雅思大作文强化写作过程

雅思写作考前冲刺一内容：1）大作文写作要点梳理（评分标准）2）写作过程注意点3）论证框架补充4）互动写作5）课后写作作业高能低分的原因1）审题失误漏题偏题2）框架失误大作文的评分标准

任务完成内容切题（不漏题、不立体）立场鲜明并得到有效阐释（明确表态，有有力的论据）结构有逻辑性连贯与衔接连接词的运用词汇资源有一定难度的词（适当运用大词）近义词替代（多样性）语法多样性和准确性句子结构的准确性（语法正确：分词）句子结构的丰富性（长短句，句子开头不同）句子的长度和难度（每个段落有长句）用词的正式性和严谨性（没有口语词）作文的审题一、漏题题目较长，考生容易漏掉其中的某些重要信息。Environmentalproblemsaretoobigforindividualcountriesandindividualpersonstoaddress.Inotherwords,wehavereachedthestagewheretheonlywaytoprotecttheenvironmentisataninternationallevel.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?分析：主题关键词为environmentalproblems，涉及的主体为三类：individualcountries,individualpersons,internationallevel。这三类主题在作文中都必须要提到。分析练习2)Somepeoplebelievethatstudentsshouldstudyingroups.Othersthinkthattheyshouldstudyalone.Whatarethebenefitsofstudyingingroupsandstudyingalone?Whichwayismoreeffective?哪些为关键概念词汇？2)Somepeoplebelievethatstudentsshouldstudyingroups.Othersthinkthattheyshouldstudyalone.Whatarethebenefitsofstudyingingroupsandstudyingalone?Whichwayismoreeffective?二、跑题第一种情况：题目不难，但是由于考场紧张，想偏了跑题。Competitivenessnowisveryimportanttothesociety.Iscompetitivenesspositiveornegativetotheindividual?正确焦点：对个人是积极还是消极，并在论述积极影响时候肯定起对社会的重要性。失误焦点1：要竞争还是要合作？（X）失误焦点2：竞争和合作对个人和社会的作用（X）第二种情况：题目很难，没能看懂，理解出现偏差Withoutcapitalpunishment(thedeathpenalty)ourlivesarelesssecureandcrimesofviolenceincrease.Capitalpunishmentisessentialtocontrolviolenceinsociety.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?误读：资本惩罚，罚款，经济惩罚等对控制犯罪的作用。审题步骤审题时间：2分钟四步：1）明确题目类型和论证框架2）判断问题数量3）寻找关键词汇4）列出简要提纲1：明确题目类型论辩型题目：Argumentative

包括：1）给你一个观点，问你是否同意并说明原因2）给你两种观点，问你支持哪一方3）讨论某事物的优缺点问法：Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Doyouagreeordisagree?Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegativedevelopment?Doyouthinkitsadvantagesoutweighitsdisadvantages?Whatdoyouthink?Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.1：明确题目类型解释型题目：Analysis提出一个比较热门的问题，让考生谈原因和解决方案。问法：Whatarethepossiblereasonsandhowtosolveit?Whatarethesocialandindividualfunctions?Pleaseanalyzethereasonsandgiveyourrecommendations.2：判断问题的数量多问题题目，弥补固定框架的缺陷灵活应对，问题全覆盖例子说明：1）根据标点符号的数量来判断Thegapbetweentherichandthepoorisbecomingwider.Therichisgrowingricherandthepoorisgrowingpoorer.Whatarethecausesofthis?Whatmeasurescanbetakentoreducethisproblem?分析：两个标点符号，第一回答原因，第二回答措施2）根据题目中出现的连词来判断Nowadays,someorganizationsandcharitiespublicizetheiractivitiesbyintroducingspecialdayseveryyearlikeNationalChildren’sDayandNon-smokingDay.Whydoyouthinktheyintroducespecialdaysandwhateffectsdoesthishave?分析：and，回答两个问题3：寻找关键词汇1）名词或动名词：明确写作范围Somepeoplearguethatthepurposeofzoosisonlytoentertainpeople.Whatdoyouthink?Whatotherpurposesofzoos?3：寻找关键词汇2）修饰限定词：决定写作方向和写作重点Airtravelonlybenefitstherichestpeople,andmajoritypeopletakenoadvantagefromdevelopmentofairplane.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?失误解题：乘飞机旅行是否对人们有利（X）正确解题：乘飞机是否只对富人有利？需要论述乘飞机对富人也会有不利之处，而普通人也可以获益于乘飞机旅行。4：列提纲忠告：没有整理好思路，一边想一边写的结果反而浪费时间，而且越来越混乱，甚至忘记之前的构思。论点的提出1）直接提出论点AsfarasIamconcerned…AsfarasIamabletojudge…Asforme…AsIseeit…Inmyopinion…In/Formypart…In/Frommypointofview…Frommyperspective…Itseemsquitecleartomethat…Iamconvincedthat…论点的提出2）评价引用论点Iwouldgoalongwiththispointofview.AsfarasIamconcerned,thisproposalseemsbothsoundandwell-grounded.Asforme,Icansharethispointofview.Itotallyagreewiththisstatement,andIwillexplainwhythisisthecase.Tobefrank,Iagreewiththeiropinionforthereasonsbelow.Iamagainstthispointofview.Iamopposedtothispointofview.AsfarasIamconcerned,however,thispointofviewseemsabitabsurdandridiculous.Tobefrank,Icannotagreewiththeiropinionforthereasonsbelow.Atthefirstthought,itmayseemtobeanattractiveidea,butitdoesnotbearcloseranalysis.Personally,Iaminfavoroftheformer/latterpointofview.Formypart,Iwouldgoalongwiththeformer/latterpointofview.补充框架关键词：辩证地论证问题的两面性论证框架补充1Computertechnologiesaremoreaccessibleandcheaper.Asaresult,moreadultsworkathomeandchildrenstudyathome.Isthisapositiveornegativedevelopment?练习：完成内容构思构思开头段：转述题目背景---转述题目---引起下文第二段：积极的方面段落中心句---第一个理由---第二个理由第三段：消极方面段落中心句---第一个理由---第二个理由结尾段：总结全文总结全文---概括优缺点

