01“三首歌”学会环境描写-备考2023年新高考英语读后续写四大招式

读后续写大招一：“三首歌”学会环境描写环境描写，是续写重要描写手段之一，可以起到融情与景的效果，衬托人物的内心世界。适当的环境描写可以使文章读起来有真实感。比较下面两种表达：Igotoschoolhappily.加上环境描写：Themorningsunshineshininggently,fragrantflowerssmilingfromeartoear,greentreesswayingcheerfully,ItogetherwithTomandJerrysetoutearlyridingmybike,talkingandsingingalltheway.环境描写示例：1.Icanwellrememberthattherewasatimewhenadeepbluesky,thesongofthebirds,moonlightandflowerscouldneverhavekeptmespellbound.2.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringheavily,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtress，astrongfeelingofhorrorcreepingonme.环境描写大招一刘德华演唱《冰雨》：冷冷的冰雨在我脸上胡乱地拍形容词意象介短副词动词Theicyrainiswhippingmyfacemercilessly.大招一：形容词+意象+动词+副词/方位介短招式体验：1）Thewindblew.改写：Thegentlewarmwindblewsoftlyontheface.2）Thetreeswaved.改写：Thetallgreentreeswavedquietlyontheroadsides.3）Thesunshone.改写：Themorningsunshoneonthegroundwarmlyandgently.Thewarmmorningsunlightfellonthegroundmildly.具体续写过程中，可将三个（多个）意象结合起来，形成排比句，综合表达，构建更动感的画面。如：Thatnightwindhowledruthlessly.夜风无情地呼啸着。Someunknowncreaturesmurmuredinthedark.一些不知名的生物在黑暗中喃喃自语。Themoonlightshoneweaklyontheground.月光微弱地照在地上。合并：Thenightwindhowledruthlessly,namelesscreaturesmurmuredinthedarkandthemoonlightshoneweaklyontheground.排比句：意象1+动词1，意象2+动词2，and意象3+动词3.场景综合表达示例：1.stream溪流:Theafternoonsunlightfellonthegrass,thewindblewlightly,andthewaterflewsilentlydownthestream.2.flame火灾:Hotairenvelopedtheroom,thelightsglowedinthesmoke,andflamesspreadwildlyinalldirections.3.beach海边:Themildsunlightfellonthesand,theairblewsoftlyfromthesea,andthecrowdsplayedhappilyonthebeach.4.lake湖边:Thethincloudsflewslowlyinthesky,thetallgreentreeswavedwildlyinthewind,andthesunlightshoneonthelake.5.classroom:Lightsshonebrightlyonthefloor,tidydesksandchairslinedupneatly,andthestudentslistenedtotheteacherattentively.6.playground:Blazingsunlightburnedlikeanoven,hotairsurroundedtheplayground,thecrowdswerecheeredwildlytherunners.真题实践：根据中文，完成下列句子1.Thesunshonewarmlyontherunway,thetreesglowedinthewarmsunlight,allofwhichwereencouragingDavidtocompletetherun.阳光热烈地洒在跑道上，树木闪烁着微光，这一切都在鼓励着David坚持完成跑步。2.Theleaveswereshimmering,theairwasfilledwithdelight,andeverythingaroundwascelebratingDavid’sbravery.树叶闪着微光，空气弥漫着快乐的气息，周围一切都在庆祝David的勇敢。3.ThewarmsunshoneonDavid’sface,thetreesswayedwiththewind,andthewholeforestapplaudedDavid’scourage.暖阳洒在大卫的脸上，树木们随风摇曳，整座森林都为大卫的勇气而喝彩。4.Bathedinthewarmsunshine,thetreeswavedinthebreeze,sharingDavid’sdelightoffinishingthegame.沐浴再温暖的阳光下，树木在微风中摇曳，分享着David完成比赛的喜悦。环境描写大招二伍佰《与你到永久》：风儿轻轻的吹，雨也绵绵下个不停Thewindblowsgently,andtherainkeepsfalling.