Unit6Imgoingtostudyputerscience.八年级上册英语单元写作深度指导（人教版）（学生版）

Unit6I’mgoingtostudyputerscience.单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度愿望、理想谈论未来的打算与本单元话题相关的书面表达一般是谈论未来的打算。能用begoingto，wantto，hopeto，expectto，bereadyto，planto谈论未来生活的计划与愿望，内容包括未来想要从事的职业或梦想及怎样实现梦想。在写作过程中，学生应做到以下几点：1.能描述自己的梦想或目标，并介绍为实现这一梦想或目标而制定的计划；2.能用begoingto，wantto，hopeto，expectto，bereadyto，planto谈论未来生活的计划与愿望，内容包括未来想要从事的职业或梦想及怎样实现梦想；3.能对未来有所憧憬；4.叙述要有条理，先叙述未来的计划和打算，再叙述打算采取的行动，在谈论行动时要分清主次且按先后顺序进行；总—分—总法写计划◆总：综述自己的愿望；◆分：介绍为实现这一梦想或目标而制定的计划；◆总：对未来的憧憬。【词汇积累】1.cook厨师2.engineer工程师 3.violinist小提琴手4.pianist钢琴家 5.pilot飞行员 6.puterprogrammer计算机程序设计员;编程人员7.takeup开始从事；占用8.growup成熟；长大9.makesure确保;查明10.besureabout确信;对……有把握11.beableto能够做某事12.havetodowith关于；与……有关系13.makethesoccerteam组建足球队14.getlotsofexercise多进行体育锻炼15.practicebasketballeveryday每天练习打篮球16.eathealthierfood吃更健康的食物17.learneducation/medicine/puterscience学习教/医药/电脑科学18.begoodatwritingstories擅长写故事19.takesinging/actinglessons上唱歌/表演课20.learnanotherforeignlanguage学习另一种外语，学习第二外语三、句型积累1.Iamgoingtobeawriter,becauseIlikereadingstorybooks.我要成为一名作家，因为我喜欢读故事书。2.I’mgoingtoexercisemoreandeatlessjunkfood.我打算多多锻炼并少吃垃圾食品。3.It’snoteasytobeeadoctor,soImakeaplanforit.4.IwilllimitthetimeIspendwatchingTVtoonehourperday.我打算限制我看电视的时间至每天一小时。5.Iplantogetmoreexercisetoimprovemyphysicalhealth.6.Togetintothebestmedicalschool,Ineedtogetgoodgrades.为了进入最好的医科大学，我需要取得好成绩。7.Iamgoingtotrymybesttomakemydreametrue.8.Iwanttoheanengineer.我想当一名工程师。9.I’mgoingtopracticebasketballeveryday.我打算每天练习篮球10.I’mgoingtokeeponwritingstories.我打算坚持写故事。11.Manyresolutionshavetodowithselfimprovement.许多决心和自身提高有关系。◆开头句①I'mgladtoknowthatyouwanttobeadoctorwhenyougrowismyadvice.②HereIwanttosharemythreeresolutionswithyou.③I'mgoingtotakeupanewhobby.◆中间句①Youshouldkeepondoingexercise.②Youmustworkhardatschoolandgetgoodgradesifyouwanttobeadoctorinthefuture.③Youshouldreadmorebooksonmedicineinyoursparetimesothatyoucanlearnmoreaboutmedicine.④I'mgoingtocaremoreaboutmyfriendsandhelpthemmoretoimprovemyrelationshipswiththem.⑤I'mgoingtolistentoteachersmorecarefullyinclassanddomyhomeworkbettertogetbettergrades.◆结尾句①Ireallyhopeyourdreamwilletrue.②I'msureIcanachievemyresolutionsifItrymybest.③Justmakesureyoutryyourbest.Thenyoucanbeanyoneyouwant!【谚语积累】1.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。2.Wherethereisawill，thereisaway.有志者事竟成。假如你是林宏，昨天晚上你收到了你的美国朋友Sam的邮件，他告诉你将来他想成为一名医生，但是他不知道该怎么做，所以想请你帮他出谋划策。请你给他回一封80词左右的英语邮件，提出你的建议。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【审题指导】1．文体：应用文(邮件)；2．时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；3．注意事项：注意段落布局并恰当使用复合句或连接词来增加得分点。【思路点拨】【组句成篇】DearSam,I'mgladtoknowthatyouwanttobeadoctorwhenyougrowup.Hereismyadvice.Firstly,youmustworkhardatschoolandgetgoodgradesifyouwanttobeadoctorinthefuture.Youcanenteratopmedicalschoolifyougetaquitehighmarkintheexam.Secondly,youshouldreadmorebooksonmedicineinyoursparetimesothatyoucanlearnmoreaboutmedicine.Thirdly,youshouldkeepondoingexercisetokeepstrong.Beingagooddoctornotonlyneedsrichknowledge，butalsoastrongbody.Thenyoucandealwiththehardandtiringwork.Ireallyhopeyourdreamwilletrue.(一)与职业有关的词汇1.电脑程序员_____________________________________________2.工程师_____________________________________________3.篮球运动员_____________________________________________4.科学家_____________________________________________5.公交司机_____________________________________________6.飞行员_____________________________________________7.厨师_____________________________________________8.