高考英语应用文写作-课件

写作

---基于结构、内容和语言的视角

写作11.培养应用文写作逻辑思维。2.熟悉应用文篇章结构特点。3.牢记应用文语言表达特点。4.精选写作题材与范文分析。1.培养应用文写作逻辑思维。20102应用文的评分原则、细节和样文赏析从结构、内容、语言的视角应对应用文写作03如何改进你的应用文写作0102应用文的评分原则、细节和样文赏析从结构、内容、语言的3假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.参加者；2.时间、地点；3.活动：登山、野餐等。

注意：1.词数80字左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。邀请信2017年6月浙江省高考应用文假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写4一.应用文的总评分原则与细节严谨的行文结构:第一部分应为问候语和写信目的第二部分mainbody活动内容第三部分表达对方应邀的愿望完整的内容、丰富的语言和句式词数少于60或多于100,扣2分内容要点遗漏，或篡改要点，降一档标点符号大面积不规范,扣1-2分书写较差,影响交际,可将分数降一档格式不对,扣一分（一）总评分原则应用文的总分为15分,这一次的均分去零分卷后为9.1。（二）具体评分细节一.应用文的总评分原则与细节严谨的行文结构:（一）总评分原5一.应用文的样文赏析DearChris,

[I'mLiHuaandI'mwritingtoextendmyearnestinvitationforyourparticipationintheoutingorganizedbyme.]Aimingtogainabetteracquaintancewithexoticculture,Ihaveinvited

teenagersIknowallovertheworldtogetactivelyinvolvedin

thisevent.

Forthesakeofconvenience,theoutingfallsinHongKongat9a.m,onJuly6th.Brimfulofintriguingactivitieslikeclimbingandhavingapicnic,thisouting

isboundtobeahugesuccess.Aresponseatyourearliestconveniencewillbehighlyappreciated!

Yours,

LiHua

14分行文结构清晰;适当添加细节使内容完整；语言表达能力强;词汇和句式丰富;完全达到了预期的写作目的开头段：自我介绍+写信目的适当的细节添加：活动的目的、意义（第二句）中间段：活动内容（语言表达地道、词汇丰富、有理有据、行文流畅）结尾段：表达愿望（恰当使用应用文套话）一.应用文的样文赏析DearChris,14分行文结6一.应用文的样文赏析DearChris,I'mLiHua.Iintendtoorganizeatrip.I'llinvitemyfriendswhoyou'llgetonwellwith.WewillgotoHuangshannest

Wednesdaywherewecanvisit

beautifulnaturalviews.Ofcourse,theactivitieswhich

arefantastic.Forexample,climbingthemountainandhavingapicnic.Atthesametime,we'lltakephotosinordertomemoryourtrip.Ibelieveifyoujoinus,you’lllovetheviewsfromthebottomofyourheart.I'mlookingforwardtotravelingwithyou!

Yours,LiHua

行文结构比较完整，若写信目的自成一段可使文章结构一目了然；覆盖了主要内容;有些语言方面的错误,但不影响理解;整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的;8分一.应用文的样文赏析行文结构比较完整，若写信目的自成一段可71.应用文的分类2.应用文的特点3.应用文写作中存在的问题4.解决的策略及实践二、应用文写作

---基于结构、内容和语言的视角

二、应用文写作

8失物招领寻物启事倡议书请假条告知函发言稿（演讲稿、

致辞等）通知（书面、口头）报道……（一）、应用文的分类（Classification）投诉信感谢信邀请信道歉信求助信求职信建议信推荐信申请信祝贺信询问信失物招领（一）、应用文的分类（Classificatio9（二）、应用文的特点Clearinstructure（结构清晰）Substantialincontent（内容充实）Appropriateinlanguage（语言得体）（二）、应用文的特点Clearinstructure10（三）、应用文写作中存在的问题1.卷面不洁2.文体不辨3.格式不妥4.结构混乱5.读者不明6.要点不全7.过度添加8.语法错误9.套语连篇10.观点缺乏（三）、应用文写作中存在的问题1.卷面不洁6.要点不全11内容完整性格式规范性语言得体性应用文内容完整性格式规范性语言得体性应用文12问题分析卷面不洁2.文体不辨3.格式不妥4.结构混乱5.要点不全6.过度添加7.观点缺乏8.语法错误9.套语连篇10.观点缺乏结构内容语言问题分析卷面不洁5.要点不全结构内容语言13例1：

