读后续写-比赛中救人-话题语料库讲义 高考英语作文专项复习

比赛体现运动精神，助人彰显人文价值。赛场上并不是只有获胜才能得到大家的交口称赞，人性的光辉更值得大书特书。比赛助人的情节在前几日写到的读后续写：二人比赛

提到了一篇，今天在新高考I卷的完形填空中遇到了相同的话题。积累一下写作素材，建立此类话题的语料库。OnOct.11,hundredsofrunnerscompetedinacross-countryraceinMinnesota.MelanieBailey

shouldhave

finished

thecourseearlierthanshedid.Herdelay

camebecauseshewascarryinga

competitor

acrossthefinishline.（交代了故事发生的背景。简要介绍了事件。本段中的虚拟语气也可以用在文章末尾。虚拟语气是读后续写的座上宾，万金油，很多时候都能派上用场，也不显low）Asreportedbyalocalnewspaper,Baileywas

morethantwo-thirdsofthewaythroughherrace

（跑了三分之二的赛程）whenarunnerinfrontofher

begancryinginpain.She

stopped

to

help

herfellowrunner,DanielleLenoue.Bailey

tookherarm

toseeifshecouldwalkforwardwithaid.Shecouldn’t.Baileythenbentdown

to

letLenoueclimbontoherbackand

carriedher

allthewaytothefinishline,thenanother300feettowhereLenouecouldget

medical

attention.（本段交代了救助过程。先讲了事情何时发生的，然后主人公的一系列动作，首先总写stoptohelp，然后具体描述。tookherarms，

bentdown,let...climbeontoherback,carryheralltheway.文中还提到了一个小波折，伤者无法自己行走，才有了后面背起伤者前行。故事更加可信。）(文中的fellowrunner是第一段competitor的同义词，getmedicalattention得到治疗也是救人场景中的常客。)Oncethere,Lenouewasassessed

andlatertakentoahospital,whereshelearnedthatshehadseriousinjuriesinoneofherknees.She

wouldhavestruggled

withextremepain

tomakeittothataidcheckpointwithoutBailey’shelp.(得到救助，送往医院。被救者的心理。本段也用到了虚拟语气)AsforBailey,sheismoreconfused

aboutwhyheractisconsideredabigdeal.“Shewasjustcrying.Icouldn’tleave

her,”Baileytoldthereporter.“IfeellikeIwasjustdoingtherightthing.”（救人者的心理。语言质朴。）Althoughthetwoyoungwomenwerestrangersbeforethemeet

,they’vesincebecomefriends.Neitherwontherace,butthedisplay

ofhumankindnesswontheday.（neither

but

与notbut相似，两人都没有赢得比赛，但人类的善良赢得了胜利。wintheday可以追溯到古英语，得到广泛应用归功于足球运动的火热教练们希望他们的球员取得更好的成绩，给球员设定特殊荣誉日，球员胜出就会被称赞wintheday指获胜。）描写受伤场景的短语：Bloodgushedfromthewound.Thepain

shot

throughhis/herbody.He/Shewincedinagony.Theinjurylefthim/herwrithinginpain.Thewoundwasdeepandoozingblood.描写助人场景的短语：He/Sherushedtotheiraid.Withouthesitation,he/sheofferedahelpinghand.He/Sheselflesslycametotheirrescue.Intheirtimeofneed,he/sheprovidedassistance.He/She

wentaboveandbeyondto

lendahelpinghand.评价类的英语短语：He/Shedidanoutstandingjob.His/Hereffortswerecommendable.He/Sheshowedgreatcompassionandempathy.He/Shedemonstratedexemplarybehavior.He/Shedeservesrecognitionfortheirselflessness.以下是3篇赛场助人的英语文章：Title:AHeroicActattheFootballMatchDuringathrillingfootballmatch,

disasterstruck

when

aplayerfromtheopposingteam

collapsed

onthefield.Thecrowdwatched

inshock

ashelay

motionless,

clutchinghischestinpain.（把两方的反应放在一个句子中写）Amidstthechaos,ayoungspectatornamedAlex

sprangintoaction.

Withoutasecondthought,hejumpedoverthebarrierandrushedtotheplayer'sside.（此处有伤者，观众和救人者的反应。一帧帧画面的切换就像在看现场直播一样。）Withthehelpofthemedicalstaff,Alex

performedCPR

untiltheplayer

regainedconsciousness.

Hisquickthinkingandcalmdemeanorsavedalifethatday.Thecrowd

eruptedintoapplause,acknowledgingAlex'sheroicact.Hisselflessnessandbravery

remindedeveryoneofthepowerof

compassionandtheimportanceofhelpingothersintimesofneed.（三方的反应，以及最后的评价）Title:ADaringRescueattheSwimmingCompetitionAstheswimmersracedtowardsthefinishline,ayounggirlsuddenly

foundherselfindistress（处于痛苦之中）.She

struggled（常用单词）

tostayafloat,hercriesforhelpdrownedbythecheeringcrowd.（对比，cries与cheering，此处独立主格，drown也预示着主人公即将被drowned）Butamidstthecommotion,alifeguardnamedSarahnoticed

thedesperatesituationunfolding.Withouthesitation,Sarahdoveintothewaterandswiftlyreachedthestrugglinggirl.Withherstrongswimmingskillsand

quickthinking,

she

managedto

bringthegirltosafety.Thespectators

watchedinawe

asSarahemergedfromthewater,cradlingtherescuedgirlinherarms.Herheroicact

remindedeveryoneoftheimportanceof

watersafetyandthecourageittakestohelpothersinperiloussituations.Title:AKindGestureattheMarathonAsthemarathonrunnerspushedthemselvestotheirlimits,oneparticipantnamedMarkbeganto

falter（摇晃）.

Exhaustedand

dehydrated（脱水）,he

stumbled（跌跌撞撞地走）

andfelltotheground.Fellowrunnersrushedpasthim,focusedontheirowngoals.ButonerunnernamedEmilycouldn'tignoreMark's

plight（困境）.Emily

sloweddown

and

offeredMarkahelpinghand.Together,they

managedto

gethimbackonhisfeet.Despitethesetback,Markwasdeterminedtofinishtherace.Emilystayedbyhisside,e