医生_____________________________________________9.教师_____________________________________________10.小提琴家_____________________________________________11.钢琴家_____________________________________________12.演员_____________________________________________13.作家_____________________________________________14.歌手_____________________________________________(二)与计划有关的短语1.上表演课_____________________________________________2.学习另一种语言_____________________________________________3.每天练习打篮球_____________________________________________4.上烹饪学校_____________________________________________5.学习弹钢琴_____________________________________________6.组建足球队_____________________________________________7.取得好成绩_____________________________________________8.吃更健康的食物_____________________________________________9.做大量的锻炼_____________________________________________10.完成高中和大学学业_____________________________________________11.坚持写故事______________________________________________12.改善身体健康_____________________________________________13.学习教育/数学/医药/电脑科学_____________________________________________(三)其他重要短语1.长大；成熟_____________________________________________2.确信；对……有把握_____________________________________________3.确保；查明_____________________________________________4.能够做某事_____________________________________________5.在……开始_____________________________________________6.写下；记录下_____________________________________________7.关于；与……有关系_____________________________________________8.开始从事；占用_____________________________________________9.同意；赞成_____________________________________________10.擅长(做)……_____________________________________________11.尽力_____________________________________________12.由于这个原因_____________________________________________二、句子积累写作微技能：＂1＋n＂拓展写作法例：Mikewantstobeawriterwhenhegrowsup.Heisgoodatwriting.Heisgoingtowritemorearticlesandsendhisarticlestomagazines.HeexpectstobeanotherMoYan.1.Tinawantstobeasinger.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Stephenwantstobeateacher.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.Marywantstobeadoctor.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.Davewantstobeareporter.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、以读促写根据短文内容、首字母或所给汉语提示，写出空白处所缺单词的正确形式。每空限填一词。MyFriends’PlansfortheFutureI’manoutgoinggirlandIlikemakingfriends.AndIhavetwopenfriendsfrom1(外国的)countries.aftershefinishes(大学).Sheisgoodatwritingandstillkonwritingevenshehastospendtimeonher(功课)now.Shewrites(文章)and(邮寄；发送)themtomagazinesandnewspapers.SheexpectstobeanotherMoYan.Thoughshedoesn’tmakesifherdreamcanetrue,shehastotryherb.BobisfromPennsylvania,USA,astatebees(著名的)becauseofKobe,awonderfulNBAstar.Kobeishisidol.That’swhyhehopestobeeabasketballp.Bobisgoingtoeathealthierfoodsothathecanbetallerandstronger.Bobalsoplantogotobasketballcampto15(提高)hisskillwhereheisatopracticebasketballeveryday.Hebelieveshisdreamcanetrueaslasheworkshard.What’syourplanforthefuture?Andhowareyougoingtodothat?Pleasewritetoandtellmeaboutit.（一）1．青春，是心里有火，眼里有光，我们这一代人的想象力，不足以想象你们的未来！青春路上，你对未来职业的憧憬是什么？请你以“Iwanttobea/an...”为题写一篇短文。须涵盖以下几个内容：1.Whatisyourdreamjob?2.Whereareyougoingtowork?3.Whichmotto(座右铭)encouragesyoumost?4.Whydoyoulikethisjob?5.Howwillyougetyourfuturedreamjob?6.....要点提示：1.80100词。2.请你根据以上要求，结合自己的实际情况写出你的观点，并适当发挥。3.文章中不得出现真实人名和校名。4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。Iwanttobea/an...________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）2．假如学校本周要进行英语演讲比赛，主题为“MyDream”。