假定你是李明。你校邀请了英国伯明翰大学的ElliotSmith教授来做关于莎士比亚生平的讲座。请你作为主持人向参加讲座的同学用英语介绍讲座情况。内容包括：

1.讲座的教授和讲座的内容；

2.讲座后有自由交流时间；

3.对教授的讲座表示欢迎。注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.参考词汇：伯明翰大学：theUniversityofBirmingham主持稿例1：假定你是李明。你校邀请了英国伯明翰大学14例2：

假设你是淘宝店“Beauty&theBeast”的店主张林，因为给客户李华发错了两件衬衫的尺码和颜色，特向李华书面道歉，愿意提供换货服务，并且打八折优惠以弥补过失。内容包括：

1.自我介绍；

2.诚恳道歉并说明原因；

3.愿意提供免邮费服务和八折优惠；

4.如果对方不同意换货，退货也可以。注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。道歉信例2：假设你是淘宝店“Beauty&t151.卷面不洁，字迹不清1.卷面不洁，字迹不清16高考英语应用文写作-课件17高考英语应用文写作-课件18解决对策：每天一练，日见效果阅卷时的视觉疲劳,速度快，如卷面的不美观，书写差，有时对作文成绩的影响不是1-2分，而是5-6分，所以要把书写放到第一点强调。解决对策：每天一练，日见效果19高考英语应用文写作-课件20行文结构2.文体不辨3.格式不妥4.结构混乱行文结构2.文体不辨212.文体不辨2.文体不辨22称呼署名3.格式不妥称呼署名3.格式不妥23高考英语应用文写作-课件244.结构混乱无分段4.结构混乱无分段25解决对策：仔细审题，明确格式分分段落，结构清晰投诉信感谢信邀请信道歉信求助信求职信建议信推荐信申请信祝贺信询问信请假条告知函倡议书书信、邮件、假条等DearXXX,(称呼)

Yours,(落款)

XXX

解决对策：仔细审题，明确格式投诉信书信、邮件、假条等26失物招领(标题)

Found

(署名)寻物启事(标题)

Lost(署名)书面通知(标题)

Notice

(署名)出通知单位/个人口头通知Ladiesandgentlemen,/Boysandgirls/……,mayIhaveyourattentionplease?

发言稿(演讲稿\致辞)Ladiesandgentlemen,/Fellowstudents/Boysandgirls/……Thanksforyourlistening.

报道(标题)征文（标题）ContributionWanted失物招领(标题)Found27书信的结构开头段：

（自我介绍）背景介绍+写信目的

IamLiHua,aseventeen-year-oldstudent(from…seniorschool).Ihavelearned/beeninformedthat…

NowIamwritingtoapplyfortheposition/expressmygratitude…中间段：

具体问题（主题句）+具体分析（拓展句）

TherearefourmainreasonsthatIamqualifiedforthejob.Firstly,…Besides,…What’smore,…Additionally,…Herearesomedetailsfortheactivity.I’dlikeyoutoknowhowmuchyour…meanttome.Ireallyfinditextremelyhardtodo…Hopefullyyoucouldgivemesomesuggestions.Thefollowingsuggestionscarriedout,thingswouldprobablybecomemuchbetter.Ihavebeenlookingforwardtodoing…However,…IbelieveifyouwereI,youwouldmakethesamechoice.Isincerelyhopethatyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.结尾段：客套话

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucanwritemebackassoonaspossible.Iwouldfeelgreatlyhonoredifyou…(求职信)(邀请信)(感谢信)(求助信)(建议信)(道歉信)书信的结构开头段：（自我介绍）背景介绍+写信目的中间段：28内容完整5.要点不全6.过度添加7.观点缺乏内容完整5.要点不全295.要点不全内容包括：

