高考英语读后续写友情故事类+暖心老师安排“秘密朋友”活动帮助学生形成深厚友谊+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习友情故事——暖心老师安排“秘密朋友”活动，帮助学生形成深厚友谊1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Asasixthgrader,Ibegannoticinghowotherkidswereseparatingintodifferentgroupsintheclass.Therewerethegeeks,thejocks(小丑),andthepopularcoolkids.Iwasn’tsurewhereIbelonged.AndIthinkthatwasaproblem.Ourteacherhadassigned“secretfriends”forthecomingweek.Thepurposeofthisassignmentwastodonicethingsforyourfriendwithoutlettingthemknowwhowasdoingit.Wecouldleaveencouragingnotesontheirdeskormysteriouslyleaveacardintheirbackpackorbook.Ourteacherwroteeachkid’snameonapieceofpaperandthrewthemintoabucket,thenweeachclosedoureyesanddrewthenameoftheclassmatewhoweweretosecretlybefriendandsupportoverthenextfiveschooldays.Everyonewasexcitedtogetinvolved,includingRochelle.Bythemiddleoftheweek,wehadturnedthisassignmentintoacontesttoseewhosesecretfriendcouldleavethebestgift.Insteadofencouragingnotes,weleftstationarysetsonourfriend’sdesk.Insteadofgivingcompliments,weweregivingbubblegum,lollipopsandevenmoney.Itseemedthateveryonewasgettingcoolpresentsfromtheirfriends.Everyoneexceptme,thatis.4续写原文Mysecretfriendfollowedourteacher’sdirectionswithoutafault.Ireceivedhandmadecards,noteswithnicethoughtsandcountlesssmileyfacepicturessayingthatIwasoneofthenicestgirlsintheclass.Thisfriendseemedtothinkhighlyofmefromthenotesthatwereleft,butthelackofgiftskeptmewonderingwhatwasupwithwhoeverhadpulledmyname.Onthelastmorningofourassignment,Iwalkedintomyclassroomandnoticedapackageonmydesk.Atlast,mysecretfriendhadgraspedtheideathatagiftwaswhatIreallyneeded.Iquicklyrippedopenthegiftpaper,onlytofindasmalldollinside.Thepinkwool-knitdollseemednotnewbutdelicate.Butthegirlssittingnearmegiggledandgossipedaboutthe“littlegirl”giftIhadreceived.5段首句Para1:Hearingthis,Ifeltmyfaceturnred.Para2:ItturnedoutthatmysecretfriendwasRochelle,comingfromapoorfamily.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以找“秘密朋友”活动为线索展开，讲述了老师为了让同学们找到好朋友，举行了找“秘密朋友”的活动。大家都为自己的秘密朋友留下最好的礼物，例如泡泡糖、棒棒糖甚至是钱。而作者收到的确实是手工制作的卡片、便条和笑脸照片，还有一个看起来很不起眼的洋娃娃。作者感到很失望，甚至和其他同学一起取笑这个洋娃娃。这时候，罗谢尔站出来说礼物是她送的，她来自一个贫困家庭，为了送给作者一个礼物，她攒了平时的零花钱。作者顿时感到很羞愧而向罗谢尔道歉，最终罗谢尔原谅了作者，她们成为了最好的朋友。9续写思路分析Para1：Hearingthis,Ifeltmyfaceturnred.由第一段首句内容“听到这些，我觉得我的脸变红了。”可知，第一段可描写作者为收到这样的礼物而感到尴尬，因此，和周围同学一起嘲笑这个“洋娃娃”。这时候，送礼物的罗谢尔难过的跑出去，作者才知道，自己的秘密朋友是她。10续写思路分析Para2:ItturnedoutthatmysecretfriendwasRochelle,comingfromapoorfamily.由第二段首句内容“原来我的秘密朋友是罗谢尔，来自一个贫穷的家庭。”可知，第二段可描写罗谢尔虽然很贫困，但是她依然攒钱给自己的秘密朋友买最好的礼物。11续写思路分析续写线索嘲笑礼物——发现秘密朋友罗谢尔——羞愧——道歉——成为好朋友12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①.开始：begin/start②.分开：separateinto/splitinto③.参与：getinvolved/joinin/attend情绪类①.兴奋的，积极的：excited/active②.羞愧：ashamed/compunctious13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].WhenIcontinuedwithmeanremarks,agirlsittingatthelastrowaroseandcameup,castingmeanangryanddisappointedlook.(由连接词when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2].SoashamedwasIthatittookmeafewdaystopluckupmycouragetofaceuptoRochelleandapologize.(副词so后接形容词ashamed位于句首,其后用部分倒装)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Hearingthis,Ifeltmyfaceturnred.Embarrassedandashamed,Isecretlycomplainedthatthegirlgavemesostupidagifttoarouseothers’derision.Ievenjoinedothergirlsingossipingaboutmysecretfriendandthepoordoll.WhenIcontinuedwithmeanremarks,agirlsittingatthelastrowaroseandcameup,castingmeanangryanddisappointedlook.Withtearsstreamingdownherface,sheadmitted,“I’myoursecretfriendandI’msorryaboutthegift.”Thensheranoutoftheclassroom.Frozenwithshock,Icouldn’tutterasingleword.16范文呈现ItturnedoutthatmysecretfriendwasRochelle,comingfromapoorfamily.Shehadsavedeverypennyinherpocketmoneyinordertogivemeacoolgift.Withthelimitedmoney,shevisitedalotofstoresandfinallyselectedthelovelydollfromasecond-handstore.Actually,shegavemeamostvaluablegiftwithhersincereheart.However,Ididn’ttreasureandhurtherbadlyinsuchacruelway.SoashamedwasIthatittookmeafewdaystopluckupmycouragetofaceuptoRochelleandapologize.Muchtomydelight,sheforgavemeandlaterwebecamebestfriends.Mostimportantly,wefoundwherewebelonged.17范文译文听到这里，我觉得自己的脸都红了，既尴尬又羞愧，我偷偷抱怨说，这个女孩送给我这么笨的礼物，是为了引起别人的嘲笑。我甚至和其他女孩一起八卦我的秘密朋友和那个可怜的娃娃。当我继续说刻薄的话时，坐在最后一排的一个女孩站了起来，走了过来，向我投来愤怒和失望的目光。她泪流满面，承认：“我是你的秘密朋友，很抱歉收到礼物。”然后她跑出了教室。我吓得浑身发抖，一句话也说不出来。18范文译文原来我的秘密朋友是罗谢尔，来自一个贫穷的家庭。为了给我一份很酷的礼物，她把零花钱里的每一分钱都存了下来。用有限