读后续写练习发动社区的邻居加入到改造社区的活动中来-2024届高三英语二轮复习

高考英语读后续写语篇练习发动社区的邻居加入到改造社区的活动中来1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文MaggieandAlexliveinatallbuildinginaneighborhoodinthecenterofthecity.Therearenotreesneartheirbuilding,buttheyarehappyintheirhomeanditisclosetotheirjobs.Inthepartofthecitywheretheylive,thereisnotmuchfreshfoodtobuy.Thestoresonlyhaveprocessedfoodsinpackages.MaggieandAlexandalltheotherpeopleinthebuildinghavetoeatfoodthattheybuyinboxesandplasticcontainers.Thismakessomuchgarbagethatnooneknowswheretoputit.WhiletheywaitforFridays,whenthecitycollectsthegarbage,alltheneighborsputtheirtrashintobagsandsometimesleaveitinthehallwayoronthebig,sunnyroof.Thewholebuildinglooksterrible.Noonecanspendtimeplayingontheroofbecauseitisfulloftrash.4续写原文Oneday,MaggieandAlexdecidetomakeachange.Theygouptotheroofandseparatealltherecycla-blegarbage,likecardboard,plasticbottles,glass,andaluminumcans.Thentheytakeallofthegarbagedowntothestreetforthegarbagecollectors.Buttheydonotcarrydowntheplasticbottles!Theycutoffthetopsandusethemaspotstoplanttomatoesandcarrots.Theyplantherbs,too.5段首句Para1：MaggieandAlextelltheirneighborsabouttheirproject.

Para2：Nowtherooflooksbeautifullikeagarden.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Maggie和Alex对所居住社区所作出的绿色改变，并且让整个社区都从中受益。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：MaggieandAlextelltheirneighborsabouttheirproject.由第一段首句内容“麦琪和亚历克斯把他们的计划告诉了邻居。”可知，第一段可描写邻居知道他们的计划后，很高兴，并且参与到他们的计划中去。10续写思路分析Para2：Nowtherooflooksbeautifullikeagarden.由第二段首句内容“现在屋顶看起来像花园一样漂亮。”可知，第二段可描写Maggie和Alex以及他们的邻居享受这个被改变的环境，以及注意去保护环境。11续写思路分析续写线索发现环境很差——决定改变——邻居参与——享受新环境12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①变得：get/become②照顾：takecareof/lookafter/keepaneyeon③花费：spend/take/expend④买：buy/purchase情绪类①兴奋的：excited/thrilled②漂亮的：beautiful/pretty/nice13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]Whenevertheyhavefreetimeafterworkorontheweekends,alltheneighborsgouptotheroof.(Whenever引导时间状语从句)[高分句型2]Infact,theyevensavemoneybecausetheydonothavetobuysomuchpackagedfood.(because引导的原因状语从句)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现MaggieandAlextelltheirneighborsabouttheirproject.Theirneighborsgetveryexcited.Whenevertheyhavefreetimeafterworkorontheweekends,alltheneighborsgouptotheroof.Theyenjoythesunandhelptakecareoftheplantsinthegarden.Theyallcooperate,andbyworkingtogether,theysoonhaveabig,beautifulvegetablegarden!16范文呈现Nowtherooflooksbeautifullikeagarden.Theyspendtimeintheircommunitygarden,enjoythesun,andcreatemuchlessgarbage.Infact,theyevensavemoneybecausetheydonothavetobuysomuchpackagedfood.Thegardenisarealsuccess,andthebuildinginthecenterofthecityisamuchnicerplacetolivebecauseofit.Alloftheneighborssafeguardtheirenvironmentandimproveitforthemselvesandforeachother.17范文译文玛吉和亚历克斯把他们的项目告诉了邻居。他们的邻居都很兴奋。每当他们下班后或周末有空闲时间，所有的邻居都会爬上屋顶。他们享受阳光，并帮助照料花园里的植物。他们都很合作，通过合作，他们很快就有了一个又大又漂亮的菜园！18范文译文现在屋顶看起来像花园一样漂亮。他们花时间在社区花园里，享受阳光，制造的垃圾也少得多。事实上，他们甚至省钱，因