2022年四级英语模拟作文

第第#页共9页2022年四级英语模拟作文四级英语模拟作文英语四级模拟作文例一：PartIWritingDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledMaltingFriendsOnline.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.1•网上交友现象越来截止普遍。2•这种做法有利有弊。3.我的建议。答案订高分作文］Withawidevarietyofvirtualcommunicationtoolsspringinguplikemushrooms,makingfriendsonlinehasbecomeincreasinglyfashionableoverthepastdecade.Thischannelofcommunicationenablespeopletogetacquaintedwithcyberfriendsfromanywherewithoutanylimitations,enrichingtheirlifeexperiencesandevenextendingtheirknowledge.What'smore,itisnotrareforsometofindtheirbosomfriendsandevenMr./Mrs.Right.Butasadouble-edgedsword,makingfriendswithoutphysicallymeetingeachotherundoubtedlyhasevils--1ragediesoccurwhencyber-friendsfinallydecidetodate.Notcomingsinglybutinpairs,somespousesgetdivorcedbecauseonepartyfallsinlovewithcyber-lovers.Thenetworkrenderspeopleconvenientandefficientmeanstogetintouchwiththerestoftheworldandweshouldmakegooduseofitinsteadoffallingvictimstoit.［评析］这是一篇以分析某现象的利弊为主的说明文。第一段用一句话说明白随着各种各样的(awidevarietyof)虚拟通信工具如雨后春笋般涌现(springinguplikemushrooms),网上交友在过去十年里(overthepastdecade)变得越来越(increasingly)流行。with引导的名词+doing结构是表示缘由的经典用法。其次段用What'smore连接了两个好处。其中的亮点词汇有：enablepeopletogetacquaintedwith“使人们结识”；enrichingexperiences“丰富阅历”和extendingknowledge"拓宽学问面”两个短语用了现在分词作伴随状语；itisnotrare表示“并不罕见”，比itiscommon更有力;bosomfriends“知心挚友”；Mr./Mrs.Right“另一半；心上人”。第三段话锋一转，利用比方“就像一把双刃剑(asadouble-edgedsword)”，弓［出了坏处。成语Notcomingsinglybutinpairs"无独有偶”的前后讲了两个坏处，恰恰与前一段的两个好处形成对比。最终一段简洁地发出呼吁：网络给我们供应了便利、高效的、接触外界的手段，我们应当好好利用它，而不应当成为其受害者。亮点词汇有：render,convenientandefficientmeans,fallvictimto例二：Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledOnConservingEnergy.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.1•能源短缺问题已经特别严峻；2•可以实行节能措解决能源短缺问题；3•你的看法。答案订高分作文］Nowadaysthereisgrowingconcernontheseriousproblemofenergyshortage.Manypeopleworrythatenergyresourcesontheearthwillbeexhaustedifweusetheminanuncheckedway.Andtheybelievethattheenergyshortagewillcauseseriousproblemsandevencrisis.Conservingenergyisoneofthemeasureswhichhavebeentakentosolvetheproblemofenergyshortage.Forexample,somecountrieshaveadaylightsavingsystemtouselesselectrieityforlighting.Also,somecitieshaveenforcedsomefacilitiesforsavingwateratpublicplacessuchasrestroomsandbars.Stillmore,somehaveenforcedseriouspenaltiesonoveruseofelectrieity,water,andfarmingland.Bythesemeans,peoplehopethedrainonenergyresourcescouldbesloweddown.Inaword,itishightimethatseriousconsiderationwasgiven

toconservingenergy.Onlythroughimmediateandeffectiveaction,canwehumanbeingssurviveandenjoylifeasdesired.［评析］节能是当前备受关注的一个话题，因此可说的内容许多，紧紧围绕提纲要求进行阐述是本文的显明特点。文章首段直截了当地提出能源短缺这样一个话题，中间段概括说明节能是解决能源短缺问题的重要措施之一，运用并列型扩展法介绍了几种节能措施。末尾段重申主题，再次强调问题的紧迫性和严峻性。本文词语和句型运用自如。如其次段的列举法虽然没有运用first，second等词语，但运用了Also，stillmore，使整个段落看起来内容充溢，条理清晰。结尾段运用了此类分析问题的作文的典型结尾句型“itishightimethat”。例三：Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestoYoushouldwriteatleastgivenbelowinChinese:writeanessayYoushouldwriteatleastgivenbelowinChinese:entitledOnEnglishLearning.120wordsfollowingtheoutline1.1.你认为在英语学习过程中存在的主要问题是什么？2.导致这些问题的缘由有哪些？3•对于解决这些问题，你有何建议？ItisobviousthattherearesomeproblemsincollegeEnglishlearning.Inmyopinion,somethingmostdiscouragingisthatmanystudentsfinddifficultyincommunicatingwithanativespeakeralthoughtheyhavelearnedEnglishformanyyears.Therearetworeasonsexplainingthisphenomenon.Firstly,mostofthestudents,evenmanyteachersofEnglishpaylittleattentiontotheuseofthelanguage.Tothem,themostimportantthingoflearningEnglishistomemorizesomegrammaticalrulesandenlargethevocabulary.Secondly,manystudentshavenotrealizedtherealpurposeoflearningEnglish.TheyholdthattheystudyEnglishtopasstests,nottomasterausefultoolfortheirownuse.Tochangethissituation,mysuggestionisthatmoreemphasisbeputonimprovingcommunicativeabilitiesinEnglish.Forexample,whynotadvocatethatthelisteningandspeakingshouldbeincludedinthetestofEnglishatvariouslevels?［评析］作文首先干脆提出英语学习中存在的问题，即经过多年英语学习之后，学生依旧不能用英语进行沟通。其次段揭示并分析产生这种现象的两个缘由。主题句为：Therearetworeasonsexplainingthisphenomenon.扩展句的主要内容：一是对语言运用的学习不够重视;二是学习英语的目的只是为了通过考试。最终提出解决问题而且现实可行的建议，用问句结尾，引起阅卷老师对本文的留意。本文的语言表达精确，三个段落的过渡自然。文章开头句子明确提出问题ItisobviousthattherearesomeproblemsincollegeEnglishlearning，其次段首句提出产生这种现象的缘由有两个Therearetworeasonsexplainingthisphenomenon，末段的首句用Tochangethissituation来承接上文，最终用forexample引出自己的建议。例四：Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledCheatingonCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.1•在高校里存在着考试作弊的现象；2•你是怎么看待这一现象的；3•如何才能制止这种现象。答案订高分作文］Cheatingonexamsisbecomingaseriousproblemoncampus.23%ofstudentshaveeverbeenfounddoingsoontheirexams.Someofthemcopyfromeachother,sometakeouttheirtextbooksorreferencebookstocopy,stillsomeusethemoderncommunicationtoolssuchasmobilephoneasawaytogetrelatedinformation.Itisobviousthatcheatingonexamshasbadeffectonstudents'academicperformancesaswellasmoralitypractice.Manyremarkablefactorscontributetothecheatinginexams.First,somestudentsjustplaytimeawayandwanttopasstheexamwithoutefforts.Andsomestudentsareundergreatpressurefromparentsand

theyfeartofailtheexams.Second,collegeoruniversitiesmustbeartheblamefortheirplacingmoreemphasisongradesthanlearning.Rigidgradingsystempromotes