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高考英语读后续写之环境描写第2讲1声音特效--拟声词2感官3否定描述1Thefroensnowcrunchedunderourfeet冻结的雪在我们的脚下嘎吱作响。crunchv&n嘎吱作响；嘎吱声2Birdswerechattering/twitteringsomewhere鸟儿在某处唧唧喳喳地叫着。chatter/twitter/chiralsstartedtoroar/howl野生动物开始咆哮。roar/howlv&n咆哮leavesrustledinthewind树叶在风中沙沙作响。rustlev&n发出沙沙的摩擦声5Therivergurgledandburbled河水汩汩地流淌着。gurglev&n发出潺潺流水声；潺潺声6Thethunderwasrumblinginthedistance远处雷声隆隆。rumblev&n发出隆隆声；隆隆声7Thefragilelittletreecracedandfellinthewildhowlingwind这脆弱的小树啪地一下被狂风吹断了，倒在了地上cracv&n噼啪作响,折断一拟声词作动词1Theyheardthetwitter/chatterofbirdsamongthebushes他们听到树丛中鸟儿发出的叽叽喳喳声。2Thedoggaveseveralfiercebars狗汪汪吠了几声。barv&n狗吠wolf'slonghowlac狼的长嚎声让他一动也不敢动。4Theyheardadeesoothedme潺潺的流水声让我很放松。7Iheardtherumbleofthunderinthedistance我听到远处的隆隆雷声。一拟声词作名词1BOOM,CRASH!ThewindwashowlingoutsideofmyhouseWewerehavingaterriblethunderstormIwasveryscared外面狂风呼啸，我们正经历一场可怕的雷雨，轰隆声不断。2CRAC!Thefragilelittletreewasbroenintwobythewildhowlingwind咔嚓一声，狂风把这棵脆弱的小树折成了两半。3ethecreeps滴答滴答！这个老式落地钟的声音让我毛骨悚然。一拟声词作感叹词高考链接--2019年浙江高考题

Butnomorehelicoeanditwasgettingdar参考答案：Janestoandthedistantroarofwildanimalsmadeitetremelyhardforhertofallasleep此处运用了拟声词作名词和排比的用法来凸显Jane在夜晚的孤独无助。视觉上enormous/gigantic/immense/vast巨大的tiny极小的small/little小的s昏暗的dar黑暗的lofty高耸入云steeisty有雾的sunny有太阳的如：theloftymountains高耸的山脉thedimlight昏暗的灯光thesistymorning一个有雾的早晨二感官——sight/touch/sound/smell触觉上hard硬的soft/gentle轻柔的burning/scorching火辣辣的icy/freeing冰冷的biting刺骨的；bone-chilling刺骨的；warm温暖的；wet/dampyroad一条崎岖不平的小路听觉上low小声的high大声的noisy吵闹的deafening震耳欲聋的howling怒号的；猛烈的melodious悦耳的gurgling潺潺的（流水）如：thedeafeninga潺潺流淌的小溪themelodiousvoice悦耳的嗓音thehowlingwind怒吼的大风嗅觉上smelly/foul/stiny臭的;难闻的fragrant清香的fresh新鲜的sweet甜的strong强烈的choing让人窒息的如：thefragrantflowers芳香的花朵thefreshair清新的空气

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Butnomorehelicoeanditwasgettingdar参考答案:JanesatonthedamingdownherdirtyfaceThebone-chilling刺骨的howling怒吼的windforcedhertocurluisshiswarmhug此处将触觉、视觉、听觉结合在了一起。Totellthereaderwhatisnotthereisaneffectwayofshowinghowunfortlessafort这句话通过四个no的排比来体现出这个地方什么都没有，让人十分不舒适。例3：Therewasnolight,notwitterofthebirdsandnolittlenaughtystarsinthesyEverythingwasdeadsilentNotasinglesoundormovementcouldbeheard三否定描述高考链接--2019年浙江高考题Butnomorehelicoeanditwasgettingdar此处可以运用否定描述的写作手法来体现Jane的孤立无援如：Immediately,anabsolutedarnessruledtheforestJanewasstucinthemiddleofnowherewithnofood,nowater,nolight,andmoreimhugsofherhusband,TomDesingdownherfaceAllbrightnesswasgone,leavingnothingWestee,butneitherhenorIcastanyshadowTherewasdulllightallaround,everywhereWhenwewaledonthecrisoshadowshowedthefootself:nothingelseatallNosun,nosy,nohorion,noworld否定描述请欣赏下面2段环境描写

Iseldomoydoorinawintereveningwithouthearingit;Hoohoohoo,hoonerhoo,soundedsonorously,andthefirstthreesyllablesaccentedsomewhatliehowdeardo;orsometimeshoohooonly象声词运用所学知识续写207浙江高考读后续写第二段的环境描写部分。Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway_____________________________________________________________________________