写作简单句高级化

高考英语书面表达特训（二）

学会写规范的英语句子Simplesentence(简单句):Hearingthenews,hewashappy.

B)Compoundsentence（并列句）:HegavemeabookbutIforgottobringitbackhome.

C)Complexsentence（复合句）:Whatheisdoinghasnothingtodowithme.“规范的英语句子”就是我们经常讲的三种句子：句子润色：简单句的高级形式Ⅰ.名词短语做同位语eg：Shakespeare,asonfromapoorfamily,amanoflittleeducation,wroteplaysandpoemsthatarereadallovertheworld.（2008年湖南卷）【即时练习】按括号中的提示翻译下列句子。1.我是李华,四川的一个学生。(同位语)(全国)I’mLiHua,astudentinSichuan.

2.李立，男，19岁，1991年生；籍贯：广东。LiLi,aboyof19,wasborninGuangdongin1991.

3.李华，今年七岁了，最近一直在学习骑自行车。(2002上海卷)Lihua,agirlofthirteen,hasbeenlearningtorideabicycleforseveraldays.

Ⅱ.介词短语与with结构a：介词短语做定语如：李飞,男，10岁，棕色短发，穿白色茄克。LiFeiisaten-year-oldboywithshortbrownhairandinawhitejacket.【即时练习】

依据括号的提示合并每组句子。1.SpringTownisnotbigbutbeautiful.Ithasanareaofabout12squarekilometers.(介词短语)

SpringTown,withanareaofabout12squarekilometers,isnotbigbutbeautiful.2.Thereisanoldtowerthere.Thetowerliesinthesouthofthetown.(介词短语位于句首

Inthesouthofthetownliesanoldtower.1.有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。WiththehelpofTom,

wesoonfoundtheirvillage.2.女孩的妈妈不分青红皂白打了司机一个耳光。

Thegirl'smotherslappedthedriver'sface

withoutfindingoutthetruth.b.介词短语做状语

(一到达),webegantoworkimmediately.

2.我们学生应当通过努力学习而不是考试作弊来获得好成绩。(介词短语)(福建)

Westudentsshouldtrytogetgoodresults

Uponarrival/Onarriving

【即时练习】bystudyinghardinsteadofcheatinginexaminations.eg：_____________________________________(随着社会的快速发展),weshouldhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer.Withthesocietydevelopingveryfastc.with结构

Withhishelp,we'velearnedhowtoanalyzeandsettleproblems.（2006年湖南卷）【即时练习】_________________________________________(随着科学和技术的发展),theworldischangingeveryday.WiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyⅢ.非谓语动词短语做定语或状语a）V-ing

eg：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。Theywerestandingunderthebigtree,waitingforthepresident.Standingunderthebigtree,theywerewaitingforthePresident.b).不定式短语为了学习好,我们需要做体育运动。Inordertostudywell,weneedtodosports.c)V-ed过去分词eg：与其他老师相比,摩尔先生更注意教学方法。(用过去分词短语)(湖南)Comparedwithotherteachers,Mr.Moorepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching.

1.北京动物园,建于1906年,有100多年的历史了。(用过去分词短语)(北京)TheBeijingZoo,builtin1906,hasahistoryofmorethan100years.

2.李华在公共汽车站等601公车上去学。(现在分词短语)(北京)LiHuawasatthebusstop,waitingforBusNo.601togotoschool.

【即时练习】3.__________________________________________(参加英语演讲比赛)isahelpfulwaytolearnEnglish.4.现在，乱扔垃圾很常见，这对环境造成了严重的伤害。（2013安徽卷）Thesedays,

__________________isnotuncommon,____________________________________________.TakingpartinEnglishspeechcompetitionlitteringcausingseriousharmtotheenvironment5.,mobilephonesandtheInternetarefasterandmuchmoreconvenient.

与信件和公用电话相比,手机和网络更快也更方便。(广东)ComparedwithlettersandpublicphonesⅣ.Therebe句型女孩脚没事Therewasnothingseriousaboutthefeetofthegirl.很多原因导致这件事。Therearemanyfactorscontributingtoit.1.沿途800长的大街,有300多家商店。Alongthis800meterstreet,_______________________________.therearemorethan300shops【即时练习】2.有许多人在观看足球赛。________________people_______(watch)thefootballmatch.Therearealotofwatching

3.可能会有一个更聪明的方法来做这件事。

______________aclevererwaytodothis.Theremightbe4.似乎每分钟都有这种笑话被克隆出来。

_________________anewjoke_______(clone)everyminute.ThereseemstobeclonedⅤ倒装句，强调句型，被动语态等倒装句eg：1.Eastoftheteachingbuildingisthelibrary.2.Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependent.(2013福建卷)③

Mayallyourdreamscometrue!Mayourfriendshiplasttilltheendoftheuniverse.!（2007年湖南卷）

强调句式eg：1.新来的交流生非常希望跟我们去晚会。Thenewexchangestudent

doeshopetogotheeveningpartywithus.2.他取得如此伟大的成就是因为他坚持不懈。

Hemadesuchagreatachievementbecauseofhisperseverance.Itwasbecauseofhisperseverancethat

hemadesuchagreatachievement.被动语态

eg:①Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.(NMET2002)②Allclassesaretaughtbyteacherswithrichexperienceinteachingforeignstudents.(2004全国卷Ⅳ)

③Newfactories,housesandroadshavebeenbuilt.(2004江苏卷)巩固练习1.___________________(为了提高我们的英语),ourschoolheldanEnglishcontest.2.___________________(被他的话所感动),Ipraisedhimforhisdeeds.3.___________________(从大自然受益很多),weshouldliveinharmonywithournature.4.

___________________(出生于美国）,ThomasEdisonwasagreatscientistandinventor.（2008年湖南卷）MovedbyhiswordsInordertoimproveourEnglishBenefitingalotfromourearthBorninAmerican5.______________________(只有用这种方法我才能)gainmoreconfidence.[用倒装句式]6.______________________(只有那时,我才认识到)myfault.

7.Aterribleaccidenthappenedyesterday,（9人死亡约80人受伤）

_____________________.

8.我们必须立刻釆取行动，像停止砍树，来改善环境。Immediateaction_____________________,________________________________________________,tobettertheenvironment.(2013江苏卷）OnlyinthiswaycanIOnlythendidIrealizewithninepeoplekilledandalmosteightyinjured.shouldbetakenlikestoppingcuttingdowntrees9.Hefellasleep.Thelightswerestillon.(with结构)Hefellasleepwiththelightson.

10.沿途800长的大街,有300多家商店。Alongthis800meterstreet,_______________________________.