读后续写(二)“读懂”与“续写”

——“读懂”与“续写”读后续写(二)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。真题探究OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp.”andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Paragraph1：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark.

Paragraph2：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Ⅰ.Readforinformation※读懂WhenWhereWhoHowoneweekendinJulyintheforestJane,TomJanewaslostBehaviorsFeelingsPara.1quarrel,walkedaway1.Para.22.frightenedregretfulconfusedPara.33.Para.4keptmoving,hadtostop,wantedⅡ.Readfortheplot(情节)angrywaslostcriedBehaviorsFeelingsPara.5saw,drank,ate,feltstronger4.Para.65.6.joyful,hopefulheard,tookoff,thinkinghopeful,anxious※续写Climaxheard,tookoff,thinkthat...(helicopters)hopefulsaw,drank,atejoyfulwantedregretfulcryedfrightenedgotlostangryquarrelledBeginningnomorehelicopterswokeupfellings?rescued?EndingⅠ.分析续写的开头语，理顺逻辑关系

段落开头语开头语中的线索词根据开头语，设计新情节可提的问题可设计的情节Para.1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark.helicopters1._________HowdidJanefeelthen?2._______________________________________3.__________________________描写如何在森林里度过darkHowdidJanestrugglethroughthenight?DidJanefallasleep?段落开头语开头语中的线索词根据开头语，设计新情节可提的问题可设计的情节Para.2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.daybreak4.______5.____________WasJanerescued?6.____________________________7.____________________________8.____________________________9.JanewokeupWhorescueJane?HowdidJanefeel?HowwasJanerescued?描写如何救援Ⅱ.续写中可设计的各个方面：surroundings；thoughts；looks；words；actions

激活续写设计的词汇环境forest,stream,rock,berry,valley,steep,cave,lake,waterfall困难hunger，starve，thirsty，injure，broken，blood，panic，shelter，survive，suffer，cold,severe活动walk，climb，fall，crawl，taste，attempt，struggletoone'sfeet，makeone'swayto，pickup情绪toone'sgreatjoy,breakdownrescueteam,doctor,searchfor,spot救援意志、品质calm,courage,will评价amazing,makeitSurroundings：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thoughts：____________________________________________________________________________________________Slowly,thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,anditwashardtoseeanything.Itwasafoggyday.…Shewalkedandwalkeduntilshecametoanopenareawherewaterandberrieswereavailable.Feelingscaredandhelpless,Janesatbesideatreeandheldhershoulderinherarmstomakeherselfwarm.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Actions:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingthroughthethickdarkness,JaneseemedtoseeTom'ssmilingface.Tohergreatjoy,itwasTom!Withamindtofindhim,Janestartedtolookforthelakeindarkness.SoJanemadeadecision.Shedidn'twanttogoonanymore.Shewassotiredandfoundanareawhichwasfullofgrass.Shesleptsoon.Looks:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Words:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Janewasshockedandrantowardshim.SeeingJane,hewassoexcitedandcouldn'tcontainhisjoy.“IfIdidn'tquarrelwithTom,ifIstayedwithTom,didn'twalkaway.Wemusthaveagoodandromanticevening.”Janebegantocryandsaidtoherself.Tomsaid,“Iwon'tleaveyoualoneanymore.”Ⅲ.参考范例Butnomorehelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Amidthe________________(恐怖的黑暗中),

________________(奇怪的声音)ofwildbeastswereheard.“Ifitweren'tfor________________(愚蠢的吵架),Iwouldn't________________(被困在)here,”shethoughttoherself,________________(后悔的眼泪)cloudinghereyes.Surroundedby________________(恐惧和疲劳),Janefelt____________(筋疲力尽的)andfinallysliddreadfuldarknessstrangesoundsthatstupidquarrelbetrappedregretfultearsfearandtirednessexhaustedinto__________(睡着了).“Tom,_____________(是你吗)?”shemurmured.“Tom,__________(救命)!”Inherdream,shesawamanextendinghisarmstowardsheratadistance.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Afterawashing,Janecontinuedtoforceherwayahead.Intheboundlesssearch,shefounditimpossibleto___________________(找到出路),whichthr