2023年实用的商务英语作文集合篇

2023年实用的商务英语作文集合篇商务英语作文篇1

这部分写作题型对大多数中国考生来说比较新奇，但是，无论求学还是工作，这是更接近实际的商务写作形式。图表描述试题要求考生在25-30分钟内完成120个单词量左右的写作。图表描述从考题内容上来看，好像考试赐予考生肯定的写作自由度，但是，考生假如不驾驭必要的图表描述写作要领，会感到无所适从，不知如何着手答题。

在BEC考试中，试题都为了考査和测试考生的识读、理解视觉信息的实力。BECHigherWritingTest第一部分试题旨在测试考生是否具有把视觉信息转化为书面文字表达的实力。考生在规定的时间内做好这种试题，除了必要的语言表达实力外，还必需驾驭把图表转换成文字表述的技巧和要领。

做好这部分考题，首先要理解题目的背景语言资料和视觉资料。背景语言资料往往特别简洁，通常是协作视觉资料而给出的必要的简要文字说明。严格来说，这种文字说明应当是视觉信息的一部分，因为一个图表或图示没有文字说明，就会毫无意义。因此，把握好题目的视觉信息是做好这部分考题的关键。对一个视觉信息，从不同的角度可进行多种分析，得出多种相关结论，限于答题宇数的要求，通常写作题目中会明确指定一到两个分析方向，但也只是供应了分析的方向，没有详细的分析细微环节，更没有分析结论。

对多数中国考生来说，由于习惯于宏观分析，由于汉语语汇丰富，由于很多词汇释义笼统简单产生歧义，由于大都习惯于先用汉语表述再把汉语转译成英语，而很少运用直观的视觉手段去表达思想，因而读图对中国考生来说是比较生疏的难题，更不用说依据图表进行分析，干脆用英语表述并得出结论。本单元就视觉信息可能出现的种类以及相应的分析和结论做出举例和解说，希望考生能够熟识这些图形，驾驭解答考题的方法和步骤，正确分析图表，用英语进行表述并得出结论。

商务英语作文篇2

文体介绍

人员出访，经常须要事先与要见面的人或公司进行预约。这类预约e-mail较易写，只要做到清晰、简洁、礼貌就行。它一般包括下列内容：

（1）恳求约会并说明缘由。

（2）建议准确的约会时间和地点等。假如你的时间比较充裕，预约时可给出你可接受的时间由对方确定。

（3）请对方答复并进行确认。

回复这类电子邮件可分为接受和拒绝两种。接受的内容一般有：表明来信收悉；表示接受；重述详细时间、地点等；表达希望会见或感谢的心情。拒绝的内容一般包括：表明来信收悉；说明拒绝的缘由；致歉。

当要变更预约时，应说明变更的`缘由，同时致歉。

好用范例

（1）

subject:requestforanappointment

dearmr。smith

iamscheduledtovisittheu。s。onbusinessattheendofthismonth，andwishtocallonyouatyourofficeonthatoccasion。

iwillbearrivinginwashingtononoraroundaugust20andstayingthereforaboutaweek。itwouldbeverymuchappreciatedifyouwouldkindlyarrangetomeetwithmeeitheronaugust22or23，whicheverisconvenientforyou。ifneitherisconvenient，couldyoupleasesuggestanalternativedatebyreturne-mail。

thankyouinadvanceforyourkindcooperation。iamlookingforwardtomeetingyouinwashingtonsoon!

sincerelyyours，

lilei

guangzhoutradingcompany

主题：恳求约见

敬爱的史密斯先生：

我预定这个月底出差赴美，希望届时能到贵公司访问你。

我预料在8月20日或其前后抵达华盛顿，大约停留1周。若便利的话，望你能挤出时间在8月22或23日与我见面，我将非常感谢。假如这两天都不行，请以电子邮件回复并告知其他日期。

先在此感谢你的大力帮助，期盼不久在华盛顿与你见面！

你真诚的

李蕾

广州贸易公司

（2）

subject:urgent-needtochangeappointment

dearmr。zhang，

withregardtoourappointmenttovisityourchina’sfactoryonaugust2，iregretthatimustaskyoutochangethedatetoaugust3duetoanunexpectedmatterthatrequiresmypersonalattention。

i’mawfullysorryforthislast-minuterequest，butihopeyouwillbeabletomeetwithmeonaugust3ataround10:00am。ifyouarenotavailable，willyoupleaseletmeknowbye-mailasap?

hopethiswillnotcauseyoutoomuchinconvenience。thankyou。

商务英语作文篇3

Anumberofemployeesclearlysufferfromalackofmotivationasaresultofdissatisfactioninoneormoreareasoftheirwork.Thekeyfindingsareoutlinedbelow:

Stafffeelundervaluedbythecompany,bothonafinancialandapersonallevel.Itisgenerallyfeltthatthecompanyˇscompetitorsofferhigherlevelsofremuneration.TheperceptionthatthemanagersareunappreciativeofstaffeffortsisparticularlynoticeableintheSalesDepartment.

