读后续写舞台表演类-Mrs+Sally鼓励我表演 讲义 高考英语作文复习专项

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Inthefirstandsecondgrades,Iwasextremelyshy.Ihadfriends,butitjustwasn’tinmypersonalitytobevery

outgoing,evenifIknewsomeonewell.Iwasevenquieterwithstrangers,andsoIwasn’tverygoodatmeetingnewpeople.IwasafraidthatIwoulddoorsaysomethingwrong.

Soinourschool’sannualgrand

play,Iusuallysatinasecluded(僻静的)cornertowatchthe

performance

alone.Ihopedtositinthe

background

andwatchtheactorssweatinfrontofallthosepairsofeyes.

Onedayinthethirdgrade,my

teacher

Mrs.Sallycalledmeintoherofficeandsaid,“Oh,Mary,you’regreatat

memorizing

things,andyouhavesuchasweetpersonality.PerfectforJenny!”

ButIbowedmyheadanddarednotspeak.Theteachersawthisandthensaid,“Ofcourse,plentyofgirlswouldlovetherole,and1couldfindsomebodyelse.ButIhopeyoucouldtryitforme.IhadyouinmindforJennywhilewritingtheplay!Ifyoureallydon’twantto,Iwon’tforceyou.It’syourchoice.”

Mymindwasspinningfasterthanthewindmill(风车)ontheschoolplayground.Mrs.Sally,whomIlovedand

admired,wantedmetoplaythisrole.Shebelievedinme.MyeyesmovedacrosstheroomtoaposterIhadnevernoticedbefore.Itshowedashootingstarandread,“Ifyoureachforthestars,youmightatleastgrabapieceofthemoon.”IlookedintoMrs.Sally’s

shining

blueeyesandsaid,“Okay,I’lltry.”Irealizeditwastimeto

throwoff

myshymaskandshowtheworldwhoIreallywas.

Inthefollowing

fivemonths,theteachertaughtmehowtoset,putonmakeup,memorizelines,createcostumesandsoon.Gradually,Imasteredmylinesandsongs.

Paragraph1：Thebigdaycameatlast.Paragraph2：Atthattime,Mrs.Sallycamebackstageforherfinalcheck-upandnoticedmynervousness.

下水作文：Thebigdaycameatlast.

GiventhatIhadgotwellpreparedfortheannualgrandplayafter

fivemonths

ofprofessionaltrainingfromthe

teacher,Isteppedconfidentlytothebackofthestage.WithMrs.Sally’sencouragingwordsstillcirclinginmymind,IhadthefaiththatIcouldmakeittoday.Standingbehindthecurtains,Istill

memorized

thelinesandpracticedsongs,imaginingmyselfactingonthestage.However,thewarmingupmusic,theflashingstagelightsandthecheeringaudienceallbroughtmebacktoreality.Andtherealizationthrewmeintoaseaofnervousnessagain.98Atthattime,Mrs.Sallycamebackstageforherfinalcheck-upandnoticedmynervousness.

Gatheringmeintoherarms,shecomfortedmethatIwouldcertainlybringthebestoutintheperformancewithsomuchpractice.Encouragedandrelieved,Iwasready.Nowcameourshowtime.Thenext

15minuteswitnessedouramazing

performance,everyoneimmersedintheroleandItotallyforgettingmynervousness.

Whentheplayendedwithourbowofthanks,thehallexplodedwiththunderousapplause,indicatingthatwehadmadeit.Myclassmatesandfriendscamegatheringaroundme,congratulatingmeonthesuccess.Butbestofall,theexpereiencehelpedme

throwoff

myshymask,leadingtheshygirlontothepathtobecoming

outgoing.

110文章大意：Iusedtobeanextremelyshygirl.Noexperienceforschool'sannualgrandplay.Onedayinthethirdgrade,myteacherMrs.SallyencouragedmetoactapopularroleJenny.screwed/plucked/musteredupmycouragetoplaytheroleanddeterminedtochallengemyself.WiththehelpofMrs.Sally.Igraduallymasteredmylinesandsongs.WriteforplotParagraph1:Thebigdaycameatlast.O1:HowdidIfeelbeforetheperformance?Q2:WhatdidIthinkof?WhatdidIdo?Paragraph2:AtthattimeMrs.Sallycamebackstageforherfinalcheck-upandnoticedmynervousness.Ql:WhatwasMrs.Sally'sreactiontomynervousness?Q2:HowdidIplaytherole?HowdidIfeel?Q3:Howaboutthefinalperformance?HowdidIfeelthen?Q4:Howcanyoudesigntheendingmoreappealingandmeaningful?语言积累：1.被紧张充满，我感觉心跳加快，以至于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软,我的手紧紧地抓住我的戏服。Seized/Consumed/Overcome/overwhelmedbyasurgeofnervousness,feltmyheartwaspoundingsowildlythatmythroattightened,mykneesfeltweakandmyhandsgrabbed/squeezedmycostumetightly.2.（倒装）我一复习台词一阵紧张感让我脸更红HardlyhadIreviewedmylineswhenaflushofnervousnessdeepenedtheredofmycheeks.（独立主格）我深呼吸，开始复习台词，手抖得厉害/手心冒汗Itookadeepbreathandstartedtoreviewthelines,myhandsquiveringviolentlysweating.回想过去五个月的训练，我似乎对自己有了信心。(现在分词作状语lookbackon...)Lookingbackonthefivemonthsofpractice,Iseemedtohaveconfidenceinmyself.我一路小跑到学校大厅的后台。(jog/trot)Ijoggedallthewaytothebackstageoftheschoolhall.我找到内心深处一个真正的自我，一个深藏很久的更加勇敢和外向的我(同位语，定语从句)Ifoundanewpersoninsideme,amuchmoredaringandoutgoingpersonwhohadbeenhiddenallalong.然而，我正准备上台作，这时，我几乎要晕倒，脑海一片空白。(beabouttodosthwhen...)However,IwasabouttogoonstagewhenIfeltalmostfaintedandmymindwentblank.参考范文：Thebigdaycameatlast.Ijoggedallthewaytothebackstageoftheschoolhall.Cameraswerelightingupinalldirections.Lookingbackonthefivemonthsofpractice,Iseemedtohaveconfidenceinmyself.Ifoundanewpersoninsideme,amuchmoredaringandoutgoingpersonwhohadbeenhiddenallalong.However,whenIwasabouttogoonstage,myheartwaspoundingsohardthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.

Atthattime,Mrs.Sallycamebackstageforherfinalcheck-upandnoticedmynervousness.“Itdoesn’tmatterhowyoudotonight,”shesaid.“You’vealreadyshownhowwonderfulyouare.”LookingintoMrs.Sally’sshiningblueeyes,Icalmeddownandthenwalkedont