如何进行有效拓展课件-高二写作专项

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如何进行有效拓展Teachingaims:1.Togetstudentstoknowsomethingaboutthescoringcriteriainwriting;2.Togetstudentstomasterthefourwaystoaddmoreeffectivedetaistotheirwriting;3.Toenablestudentstowritemore.【课前先学检测案】漂漂亮亮明明白白1.Learnaboutthescoringcriteria2.GradethefollowingpassagePassage12018年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括：1.到达时间；2.合适的礼物；3.餐桌礼仪。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2.GradethefollowingpassageDearTerry,

Howareyoudoing?Inyourlastletter,yousaidyouwillvisitaChinesefriendandyouwanttoknowsomethingabouttheChinesecustoms.Myadviceisasfollows.

First,youshouldarrive5to10minutesearlier.Second,youshouldbringsomegiftswithyou.Finally,youshouldpayattentiontotablemanners.

Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbehelpfulforyou.

Yours,

LiHua16points64pointsHowcanweimprovethepassage?

Fourwaystoaddmoreeffectivedetailstoyourpassage.【课中活动探究案】1、追加成分。在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语（从句）、状语（从句）、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等。其中定语从句常用______________________________________

添加背景和原因，说说目的和结果which引导的非限制性定语从句a.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutocelebratetheDragonBoatFestivalwithus.b.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutocelebratetheDragonBoatFestivalwithus,whichisanimportantfestivalforChinese.非限制性定语从句，解释说明。非谓语动词短语作状语，表明找兼职的目的。a.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartinthepapercuttingexhibition.b.KnowingthatyouarefondofChinesepapercutting,I'mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartinthepapercuttingexhibition.非谓语动词短语作状语，表明写信的原因。吸人眼球的定语从句whichmakesmebelievethatIcanactasatranslatorinyourrestuarantwhichisoneofthemosteffectivewaystokeepfigureandcanbringyouagoodmood用非谓语动词(todo,doing/done)完成下列句子：3)LiMingreadsEnglishaloudeveryday____________________________________(以提高他的口语).4)_______________________(做志愿工作)，

youcanbroadenyourhorizons.彰显水平的非谓语动词toimprovehisspoken/oralEnglishDoingvoluntarywork2、补加语句。根据行文走向，适当增加一些与主题相关的语句，既能起到前后关联的作用，又能补充一些相关的信息，帮助读者理解所写内容。常用句式有__________________________________________________________

。要点内容具体化，举例说明更清楚a.Youcantakeexercise.b.IfIwereyou,Iwouldtakeexcerciseregularly,suchasplayingbasketball,runningandswimming.举例说明细化“exercise"suchas...forexample

Whatmakessb.adj.isthat...Exercise：1)_____________________________(这是可以理

解的)everygirlhopestobeslim.2)______________________________(让我感到

高兴的是)Ipassedtheimportantexam.ItisunderstandablethatWhatmakesmehappyisthat3、添加过渡。根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，甚至过渡句,这样可以使文章浑然一体，同时又能充实文章。常用过渡词有:运用必要过渡词，文章结构有层次firstofall,tobeginwith,inthefirstplace,firstandforemost,besides,what'smore,lastbutnotleast...连句成篇，行文流水4、不忘收尾。书信中“适当的结尾”也是必须的，它不仅能呼应开头，深化主题，还能表达祝愿，阐述愿望。你会用的结尾有：Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagoodtime.Iwishyouractivitywillbesuccessful.Ihopeyouwillmakegreaterprogress.文章收尾谈感受，套套近乎也无妨4月考作文结尾：期望+祝愿Ihopemysuggestionswillbeofhelptoyouandwishyouractivitywillbesuccessful.回归主题，表达祝愿Fourwaystoaddmoredetailstoyourpassage1、追加成分

添加背景和原因，说说目的和结果

2、补加语句

要点内容具体化，举例说明更清楚3、添加过渡运用必要过渡词，文章结构有层次4、不忘收尾文章收尾谈感受，套套近乎也无妨Nomatterwhichwayyouuse,makesurethatthedetailsareeffeictive.Payattentionto"effective"noteffective点评：不管外教来不来，比赛都将如期举行。Payattentionto"effective"2:介绍个人优势和能做的事情（李华在伦敦申请做中国画展的志愿者）Icanspeak

fluentEnglishandgetalongwellwithothers.Myhobbyisplayingbasketball

andIreallylikedrawing.noteffective点评：打篮球与画画无关。IcanspeakfluentEnglishandgetalongwellwithothers.IamlearningdrawinginanartschoolinLondonandIreallylikedrawing.Payattentionto"effective"3：介绍端午节活动安排（邀请交换生参加活动）DuringtheDragonBoatFestival,wewillwatchthedragonboatraceandtastesomedelicious"zongzi",whichisakindoffoodto

memorizeanancientpoetnamedQuYuan.effective点评：适当扩展文化知识，输出中国文化。小牛试刀Usethefourwaystoimprovethepassage.DearTerry,Howareyoudoing?Inyourlastletter,yousaidyouwillvisitaChinesefriendandyouwanttoknowsomethingabouttheChinesecustoms.Myadviceisasfollows.First,youshouldarrive5to10minutesearlier.Second,youshouldbringsomegiftswithyou.Finally,youshouldpayattentiontotablemanners.

Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbehelpfulforyou.Yours,LiHua16pointsImprovethefirstparagraphtogether.DearTerry,Howareyoudoing?KnowingthatyouwillvisitaChinesefriendandyouwanttoknowsomethingabouttheChinesecustoms,I'dliketoofferyousomesuggestions.AsampleversionDearTerry,

Howareyoudoing?_____________________________________________________________________________(听说你对于如何到中国朋友家做客感到很困惑；非谓语),Iamwritingtoputforwardsomeadvice.

Firstandforemost,______________(我想建议你)youarrive5to10minutes

earlier,________________________________

____________(这在中国文化里很常见；非限).Inaddition,______________(如果我是你),IwouldLearningthatyouare

confusedabouthowtobeaguestinyour

Chinesefriend’shomeI’dliketosuggestculturewhichisverycommoninChineseifIwereyou1、追加成分2、补加语句1、追加成分2、补加语句bringsomeappropriategiftswithme,___________________________________________________(比如水果或我国家的纪念品).___________________________________(重要的是)youshouldpayattentiontotablemanners.________________________________________________________________________________________________

(例如，当你吃饭的时候，你要避免发出声音).suchassomefruitsorsouvenirsfrommyowncountryWhat'sequallyimportantisthatForexample,whenyouare