Certainemployeesfeelunder-challenged.Thecompanyisclearlynotexploitingitshumanresources.

ThereappearstobeabreakdownofcommunicationintheProductionDepartment.Theconfusionandresultantill-feelingtowardsmanagershasthepotentialtodisrupttheproductioncycles.

Recommendations

Westronglyrecommendthefollowingmeasures:

Anevaluationofjobprofilesthroughoutthecompanytoassesswhetherskillscouldbeutilisedmoreefficiently

Areviewofthecurrentsalarystructureinvolvingthecomparisonwithsimilarorganisations

ItisalsoessentialtoinvestigateandtakeactionregardingthecommunicationintheProductionandSalesDepartment.

商务英语作文篇4

Ourcountryisknownas“nationoftheetiquette”thelaudatoryname,theadvocationetiquetteisourcountrypeople'straditionalmoralexcellence.Fromancienttimestillnow,ourcountry'setiquettestandardistheChineseuniquecivilizationsymbol,isChinesenationmoralexcellencemanifesting.Theetiquette,tookonetraditionalmoralexcellence,hasthehistoricalinheritance,hasvitalitywhichdoesnotfade.

Theetiquetteinvolveswhichinthecommercialcontactareverymany,butfrombasicspeaksbetweenthehumanandhuman'scontact,thereforeweareusedtothecommercialetiquettelimitsartwhichassociatesforthecommercialpersonnel.

Asthenamesuggests,thecommercialetiquetteisrefersinthepeoplecommercecontactthesuitableetiquettestandard,isinthecommercialcontact,bytheprocedure,thewaywhichcertain,isestablishedbyusageindicatedrespectsoppositepartytheprocessandthemethod.Theritualstemsfromvulgarly,popularizesfortheritual.Thecommercialetiquetteoperationality,howisshoulddo,howshouldn'tdo.Achievesinthecommercialcontact“restrainsoneself,respectsotherpeople”tobeabletocausethepeoplewitheasehappilytoassociate.Notonly“considersforotherpeople”isthecommercialcontact,alsoisbetweenthehumanandthehumanthenormalcontactbasicprinciple.Thereforesaidthestudyandthecorrectutilizationcommerceetiquettenotonlyisapersonintrinsictutelageandthequalityexternalperformance,alsoisinthehumancommunicationthesuitableonekindofart,onehumanrelationswayorthehumanrelationsmethod,areinthehumancommunicationareestablishedbyusageshowrespect,thefriendlycustomprocedure.Carriesoninthehumancommunicationcommunicatesmutuallycertainlymustgraspthecommercialetiquettetheskill.Lookedfromindividualanglethat,graspscertaincommercialetiquettetobehelpfulinenhancespeople'sowntutelage,beautifiesown,thebeautifiedlife.Andcantheveryeffectivepromotionsocialcontact,theimprovementinterpersonalrelationship,butalsoishelpfultothepurificationsocialconvention.Considers,asmile,aconcernallcangivehuman'sbymindinwarmth,andmaycauseownmoodtobealsohappyalongwithit,whynot?

商务英语作文篇5

Thankyouforyourletterof2November.Wearedelightedtohearthatyouaretopleasedwiththerefurbishmentofyourhotel.Asyourknow.inourlineofwork,wedependongood,reportsaboutourprojectstowinfurtherbusiness.Ourclientsalwaysshoparoundandlookforreferencesbeforecommittingthemselves.Withyourpermission,wewouldliketouseyourhotelasareferencewhenwediscusssimilarrefurbishmentsinthehotelindustry.Wouldyouagreetooursuggestingthatfutureclientsshouldcallyou?Itwouldalsobemosthelpfulifwecouldoccasionallybringaclienttolookatyourhotel.Wewould,ofcourse,stayovernightatleast.I’llcallyounextweektohearyourreaction.Thanksagainforyoukindwords.

