2024届高考英语专项写作：开放类文体写作课件

开放类文体写作TopicMyfriendfalls,Ilaugh;myphonefalls,IcryStep1审题

怎么审？PersonalOpinionHowdoyouthinkaboutthetopic?What'syourkeypoints?SupportingIdeasWhydoyouholdthatideas?Forstudentsthemselves?Forthesociety?Fortheirstudy,lifeorrelationship?Forphysicalreasonsorpsychologicalreasons?从哪些方面？根据主观经验Step2：确立写作结构

IntroductionMainBodyConclusionToday,moreandmorepeople.......Frommyperspective,Ibelievethat.......Tobeginwith,.......Additionally,.......Moreover,.......Inconclusion,itismypersonalbeliefthat......,sopeopleshould.......总：背景+观点分分分总：观点+建议五！段！体！Step3：充实内容

句子太短怎么办？！supporting1supporting2supporting3＋论证＋论证论证＋论证方式

史上最强第一种AREAction:(Cause)Result:Effect1EndofResult:Effect2→Withmobilephones,

→peoplecancommunicatewithfriendswheneverandwherevertheywant,→soitmakescommunicationconvenient.

原结终论证方式Mobilephonesmakesitconvenientforpeopletocommunicatewitheachother.史上最强第二种举例论证Forexample,

whenapersonmovestoanothercountry,hisfriendscanstillbeabletocontacthimbyusingmobilephonesappssuchasQQandWechat.论证方式Nowadays,peoplecanusemobilephonestogetintouchwiththeirforeignfriendsinstantly.史上最强第三种对比论证Bycontrast,peoplehadtowriteletterstocommunicatewiththeirforeignfriends,soitwasdifficultforthemtohaveeasycommunication.

回忆Step1：审题摆出观点支持观点Step2：文章结构五段体Step3：充实内容论证方法：ARE举例论证对比论证

范文分析Itisacommonphenomenonthatsomepeoplealwayssay“Myfriendfalls,Ilaugh;myphonefalls,Icry.”Idon’tthinkitareasonablepracticeforthemtobehavethatwayinoursociety.Foronething,moreandmorestudieshavereportedthatmobilephoneaddictioncausesselfishness,unawarenessoftheneedsofothersanddisconnectionfromreality.Secondly,friendsaremoreimportantthatphonesinourdailylife.Asisknowntousall,ifweareintrouble,itisnotourphonesbutourfriendsthatcanreallyhelpusout.Allinall,goodinterpersonalskillsareamustforourfuturesociallife,soputyourphoneawayandmakesomegoodfriends,whichisareallywisemove.范文分析Itisacommonphenomenonthatsomepeoplealwayssay“Myfriendfalls,Ilaugh;myphonefalls,Icry.”

Idon’tthinkitareasonablepracticeforthemtobehavethatwayinoursociety.

Foronething,moreandmorestudieshavereportedthatmobilephoneaddictioncausesselfishness,unawarenessoftheneedsofothersanddisconnectionfromreality.

Secondly,friendsaremoreimportantthatphonesinourdailylife.Asisknowntousall,ifweareintrouble,itisnotourphonesbutourfriendsthatcanreallyhelpusout.Allinall,goodinterpersonalskillsareamustforourfuturesociallife,soputyourphoneawayandmakesomegoodfriends,whichisareallywisemove.

常用句型提升逼格小tips表观点：Iamgreatlyconvinced(that)…我深信…...Thereisnodoubt(that)…毫无疑问地，......Accordingtomypersonalexperience,…根据我个人经验，......AsfarasIamconcerned,…就我而言......Asforme/Personallyspeaking,…在我看来，......提升逼格小tips条理（用于MainBody的Supportingidea）：

First/Firstofall...首先Inthefirstplace...首先Tobegin/startwith...首先

Second/Seccondly...其次

Lastbutnotleast...最后一点常用连词

常用连词提升逼格小tips表因果（用于ARE论证）：Because（of)...因为Therefore...所以Asaresult/consequence...结果Thanksof...因为，幸亏

常用连词提升逼格小tips表举例（用于举例论证）：Forinstance例如Forexample例如

常用连词提升逼格小tips表对比和转折（用于对比论证）：however...但是onthecontrary...恰恰相反nevertheless...尽管如此otherwise...否则instead...相反ononehand...一方面ontheotherhand...另一方面课堂练习Whatdoyouthinkisthegreatestinventionintheworldtoday?Why?

AsfarasIamconcerned,thecomputeristhegreatestinventionsofar.Theoldestkindofcomputeristheabacus,usedinChinamanycenturiesago,butthefirstlargeandmoderncomputerwasinventedin1946.Thecomputercouldworkoutmathsproblemsquitefast.Nowthecomputersaregettingsmallerandsmaller,andcomputingfasterandfaster.Manyscientistsagreethatcomputerscannowdomanythings,buttheycannotdoeveryth