---Agentlewindbreezing,afinedrizzlewasfallingsteadilylikemymissingforyou.大招二：写景+比喻+特点:句式：写景句(本体)，+like+喻体+that从句/非谓语动词招式体验：1.Thestarsareinthesky.---Thebrightstarsscatteredinthesky,likegemstwinklingbrilliantly.天上的星星像宝石一样闪闪发光。2.Thetreeiswaving.---Thetreeswavedwildlyintheair,likedrunkenmantremblingfromsidetoside.树像醉汉一样摇摇晃晃。3.Thestarssparkled.---Thestarssparkledvividly,likeacuriouschildglazingatus.---Thestarssparkledvividly,likeacuriouschild,thatglazedatus.---Thestarssparkledvividly,likenaughtychildrenlookingatuswithcuriosity.顽皮的孩子好奇地看着我们。4.Afirestill

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abirdtryingtofinditswayoutoftheroom.一团火还在壁炉炉膛里舞动着，就像一只挣脱束缚的鸟。5.Thelastleafofautumnflutteredtotheground,likeadropofautumn’stear,meltingsilentlyinhisoverwhelmingsorrow.秋天的最后一片叶子像一滴秋天的眼泪一样飘落在地上，在巨大的悲伤中默默融化。大招二表达示例：1.wind：Theicywindstartedhowling,likeasharpknifescratchingmyface.2.sun:Themorningsunlightfloodedinthroughthecurtain,likepiecesofgolddancingonthefloor.3.tree:Talltreeslineduponbothsidesofthestreet,likesoldiersthrowinglongshadowsontheground.4.cloud:Thewhitecloudshanglowinthesky,likepiecesofcottonsailingwiththewind.5.rain:Thedreadfulrainwaspouringdown,likemonstersbeatingwildlyagainstthewindows.6.flower:Theflowersdottedthegarden,likespiritsdancinggracefullyintheair.环境描写大招三《漂洋过海来看你》：在漫天风沙里望着你远去，我竟悲伤的不能自已Iwastoosadtocontrolmyselfasseeingyougoingawayinthesandystorm.---Thesandalloverthesky,yourfamiliarfigurefadingaway,afloodofgriefwelledupinmyheart,sweepingovermybody.方法三：情景交融：写景+感受意象+动词ing，+感受：句式一：（无灵主语）arippleof+情感名词ranthroughsb’sheart;afloodof+情感名词welledupinsb.句式二：（人称主语）sb.wasbrimmedoverwith+情感名词；sb.wasimmersedin+情感名词.大招体验：Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature.Asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.风可怕地嚎叫，雨从天倾泻而来，拍打着成排的树枝。我被自然发怒的力量抓住了。一种恐惧感悄悄爬到我身上。表达示例：1.wind：Theicywindhowling,arippleoftensionranthroughhisheart.2.sun：Themorningsunlightfloodinginthroughthecurtain,arippleofsatisfactionranthroughthetwins’heart.3.moon：Thesilverymoonglowinginthesky,arippleofgriefranthroughJane’sheart.4.snow：Featherilysnowflakefallingfromthesky,Iwasimmersedindelight.5.rain：Heavyrainbeatingdownonthestreet,Iwasimmersedinremorse.6.crowd：Crowdsofpeoplegatheringintotheclassroom,Iwasimmersedinawkwardness.综合运用：（先尝试概括性描述，在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系及语意的合理。）示例：Itgotdark.---Itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.---Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.大招综合运用：风：这个冬季，天气异常寒冷。