从11月2日的来函得悉阁下对贵饭店的整修感到满足，此消息对本公司实是一激励。设计行业重视声誉，客人在选择设计公司时必定会有所比较。如蒙允许，本公司欲请贵饭店作举荐人，证明有关整修的质素。未知可否让其他客户来电垂询?此外，如获允准间或联同客户前来参观贵饭店整修，定必有莫大帮助。当然，本公司会预订房间，至少留宿一晚。

商务英语作文篇6

DearMrZampieri

Withreferencetoyourletterdated14June,inwhichyourequestedinformationaboutACutAbove,pleasefindencloseddetailsaboutourcompanyandtheservicesweoffer.

Ouraimisalwaystoprovideourclientswiththebestpossiblecombinationoffood,entertainmentandlocation.BychoosingAcutAbove,youcanrelaxandenjoyyourspecialoccasionwhilewedoallthework.EventscateredforbyAcutAboveincludecorporatefunctionssuchasconventionsandChristmasballsandalsofamilycelebrationssuchasbirthdays,weddingsandanniversaries.

ACutAboveoffersavarietyofservicesfromsimplyprovidingagourmetmenutohelpingyouchoosetherightvenueandorganiseentertainment.Wespecialiseinusingourexperiencetomeetyournees.Tohelpusachievethisaim,wealwaysarrangeameetingwithanewclientwellbeforethedateofanyeventinordertodiscussthevariouspossibilities.

Asyoucanappreciate,weareunabletogivequotationsbeforeourinitialbriefingwithaclientaspriceperheadvaireswithchoiceofmenu.

Toarrangeameetingorforanyfurtherinformation,pleasedonothesitatetocontactmyselforElenaPolidoroon01234578.

ACutAbovelookforwardtohearingfromyou.

Yourssincerely

SineadWalsh

商务英语作文篇7

Dear

Everyonehereat[nameoffirm]wassaddenedtolearnof[nameofemployee]suddenillness.

Weknowthatthiscameonwithoutanywarningandwhiletheproceedsfromthegrouppolicyinsurancecoveragewilldefrayasubstantialamountofthemedicalcosts，youmayhaveneedforsomeadditionalfinancialassistancetoseeyouthroughthisdifficulttime.

Pleasedonothesitatetocallonusifyouneedourassistanceinthisarea.Weconsider[nameofemployee]tobeoneofourmostvaluableemployeesandafineindividualaswellandwouldbemostappreciativeifyouwilllethimknowthatweareallthinkingofhim

商务英语作文篇8

作为国际贸易合同中的要件（condition）之一，包装是进出口业务中一项不容忽视的环节。从经济学角度上来说，包装是现实货物商品价值和运用价值的一种必要手段。进而言之，假如包装美观适销，还可以提高售价。这一点在国际贸易中尤为突出。不断改进和提高商品的包装，不仅可以削减货损，节约运费，而且还可以扩大销量，提高售价，并能反映一个国家在科学技术和文化艺术方面的水平。

2。好用范例

subject:aboutthepacking

dearsir，

on10july，wereceivedyourconsignmentof40cardboardcartonsofsteelscrews。

weregrettoinformyouthat10cartonsweredelivereddamagedandthecontentshadspilled，leadingtosomelosses。

weacceptthatthedamagewasnotyourfaultbutfeelthatwemustmodifyourpackingrequirementtoavoidfuturelosses。

werequirethatfuturepackingbeinwoodenboxesof20kilosnet，eachwoodenboxcontaining40cardbaordpacksof500gramsnet。

pleaseletusknowwhetherthesespecificationscanbemetbyyouandwhethertheywillleadtoanincreaseinyourprices。

welookforwardtoyourearlyconfirmation。

sincerelyyours，

xxxx

主题：包装事宜

敬爱的先生：

7月10日收到贵公司40个纸板箱钢螺钉。然而，当中10个纸箱于运输途中破烂，另货物散落，造成损失。本公司了解到此非贵公司之过，但希望能改进包装的方法，以避开同类事务发生。日后的包装木箱净重20公斤，可装每个净重500克的纸板箱40个。烦请确认上述方法，并告知新方法会否引致价格上涨。

盼望早日赐复。

你真诚的xxx

3。典型句型

(1)aboutpacking，wewillcontactourmanufacturersandcalltheirattentiontothematter。

关于包装问题，我方将与厂商联系，要求他们对此加以重视。

(2)correctanddistinctmarkingfortheoutsidecontainersisabsolutelynecessary。

我包装箱必需刷有正确明显的标记。

(3)inordertopreventdamages，theitemwillbepackedinwoodwool。

为了防止货物损坏，货物将用细刨花之类的东西来填充包装箱。

(4)ourpackingiswellsuitedforlongdistanceshipments。

我们的包装很适合长途运输。

（5）pleaseseetoitthatthepackingissuitableforalongseavoyage。

请保证包装可以适合长途海运

商务英语作文篇9

Businessetiquetteismadeupofsignificantlymoreimportantthingsthanknowingwhichforktouseatlunchwithaclient.Unfortunately,intheperceptionofothers,thedevilisinthedetails.Peoplemayfeelthatifyoucan'tbetrustednottoembarrassyourselfinbusinessandsocialsituations,youmaylacktheself-controlnecessarytobegoodatwhatyoudo.Etiquetteisaboutpresentingyourselfwiththekindofpolishthatshowsyoucanbetakenseriously.Etiquetteisalsoaboutbeingcomfortablearoundpeople(andmakingthemcomfortablearoundyou!)