1.自我介绍；

2.诚恳道歉并说明原因；

3.愿意提供免邮费服务和八折优惠；

4.如果对方不同意换货，退货也可以。5.要点不全内容包括：306.过度添加Wewillgatheratourschoolgatebefore8.am,whichislocatedonChongShiRoad.Pleasegettoourschoolgatebefore8:00am,whichmaybeprettyearlyforbothteachersandstudentsatweekend.YoumaytakeacamerawithyoubecauseI’mprettysurethattheawesomeviewonthetopofthemountainwilldeeplyimpressyouandyouwillhaveastrongdesiretorecordit.6.过度添加Wewillgatheratours31学校发现最近经常有学生违反学校规定，通过美团、饿了么等手机APP订购外卖。假设你是新华中学学生会主席李华，请你代表学生会拟一份书面通知。重申禁令陈述禁令原因呼吁同学样自觉遵守学校规定beharmfultohealthbreaktheschoolrules7.千篇一律，缺少独到观点学校发现最近经常有学生违反学校规定，通过美团、饿了么等手机A32解决对策：相互探讨，相互借鉴；

仔细思索，考虑全面；观点深刻，见解独特；解决对策：相互探讨，相互借鉴；33陈述禁令原因-----观点收集：1.点外卖需要手机，将手机带到学校来不仅会分散我们的学习注意力，还会造成其他的负面影响。Toordertakeout,youmusttakemobilephonesintocampus,whichwilldistractourattentionfromstudy,andexertothernegativeimpactonstudents.2.外卖的食品安全不能得到保障，而学校食品都是经过权威部门检测，可以放心食用。Thesafetyoftakeoutcan’tbeguaranteed,whilethefoodprovidedbyourschoolcanteensarehealthytoeat,becauseitisinspectedbyauthorities.3.点外卖不仅浪费时间还浪费金钱，因为学校的饭菜价格合理，口味多样，品种丰富。It’sawasteoftimeandmoneytoordertakeoutbecauseschoolcanteensprovidefoodwhichisrichintastesandvariety.

陈述禁令原因-----观点收集：344.外卖往往盛放在塑料盒里，塑料很难降解，会对环境造成污染。Takeoutisusuallykeptinplasticcontainers,whichishardtobreakdownanddoesharmtotheenvironment.送外卖的人员随意进出校园,会给校园管理增加困难,对学生的安全也是一种潜在的危险.Thefactthatthedeliverymenoftakeoutenterourcampusatwilladdstothedifficultyofourschoolmanagement.Besides,itisapotentialdangertothesafetyofstudents.4.外卖往往盛放在塑料盒里，塑料很难降解，会对环境造成污染35Notice

Recently,somestudentshaveorderedfastfoodonAPPssuchasMeituan,Eleme.TheirbehaviorshaveviolatedtheschoolrulessoI’mheretorestatetherestrictionthatorderingtakeoutisbanned.

Deliciousasfastfoodis,studentswilllosetheirbalanceofdietsiftheytakelong-termtakeout.Moreover,thesourceoffoodcan’tbeguaranteedsinceproducersaddharmfulsubstancestothefoodforhigherprofit.What’smore,somethievesmaypassthemselvesoffasthedeliverymanwhichisathreattostudents’possessionsandsafetyoncampus.Inaword,thebanisbeneficialtoallofyousoIappealtoeveryoneobeyitautomatically.