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿向大家介绍你的梦想。提示：1.Whatdoyouwanttobe?2.Whydoyouwanttobea(n)...?3.Howareyougoingtobea(n)...?要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Hello,everyone!I’mhappyIcansharemydreamwithallofyouhere.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）3．人人都有梦想，假设你是埃米，请以“MyDreamJob”为题写一篇短文，畅想一下你的未来。内容包括：1.你想做什么样的工作？2.你喜欢这项工作的原因是什么？3.为这个工作你准备了什么或应该怎样做好准备？作文要求：1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；2.语句连贯，词数80左右。MyDreamJob____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）4．梦想是一盏灯，给我们指引方向；梦想是一支笔，助我们描绘未来蓝图。假如你们学校英语俱乐部正在举办以“MyDream”为题的征文比赛，请根据以下提示，把你的梦想写下来。写作提示：1.What'syourdream?2.Whyisityourdream?3.Whatwillyoudotomakeyourdreametrue?写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；词左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。MyDream____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）“有梦想，有机会，有奋斗，一切美好的东西都能够创造出来。”这是习主席对青年的青春寄语。梦想有大有小，每个人都有自己的梦想。假如你叫李平，最近和英国朋友John通过邮件谈论人生梦想的话题，他想了解你的梦想是什么，你为什么会有这样的梦想，你准备怎样实现你的梦想。请根据他的问题回复邮件。要求：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；2.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJohn,I’mgladtohearfromyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing1.（2023·湖北宜昌·统考中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Jack想了解你对未来人生的思考及行动，请你给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：★你想成为什么样的人；★你的理由；★你的具体行动。邮件要求：★80词经右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；★文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。DearJack,Howiseverything?I’mwritingtotellyou________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua2.（2022·青海·统考中考真题）当今，中国正迅速发展，在各方面都取得了令人瞩目的成就。请你以“ChinainTenYears”为题，畅想并描述十年后的祖国。要求：（1）内容积极向上，完整连贯；（2）逻辑清晰，表达准确，书写规范；（3）文中不得出现姓名、校名和地名；（4）词数：80—100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。ChinainTenYearsNowadays,ourcountryisdevelopingfast.Ithasmadegreatachievementsinmanyfields.WhatwillChinabelikeintenyears?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.（2022·广西百色·中考真题）假设你是李雷，是建华中学一名九年级学生。市里将举行一年一度的中学生英语演讲比赛，今年演讲题目为“MyDream”。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语演讲稿为此做准备。提示：1.Whatdoyouwanttobe?2.Whydoyouwanttobea/an…?3.Howareyougoingtobea/an…?要求:1.需包含上述三个要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁；3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；4.文中不能出现“李雷”和“建华中学”以外的人名，校名或地名。MyDreamHello,everyone!I’mgladtobeheretosharemydreamwithyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.（2022·江苏淮安·统考中考真题）梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南，幼年失聪，生活、求学之路充满艰辛，但学医救人一直是她的梦想，她通过读唇语，学会“听”和“说”，凭借刻苦学习、不懈努力，成为一名药学博士。请以“梦想”为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容须包括以下所有要点：1.描述江梦南的成长经历（练习读唇语，努力学习，克服困难，实现梦想）；2.谈谈你的梦想（教师/志愿者……）、原因及如何实现。参考词汇：读唇语readlips注意：1.词数80~100，已给出部分不计入总词数；2.可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。AmongirlJiangMengnanwaspresentedwithTouchingChinaAward.Shebecamedeafatanearlyage.However,shekeptfightingagainstthefate（命运）.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.（2022·浙江台州·统考中考真题）毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“Mydreamjob”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。内容要点参考词汇WhatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrowupateacherascientistWhydoyouwanttobea(n)…?●begoodatmunicating●workwithchildren●beinterestedinscience●inventnewproductsHowareyougoingtodothat?●getagoodeducation●learnhowtoteachchildren●stu