Peopleareakeyfactorinyourownandyourbusiness'success.Manypotentiallyworthwhileandprofitableallianceshavebeenlostbecauseofanunintentionalbreachofmanners.

DanMcLeod,presidentofPositiveManagementLeadershipPrograms,aunionavoidancecompany,says,"Showmeabosswhotreatshisorheremployeesabrasively,andI'llshowyouanenvironmentripeforlaborproblemsandobviouslypoorcustomersrelations.Disrespectfulanddiscourteoustreatmentofemployeesispassedalongfromthetop."

TheSolution

Mostbehaviorthatisperceivedasdisrespectful,discourteousorabrasiveisunintentional,andcouldhavebeenavoidedbypracticinggoodmannersoretiquette.We'vealwaysfoundthatmostnegativeexperienceswithsomeonewereunintentionalandeasilyrepairedbykeepinganopenmindandmaintainingopen,honestcommunication.Basicknowledgeandpracticeofetiquetteisavaluableadvantage,becauseinalotofsituations,asecondchancemaynotbepossibleorpractical.

Therearemanywrittenandunwrittenrulesandguidelinesforetiquette,anditcertainlybehoovesabusinesspersontolearnthem.Thecaveatisthatthereisnopossiblewaytoknowallofthem!

Theseguidelineshavesomedifficult-to-navigatenuances,dependingonthecompany,thelocalculture,andtherequirementsofthesituation.Possibilitiestocommitafauxpasarelimitless,andchancesare,soonerorlater,you'llmakeamistake.Butyoucanminimizethem,recoverquickly,andavoidcausingabadimpressionbybeinggenerallyconsiderateandattentivetotheconcernsofothers,andbyadheringtothebasicrulesofetiquette.Whenindoubt,sticktothebasics.

TheBasics

Themostimportantthingtorememberistobecourteousandthoughtfultothepeoplearoundyou,regardlessofthesituation.Considerotherpeople'sfeelings,sticktoyourconvictionsasdiplomaticallyaspossible.Addressconflictassituation-related,ratherthanperson-related.Apologizewhenyoustepontoes.Youcan'tgotoofarwrongifyoustickwiththebasicsyoulearnedinKindergarten.(Notthatthosebasicsareeasytorememberwhenyou'reinahard-nosedbusinessmeeting!)

Thissoundssimplistic,butthequalitiesweadmiremostwhenweseetheminpeopleinleadershippositions,thosearetheverytraitsweworksohardtoengenderinourchildren.Ifyoualwaysbehavesothatyouwouldnotmindyourspouse,kids,orgrandparentswatchingyou,you'reprobablydoingfine.Avoidraisingyourvoice(surprisingly,itcanbemuchmoreeffectiveatgettingattentionwhenlowerit!)usingharshorderogatorylanguagetowardanyone(presentorabsent),orinterrupting.Youmaynotgetasmuch"airtime"inmeetingsatfirst,butwhatyoudosaywillbemuchmoreeffectivebecauseitcarriestheweightofcredibilityandrespectability.

Thefollowingareguidelinesandtipsthatwe'vefoundhelpfulfordealingwithpeopleingeneral,inworkenvironments,andinsocialsituations.

It'sAboutPeople

Talkandvisitwithpeople.Don'tdifferentiatebypositionorstandingwithinthecompany.Secretariesandjanitorialstaffactuallyhavetremendouspowertohelporhinderyourcareer.Nexttimeyouneedadocumentpreparedoraconferenceroomarrangedforapresentation,watchhowmanypeopleareinvolvedwiththatprocess(you'llprobablybesurprised!)andmakeitapointtomeetthemandshowyourappreciation.

Makeitapointtoarrivetenorfifteenminutesearlyandvisitwithpeoplethatworknearyou.Whenyou'revisitinganothersite,lingeroveracupofcoffeeandintroduceyourselftopeoplenearby.Ifyouarriveearlyforameeting,introduceyou