【题型专项】概要写作精讲（三）市赛一等奖

概要写作精讲3高考英语Summarywritingsills1主位描述2要点完整3逻辑清晰概要写作表达技巧内容HerfirstdelightwasgoingtothetowerItwasbuiltlongagobytheNormaninvadersofAD1066Thissolidstone,squaretowerhadremainedstandingforonethousandyearsAlthoughthebuildinghadebinedSummarywritingsills同义替换法近义词、反义词、词性转换等句式转换法改变主语、运用非谓语动词短语、with结构、运用同位语等压缩长句法笼统代替具体，运用并列结构等几种概要写作的表达技巧语言DirtonthesincouldgettingsicDirtonthesinwasameanstoblocoutdiseaseDirtonthesinwasabarrieragainstoutsidedisease1同义替换BaerconcludesthatpeopledonothavetheabilitytosensewhentheyarebeingstaredatBaer'sconclusionisthatpeoplearenotcapableoffeelingother'sobservation1同义替换-改变词性IfyoufailtoissyoufromyourjobFailuretoissalYoursinwillbeburntifyouareeposedtothesuntoolongLongeyoursin

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1同义替换-改变词性：使用抽象名词

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1使用抽象名词

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