此刻没有风。（概述）Thiswinter,theweatherwasunusuallycold.Therewasnowindatthemoment.（细节）Thiswinter,theweatherwasunusuallycold.Therewasnowindatthemoment.Theworldseemedtobefrozenandtheriverhavestoppeditsfootsteps.这个冬季，天气异常寒冷。此刻没有风，世界好像停止有这一刻，河流也停下了脚步。2)外面刮起了大风，地上的灰尘乱飞。（概述）Outside,therewasastrongwind,thedustonthegroundflyingindisorder。（细节）Outside,therewasastrongwind,blowingthebranchesinalldirections.Thedustonthegroundwasflyingindisorder,whichmadepeopleunabletoopentheireyes.外面刮起了大风，吹的树枝乱摆，地上的灰尘乱飞，让人睁不开眼睛。雨：3)昨天下了倾盆大雨。（概述）Itwasrainingcatsanddogs.（细节）Itwasrainingcatsanddogsyesterdaywhenschoolwasover.IwasallwetwhenIgothome.昨天放学的时候在下着倾盆大雨。我到家时全身都湿了。4）汤姆在暴雨中淋湿了。（概述）Tomwascaughtinaheavydownpour.（细节）Unfortunately,Tomwascaughtintheheavyrain,wetthroughfromheadtotoe,likeadrownedrat.真不幸，汤姆在暴雨中被淋成了落汤鸡。5)刚才还是白云朵朵，一霎时狂风暴雨起来了。（概述）Justnowtherewerestillwhiteclouds,butinaflash,itpoureddown.（细节）Theweatherinsummerisunpredictable.Justnowtherewerestillwhiteclouds,butinaflash,lightningandthunderbrokeout,andtherecameadownpour.夏天的天气真是变幻莫测。刚才还是白云朵朵，一霎时就电闪雷鸣，狂风暴雨起来了。热：hot（热）；melt（融化）；sweatlikeapig（汗流浃背）；rainfire（天气火热）1）天气闷热得要命。（概述）Theweatherwassohot.（细节）Theweatherwassohotthattherewasnowind,andthethickairseemedtobefrozen.天气闷热得要命，一丝风也没有，稠乎乎的空气好像凝住了。2)天气热得吓人，我汗流浃背。（概述）TheweatherwasterribleandIwassweatinglikeapig.（细节）Thoughnotdoinganything,Iwassweatinglikeapig.

Itwasnotjusthot.ItwasAfricanhot,whichwastooterribletotolerate.虽然我什么都没做，但还是汗流浃背。不止是热，是像非洲一样热！天热得吓人。冷：cold,bone-chilling1）天很冷。（概述）It'sfreezingcold.（细节）Ican'tstopshiveringfromthecoldtremblingallover.我冷得不停打哆嗦。2）这寒风真是刺骨.（概述）Thewindwasbone-chilling.（细节）Thewindwassobone-chillingthatitcutrightthroughme.这寒风如此刺骨，直接穿过我的身体。应试素材积累：1.夏夜：宁静的夜空中挂着一轮明月和闪烁的星星,与慢节奏的村庄形成一幅和谐的美景。Thereisharmonybetweenthemoonandstarsinthequietskyandtheslowpaceofthevillage.2.春天户外：小鸟像音乐家一样，在树上唱着优美的歌，蝴蝶像多采多姿的舞蹈家一样，拍动着翅膀，飞来飞去。Thebirds,likemusician,sangtheirmelodioussongsinthetrees,andbutterflies,likecolorfuldancers,wereflutteringhereandthere.3.露水：当阳光照耀在露珠上时露珠像珠宝一样闪闪发光。Thedropsofdewsparklelikejewelswhenthesunshinesonthem.路边长满了嫩绿的草，草上沾满了小小的露珠，他们静静等待着大地母亲的苏醒。Thegrassissoftandgreenonthesideoftheroad,withlittledewdropsoneachpieceofgrass,theyquietlywelcomemotherearthtowakeup.4.日出：第二天，日出的光线很早就将他唤醒。夜晚的星星都被阳光藏在粉蓝色的天空下。Thenextday,thesunlightwokehimveryearly,hidingthestarsunderapinkblueandbluesky.旭日从雾霭中冉冉升起,东升红彤彤,新鲜而充满生机.Thesuncomingupfromitsflatbedoffog,redandnewandfullofpromises.5.月光：一个美丽而宁静的夜晚,月亮像一个圆盘挂在黑暗的夜空中,淡淡的月光普照万物.Itisabeautifulandquietnight.Themoonislikeadischangingonthedarksky,whichcastsits