Asoneofthemostimportantinventionsofthetwentiethcentury,computerhasawideapplicationinallaspectsofourlives.Forexample,asubstantialnumberofpeoplerangingfromworkerstostudentsprefertoworkorstudyathomeinsteadofphysicallysittingintheofficeoratschool.Astowhetheritisablessingoracurse,however,peopletakedifferentattitudes.

Thosepeoplewhostronglybelievethatlearningorworkingthroughcomputerathomeseemsbeneficialtopeopleinanumberofaspectshavecogentreasonsforit.initially,themostobviousmeritcanbecontributedtothereleaseoftrafficjams.Sincelesspeopletendtousethepublicorprivatevehiclescommutingbetweenworkplacesorschoolsandtheirhomes,thereisalowerpossibilityoftheincidenceoftrafficjams.Moreover,itisconvenientandtime-savingforpeopletodoso.Distancelearningprogramisagoodcaseinpoint.Thiskindofprogramlargelyhelpspeoplewhoareunabletogotoschoolhaveaccesstoeducation.Finally,workingorstudyingathomeofferpeoplemoretimetostaywiththeirfamilies,whichmakethemfeelcomfortableandrelaxedallthetime.

Onthecontrary,someotherpeoplestronglydespisetheaboveattitude.Tobeginwith,theybelieveworkingorstudyingathomewillprobablyreducethecommunicationamongcolleaguesorclassmates.Theyfearthatthismayencouragepeopletobemoreindifferenttoothers,thusresultingintherelationshipbetweenpeoplenotascloseasinthepast.Anotherconsiderationforthosepersonslieswithpeople’sphysicalimpairmentinducedfromsittinginfrontofthecomputerstoolong.Sinceallworkneedstobedoneoncomputers,barelycanpeoplespareaminuteforrestandacupofcoffee,whichwillinevitablyhazardpeople’shealth.