students’union----陈汪怡

36语言丰富得体地道8.语法错误9.套语连篇10.不得体不地道语言丰富得体地道8.语法错误378.语法错误（母语干扰）twoT-shirtsinwrongsizeandcolorProfessorTuwillcometoourschoolandgiveusalecture,whichiswelcomedbyShaoxingNo.1HiddleSchool’steachersandstudents.时态、语态误用；主谓不一致；词性混用；从句使用中缺乏语法结构；……8.语法错误（母语干扰）twoT-shirtsinw389.套语连篇Wewillappreciateitifyouareabletojoinusandtakepartinthisconsequentialactivity.First,pleasegettotheschoolgateat8:00am.Afterthatwewillsetouttogetherbybus.Intheend,wewillcomebackat5:00pm.Lastbutnottheleast,youcanbringacameratorecordthehappymoment.Withahistoryof80years,ourschool,whereyouareinnow,isequippedwiththreebuildings.9.套语连篇Wewillappreciateiti39解决对策：夯实语言基础，多实践多积累，仔细研读范文。解决对策：夯实语言基础，40假定你是李华，从互联网上得知第十二届国际未来商业领袖峰会（InternetFutureBusinessLeaderSummit）将在上海举行，并欢迎中学生参加。请你写一封电子邮件申请参加。写作要点：自我介绍（包括英语能力）。参加意图（增加商业知识、提高领导力、加强交流）。希望获准。申请信假定你是李华，从互联网上得知第十二届国际未来商业领袖峰会（I41背景介绍+写信目的Ireadaboutyourannouncementofthe12thInternationalFutureBusinessLeaderSummitpostedontheInternet.Ilearnaboutthe12thInternationalFutureBusinessLeaderSummitadvertisedonline./Igettoknow….Iamwritingtoapplyforparticipationinit./Iamwritingtoexpressmydesiretoparticipateinit.2.自我介绍（着重描写自身优势:英语很棒、交流技能很强、对商业很感兴趣、有参加此类活动的经验……）haveagoodcommandofEnglish,speakEnglishfluently,beskilledincommunication,haveexperienceinattendingsuchsummits,beenthusiasticaboutfinancialactivities背景介绍+写信目的423.申请参加的意图即活动意义（增长商业知识、提高领导力、加强交流、积累经验、拓宽视野、把中国推向世界、让世界更加了解中国、搭建中国与世界沟通的桥梁）enrichmybusinessknowledge,myleadershipcanbegreatlyboosted,theactivitycanpromotetheexchangeofviews,accumulateexperience,buildupfriendshipwithpeersofthesameinterestfromallovertheworld，exposeChinatotheworld,enabletheworldtohaveabetterunderstandingofChina4.结束语（祝愿或希望）Idesirethatmyapplicationcanmeetyourapproval.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.3.申请参加的意图即活动意义（增长商业知识、提高领导力、加43DearSirorMadam,I’mLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentfromChina.Ireadaboutyourannouncementofthe12thInternationalFutureBusinessLeaderSummitpostedontheInternet.I’mwritingtoapplyforanopportunitytojoininit.

Ithinkmyqualificationscanmeetyourrequirements.TwoyearsofEnglishlearningenablesmetocommunicatefluentlyinEnglish.Inturn,throughthesummit,Icandeepenmyunderstandingofbusiness,improvemyleadershipandcommunicatewithstudentsfromothercountriesaswell.Idohopetobeadmittedtoyoursummit.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Regards,LiHuaDearSirorMadam,44开头段的好句：Iamwritingtomakeasincererequestforanopportunitytoparticipateinit.Iamwritingtoexpressmygreatdesireforadmissiontoit.Iamwritingtoapplyforaccesstoit./admissiontoit.Ihappenedtoknowthatthe12thInternationalFutureBusinessLeaderSummitwouldbeheldinShanghai,whichappealstomeagreatdeal.中间段的好句：EconomyorbusinesshaskeptmespellboundsinceIwasachild.---陶沂希IamdedicatedtolearningEnglishfromchildhoodtokeeppacewithtimes.Sothere’snoproblemformetocommunicatewithnativespeakers.–钱俊珺开头段的好句：45ItcanbewellprovedbytheprizesIhavegotinthevariousEnglishCompetitionsthatIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.—方寒ItisnouseshowingoffhowIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,butIdohavenotroublecommunicatinginEnglish.---张豪Remarkablescoresonpapersneversatisfyme.Iholdtheviewthatonlyface-to-facecommunicationcanpromoteslanguageskills.Thatpartlyaccountsformyrequest.---何志臻Withoutdoubt,ifIcouldbeadmittedtothissummit,itwouldbringmesomebenefits.----沈纪年ItwillbeaperfectplatformwhereIcanenrichmybusinessknowledge,strengthenmyleadershipaswellaspromotemutualunderstandingandcommunication.–钟泽宇Itcanbewellprovedbythep46AsanEnglishcluborganizer,IhavebeenengagingmyselfinEnglishlearningheartandsoul.Inreturn,IhaveagoodcommandofspokenEnglish.Attendingthesummitwillsurelygetmewellequippedwithbetterleadership.---鲁家泊结尾段的好句：Ibetmyqualificationwillmeetyourrequirements.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.--王诗引Iwillbeobligedtoyouifyouoffermeapreciousopportunitytoattendthesummit.---夏俊豪IwillbemorethangladifIamblessedwiththisopportunity.—桂宇凡AsanEnglishcluborganizer,47三、如何改进你的应用文写作Tip1:词块的积累Tip2:英语常用句子的熟悉和锤炼Tip3:应用文可以模板化的一些东西专题教学---掌握技巧三、如何改进你的应用文写作Tip1:词块的积累48词块的积累(Adv;Adj)

