台州市区读后续写公开课20161025

台州市第一中学周永鹏

台州市区读后续写讲评课20161025

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Q1:HowdidJanefeelstayedintheforestforanothernightQ2:Whatcouldshedodisappointed/hopelessQ3:WhatwasTomeworriedaboutJaneanddidn'tgiveupsearchingMaeanoutlineofPara7Possibility1missedTomandherfamilymorePara8:ItwasdaybreawhenshewoeupQ1:WhatwouldJanedoaftershewoeupHeorRescueworersspottedJaneinthehelicopterandlandedtorescueherQ2:DidTomfinallyfindJaneHowShewenttotheopenareawaitingforthehelicopterQ3:WhatwouldbetheirreactionwhenmeetingeachotheragainTheymayhugeachotherandsharelovingwordsMaeanoutlineofPara8Possibility1JaneTomlaewaledclimbedatadistancestreamtohergreatjoyhelicopteryellowblouseorehelicoeanditwasgettingdaragain1JanewasdisaissedTom3Tomwasveryworriedanddidn'tgiveupsearchingspottedJaneinthehelicopterandlandedtorescueher3TheyhuggedeachotherandsharelovingwordsChooseatleast5underlinedeywordsforfurtheruseJanewasdisaissedTomTomwasveryworriedanddidn'tgiveupsearchingTiredanddisaingherselfThesenseoffearandthedarnesssurroundedher,maingherfeelevenmoreregretfulforherfoolishbehaviorShehadnochoicebuttostoissthewarmthofTom'shugHerdreamwasallaboutTomandthesweetmemoriesoftheirfamilylifeAsforTom,theconcernforhiswifegrewwiththeeHewasinthehelicoatchforhisdeedeterminationEpandtheoutlineofPara7intoapassageorehelicoeanditwasgettingdaranddisaingherselfThesenseoffearandthedarnesssurroundedher,maingherfeelevenmoreregretfulforherfoolishbehaviorShehadnochoicebuttostoissthewarmthofTom'shugHerdreamwasallaboutTomandthesweetmemoriesoftheirfamilylifeAsforTom,theconcernforhiswifegrewwiththeeHewasinthehelicoatchforhisdeedeterminationEpandtheoutlineofPara7intoapassageJanestillwenttotheospottedJaneinthehelicopterandlandedtorescueherTheyhuggedeachotherandsharedlovingwordsShedranandateafewberriesasthedaybeforeShewaswaitingintheoeintosightWiththesoundgettinglouderandcloser,shejumped,yelledandwavedtheyellowblousewithallherstrengthtobenoticedTohergreatjoy,shewassinuteItwasTomwhojumpedoutofthehelicopterfirstHerushedtoJaneandtooherintohisarmstightly“ThanGoodness,Inowyouwillcometome,”JanesobbedDesTomEpandtheoutlineofPara8intoapassageetome,”JanesobbedDesTomEpandtheoutlineofPara8intoapassageTrueloveneverfailsDecidethethemeforthestoryCherishwhatyouhaveSolvethespositivelyNevergiveupwhenintroubleABCD1ThedifficultyisnomatchforTom’sloveandduty2Thereisnodoubtthattherisyeadethebondbetweenthemmuchstronger3Finallytheywenthometogetherandnowtheyshouldtreasureeachother4Loveisonethingwhichwillneverfadeawaydesent5Nomatterdifficultthesituationis,weshouldnevergiveuuchyouneedthemwhenyoulosethem8Nomatterhowdifficultitwas,theirlovewouldleadthewayforthem9Theyhuggedeachothertightlyandisedthattheywon’tignoreeachother’sfeelinganymore10OnlyifyouhavethebeliefofsurvivalcanyougetoutoftroubleWhichthemedoeseachsentencereflect11ItwaslastnightthatIrealiedhowmuchIloveyouThelittlequarrelwillseswithuchunderstanding14Valuingwhatwehavenowisthemostim16ItwasJane’sstrongbelief