Allinall,thisdevelopmentcanbetakenbothasbeneficialandasdetrimental.Itisacceptableforpeopletoworkorstudywithcomputersathomeforsakeoftheconvenienceitbringsabout,butitwillalsosparkoffhealth-relatedproblemsandthedecreaseofpeople’ssocialinteraction.Asoneofthemostimportantinventionsofthetwentiethcentury,___hasawideapplicationinallaspectsofourlives.Forexample,____.Astowhetheritisablessingoracurse,however,peopletakedifferentattitudes.Thosepeoplewhostronglybelievethat___havecogentreasonsforit.initially,themostobviousmeritcanbecontributedto___.Moreover,___.Finally,___.Onthecontrary,someotherpeoplestronglydespisetheaboveattitude.Tobeginwith,___.Anotherconsiderationforthosepersonslieswith___.Allinall,thisdevelopmentcanbetakenbothasbeneficialandasdetrimental.Frommyperspective,___.论证框架补充2Youngpeopleareofteninfluencedintheirbehaviorsandsituationsbyothersinthesameage.Thisiscalled“peerpressure”.Dothedisadvantagesoutweightheadvantages?构思练习构思开头段：转述题目背景---转述题目---引起下文第二段：积极的方面段落中心句---第二个理由---第三个理由第三段：消极的方面段落中心句---第二个理由---第三个理由结尾段：自己的观点总结全文---自己的观点Youngpeopleoftenfeelthepressurefromthoseofthesameagearoundthem.Forexample,youngstersmaylearntosmokeiftheyaresurroundedbyyoungsmokerseventhoughtheyarenotawarewhytheysmoke.Thispracticeisdefinedaspeerpressure,whichisnotuncommonamongtheyoung.Asforadvantagesanddisadvantagescausedbythisphenomenon,itshouldbeviewedfromwiderperspectives.Ontheonehand,peerpressuremayhavemanybanefuleffectsontheyoung.Tostartwith,peerpressuretendstoencourageyoungpeopletoimitatewhatothersdoregardlessofwhetheritisrightorwrong.Forexample,cuttingclassesisnotararethingintoday’suniversitiesinChina.Manypeopleattributethisphenomenontosomefactorssuchasboringclassesandlackofsupervision.However,asformanystudents,theyjustplaytruantbecausetheirpeersdoso.Moreover,peerpressuremaycausesomeotherseriousconsequencessuchascommittingcrimes.Youngpeopletendtobeimmatureandcannotmakeunbiasedjudgmentaboutsocialconventionsandlaws.Undertheinfluenceoftheirfriendsorfellowstudents,theymaylearnsomeviolentbehaviorsandevenembarkonthecrimeroad.Finally,peerpressuremaycausesomenegativepsychologicalimpactsonchildren.Ifateenagerfailstoconformtohiscounterparts,hemaybeisolatedfromtheothers,whichmayhurthimpsychologically.However,ontheotherhand,peerpressure,ifputinanappropriatesurrounding,mayhavesomepositiveeffects.Forexample,ifachildisputinanenvironmentwherehisfriendsdevotethemselvestostudy,hemayfeelpressuredtoengageinstudyarduouslytoo.What’smore,peerpressuremayenableyoungpeopletobefullofambition.Specifically,whenayoungpersonseepeoplearoundhimmakegreatprogressinstudyorcareer,instinctivemotivationmayspurhimtoworkhardanddohisutmosttoachievehisgoal.

Toconclude,bothsidesmakesense.Thereforeitseemshardtodefinepeerpressureasablessingoracurse.However,afteranalyzingnumeroussocialcases,wemayfindthatyoungpeopleexposedtopeerpressuretendtobeinfluencednegatively.Therefore,inansweringthequestionofthetopic,wemaysayitsdisadvantagesoutweighadvantages.论证框架补充3

Universitystudentsshouldpayallthecostoftheirstudiesbecauseuniversityeducationbenefitsindividualsratherthanthesocietyasawhole.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?构思练习构思开头段：转述题目背景---转述题目---自己的观点（部分同意/不同意）---引起下文第二段：分析一（承上启下套句）段落中心句---部分同意的几个理由第三段：分析二（承上启下套句）段落中心句---部分不同意的几个理由第四段：自己的综合观点总结全文---强调自己的综合观点---要采取的措施

Itisasclearascrystalthatmillionsofyoungsterscomingfrompoverty-strickenfamiliescannotaffordthehighexpensesofcollegeeducation.However,somepeoplearguethatallthecostoftheiruniversityeducationshouldbepaidbyindividualstudents.Ipartlysidewiththeabovestatementandwillendeavortoexemplifymyopinionthatitisnotuniversallyfeasibleforeveryundergraduatetofinancetheirstudies.Still,thisessayaimstoexplorehowtoassistthoseneedycollegestudentstoaccomplishtheircollegeeducation.

Thereareseveralreasonstoprovethateveryindividualcollegestudentshouldfinancehisowneducation.Foronething,highereducation,forthosewhoexcelinentranceexamforcollegeeducation,cannolongerbeclassifiedintothecategoryofcompulsoryeducation.Foranother,somatureandcapablearetheyouthsthatitishighlypossibleforthemtoearntheirlivingbyworkingthroughtheircollege.Tomakethefinalpoint,educationisaninvestment,whichcanrewarditsinvestorwithhighinterest.Thatistosay,everyindividualcollegestudentis,byallmeans,thebeneficiaryofhighereducation.Inlightofthisstatement,itishighlyjustifiedthateveryuniversitystudentissupposedtofinancehisowneducation,especiallyforthosewhocomefromwell-to-dofamilybackground.

Nevertheless,undernocircumstanceshouldweignorethosespecialcollegestudents,namely,thosewhocomefromimpoverishedfamilybackground.Itisfarfromeasyforthemtoaffordtheincrediblyexpensivetuitionfees.Inthissense,someeffectivemeasuresshouldbedonetohelpthemgetwell-educated.Tobeginwith,theyshouldbeentitledtoenjoythefinancialaidoutofthepublicpurse.Theeconomicsubsidyaimingatpoorstudentsshouldcultivateandnurturemoreprofessionallywell-trainedtalentswhocan,in