Adv:relyheavilyon;quarrelbitterly；highlysuccessful;reluctantly;

deliberately；beamplyrewarded；equallypleased;Adj:a

rewardingcause;particularlyappealing;amazing;a

remarkableachievement;enjoytremendouspopularity;promptaction;animpressivereminder;(marvelous;distinguished;splendid;decisive;incredible/inevitible;)词块的积累(Adv;Adj)Adv:49词块的积累(Verb)enablesbtodosth;ensureone'ssuccess;enrichone'sschoollife;encounternumerouschanllenges;enhanceefficiency;refreshone'sspirit/sb;relieveguilt/anxiety/stress;removeobjections/doubt;relaxoneself;restoreone'sconfidence;reassuresb;recallmemories；reveal;replace;containmyfeelings;concealthefact;词块的积累(Verb)enablesbtodosth50Noun体贴consideration;

同情sympathy宽恕forgiveness;

慷慨generosity;感激gratitude;

好客hospitality;忠诚loyalty;

分享sharing；容忍tolerance；理解understanding;见解

insight；志向

ambition;执着,信奉commitment;勤奋devotion;diligence；毅力

perseverance；persistence热情passion=enthusiasm=zeal;智慧wisdom;创造creativity;合作cooperation;

新奇的事物

noveltyNoun体贴consideration;51词块的积累(词组)1、提高improve/enhance/promote/2、努力struggle/strive/sparenoefforts/3、得到gain/acquire/obtain/4、提供，给offer/present/grant/provide/supply5、表达convey/extendone'sgratitudeto...6、实现achieve/realize/fulfill/attain7、记得bear..inmind/neverfade8、有利于contributeto/makefor/9、影响beaffected/influenced/beimpactedby10、应该；besupposedto

期待beexpectedto；一定beboundto

；保证beguaranteedto11、忙于；从事beoccupied/beinvolved/engagedin...12、唤起对...意识arouse/evoke/

one'sawarenessof...13、吸引注意力attract/draw/captureone'sattentioncatchone’seye词块的积累(词组)1、提高improve/enhanc52词块的积累(词组)“目的”的表达式1.inorderto/soasto2.forthepurposeof3.withtheaimof4.inthehopeof5.beaimedat/aimtodo6.bedesignedtodo7.beintendedforsth/sb8.betailoredtosb词块的积累(词组)“目的”的表达式53词块的积累(词组)“活动意义”的表达式1.enrichafter-classlife2.broadenone’shorizon3.getacquaintancewith4.shortenthedistancebetween…5.haveabetterunderstandingofprofoundculture6.buildupfriendship/confidence7.betteroneself8.promotemutualinteraction9.arouse/provokeone’senthusiasm/interest/passion……词块的积累(词组)“活动意义”的表达式54一、巧用名词写封邮件邀请英国朋友Chris参加extendmyearnestinvitationforyourparticipation

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