoreandmorecarswillcauseairpollution.Whatisworse,moretrafficjamsandaccidentsarehappeningeveryday.

Personally,Ihopethegovernmentshouldcontrolthenumberofthecarstoletushaveaclean,quietenvironment.

①②④③24.Nowadaysinourcity,m

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人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的观点,并表达自己的看法.(2005年江西高考)①②④③25.☆人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见.请你用英语

假如你是李华,是某农村中学的学生.你校打算在教室里安装空调,让学生讨论.请根据下表中讨论的结果,给校英语报刊投稿,并表明你的观点.Homework①②_________④③26.假如你是李一.书面表达(满分30分)

三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论.讨论的题目是:学习英语要不要从儿童开始?请你根据下表中的提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下讨论的情况.27.一.书面表达(满分30分)27.注意:1.文章的起始句已给出

2.词数:120左右(不包括已给出的起始句);3.参考词汇:基础foundation汉语拼音ChinesepinyinThestudentsofclass3hadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood.28.注意:1.文章的起始句已给出28.

SomeofthemthinkthatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood.First,

littleboysandgirlshaveaverygoodmemory,andtheycanlearnalotofEnglishwordsbyheart.What’smore,

thiswillhelpthemlayasolidfoundationfortheirfutureEnglishlearning.

Butsomeotherstudentsdon’tagree.

Theydon’tthinkthatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood.Tobeginwith,

youngchildrenhavetolearnChinesepinyinatschool.Next,

IftheystudyChinesepinyinandEnglishatthesametime,itwillbeveryeasyforthemtomixthemup.Inaddition,thiswilldoalotofharmnotonlytotheirChineselearningbutalsototheirfutureEnglishlearning.

Inshort,

thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.29.SomeofthemthinkthatEn书面表达练习作为中学生，你肯定经历过多次考试，体验过成功，也遭遇过失败。请你根据下面的提示内容，简要概述中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的观点。①②____________③Practice30.书面表达练习①②____________③Practice331.31.Wemiddleschoolstudentshavemanytestsorexams.

Wehavebothachievedsuccessandsufferedfromfailure.

Differentstudentstakedifferentattitudestowardsfailure.

Somefallinlowspiritswhentheydon’tdowellintheexams.

Theyoftenloseheartandnolongerstudyashardasbefore.But

moststudentstakeanactiveattitudestowardsfailure.Practice32.WemiddleschoolstudentsTheyencouragethemselvestobeself-confident.Theyfindoutandanalyzethecausessothattheywillnolongermakesimilarmistakes.

Iagreewiththosewithactiveattitudes.

Aswe

allknow,failureisthemotherofsuccess.Evengreatmenmayhavefailedmanytimesbeforetheysucceeded.

Sowemustdealwithourfailurecorrectly.Practice33.TheyencouragethemselvestobThepeople’slivelihood

34.Thepeople’slivelihood34.Writingmaking

人们一直面临着上学难、看病难、买房难的问题。如：大部分人都负债买房。今年政府将更加重视民生。教育、医疗、住房，就业等状况将会得到改善。如：义务教育免费、减轻农民负担、控制房价、扩大就业等,让人民群众持续地得到实惠。请根据以上所述写篇短文，并简要发表自己的感想。1.词数：120左右。2.参考词汇：民生thepeople’slivelihood

义务教育compulsoryeducation①②_____________③35.Writingmaking人们一直面临着上学OnepossibleversionNowadays,mostpeoplecannotaffordtobuyahouse,togotoschoolortoseeadoctor.Asweallknow,mostpeopleareindebtforahouse.Thisyear,thegovernmentarepayingmuchmoreattentiontothepeople’slivelihood.Alotofmeasureswillbetakentoimproveit.Theconditionsofeducation,medicalservices,housingandemploymentwillbegreatlyimproved.Forexample,thegovernmentwillprovidefreecompulsoryeducation.Also,thefarmers’burdenissurelygoingtobelightened.Inadditiontothis,thepricesofthehousesaretobecontrolled.Moreover,thegovernmentwillcreatemanymorechancesforjobs.Asispreviouslystated,wecanseethatChinaisgettingricherandstronger,andpeople’slifewillbegettingbetterandbetter.Personally,Ithinkweshouldstudyhardertomakecontributionstoourcountry.①②③36.Onepossibleversion①②③36.

Nowadays,mostpeoplecannotaffordtobuyahouse,togotoschoolortoseeadoctor.Asweallknow,mostpeopleareindebtforahouse.Thisyear,thegovernmentarepayingmuchmoreattentiontothepeople’slivelihood.Alotofmeasureswillbetakentoimproveit.Theconditionsofeducation,medicalservices,housingandemploymentwillbegreatlyimproved.Forexample,thegovernmentwillprovidefreecompulsoryeducation.Also,thefarmers’burdenissurelygoingtobelightened.Inadditiontothis,thepricesofthehousesaretobecontrolled.Moreover,thegovernmentwillcreatemanymorechancesforjobs.

Asispreviouslystated,wecanseethatChinaisgettingricherandstronger,andpeople’slifewillbegettingbetterandbetter.Personally,Ithinkweshouldstudyhardertomakecontributionstoourcountry.过渡词①②③37.过渡词①②③37.

目前，‘民生’问题受到空前关注。为保障民生，改善民生，政府将采取一系列措施。请根据下面漫画写一篇短文，并简要发表自己的感想。注意:1.恰当表达图画含义,要有适当发挥.2.词数：120左右；参考词汇：保障ensurevt完善perfectvt

养老金

pension

n医保

Medicare

n

38.目前，‘民生’问题受到空前关注。为保障民生，改善民生，如何看图写作？·仔细看图列出要点；·选准词句恰当表达；·紧扣主题适当发挥。·连句成篇认真检查

（理解图画所表达的含义）39.如何看图写作？·仔细看图列出要点；（理解图画所表达的PairworkWorkinpairsandeachpairmustmakeoneortwosentencesaccordingtothepicture.

123440.PairworkOnepossiblesentenceThegovernmentwillprovidepension,Medicareandtrainingforjobs.41.OnepossiblesentenceThegoverPossiblesentencesTopeople’sdelight,variouslawsaretobeperfected.Somelegalservicecenterswillbesetuptoprotectpeople’srights.42.PossiblesentencesTopeople’sOnepossiblesentenceTomakesurethatpeoplecanlivesafelyandpeacefully,thegovernmentwillmakegreatefforts.43.OnepossiblesentenceTomakesOnepossiblesentenceThegovernmentwilltryitsbesttostopwaterandairpollution,sopeoplecanenjoycleanwaterandfreshair.44.OnepossiblesentenceThegoverNeverbeforehasthepeople’slivelihoodbeencaredaboutasitistoday.Toensureandimprovethepeople’slivelihood,thegovernmentistakingaseriesofmeasures.Asisshowninthepictures,thegovernmentwillprovidepension,Medicareandtrainingforjobs.Topeople’sdelight,variouslawsaretobeperfected.Moreover,somelegalservicecenterswillbesetuptoprotectpeople’srights.What’smore,tomakesurethatpeoplecanlivesafelyandpeacefully,thegovernmentwillmakegreatefforts.Bytheway,thegovernmentwilltryitsbesttostopwaterandairpollution,sopeoplecanenjoycleanwaterandfreshair.Personallythepeopleinourco