人教版高中英语必修一 （Travelling Around）Reading for Writing 教学课件

SectionⅦ

ReadingforWriting—有关旅行计划的电子邮件

TravellingAround

本单元的写作任务是读理查德给小李介绍旅行计划的电子邮件后，给朋友写一封介绍旅行计划的电子邮件。

Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)LearningtowriteafterthemodelDearXiaoLi，MytimehereinChinaisgoingwell.Ilovemynewschoolandclassmates.OvertheOctoberholiday，myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmy.I’veheardthatitisanamazingsight，andIcan’twaittogo.TomethestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.It’samazingthattherearemorethan8，000statues，andnooneinmoderntimesknewaboutthemuntilthe1970s.We’realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi’an.MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum，becausemydadloveshistoryandIhaveheardthatthismuseumisknownasa“Chinesetreasurehouse”！We’realsogoingtotheXi’anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.We’retakingthetrain，leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.We’rearrivingat9：30amandwillstartsightseeingrightaway，soIhopewesleepwellonthetrain!Iguessthat’sallfornow！I’llwriteagainsoonandsendphotos！Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingholiday？Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yourfriend，Richard(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①________________利用

②________________

如下③________________游览

④________________出发⑤________________七日游

⑥________________欣赏风景⑦________________动身去某地

⑧________________和……一起⑨________________即将来临

⑩________________乘公共汽车

takeadvantageofasfollowstakeatoursetout/offaseven-daytripenjoythesceneryleavefortogetherwitharoundthecornertakeabusⅡ.While-writing假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的好友李华写一封e-mail,分享你的出行计划。要点：1.元月21日下午2点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预订酒店，休息一晚。2.第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。3.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。

4.元月24日乘坐高铁返回。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数100左右。参考词汇：highspeedrailway高铁book预订Disneyland迪士尼乐园recreationfacilities游乐设施souvenir纪念品ShanghaiScienceandTechnologyMuseum上海科技馆OrientalPearlTower东方明珠

Step1

Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：_____________________________________________Paragraph2：____________________________________________Paragraph3：_____________________________________________Step2

Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①________________vt.

预订②________________

登记③________________提前

④________________同时⑤________________四天的旅行

Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.WhatweshalldoeverydaywhileinShanghai.Howabouttheplanforyourwinterholiday?bookcheckininadvanceatthesametimeafour-daytrip2.Sentences①随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。(as)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________②到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网上预订，这样我们才有足够的精力去参观上海。(sothat)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________③下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏到上海的全景。(fromwhich)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asthewinterholidayiscoming，Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.UponarrivinginShanghai，wewillcheckinthehotelforagoodrestfirst,whichwillbebookedonlineinadvance，sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytovisitShanghai.WewillclimbtheOrientalPearlTowerintheafternoon，fromwhichwewillenjoythewholeviewofShanghai.DearLiHua，Howiseverythinggoing?Asthewinterholidayiscoming，Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.Hereismyplan.WeareleavingLilingforShanghaibythehighspeedrailwayataround2：00p.m.onJan.21st.UponarrivinginShanghai，wewillcheckinthehotelforagoodrestfirst，whichwillbebookedonlineinadvance，sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytovisitShanghai.Onthesecondday，wearegoingtotheDisneylandtoexperienceallkindsofrecreationfacilities，andbuysomesouvenirsatthesametime.Onthethirdday，wewillvisitShanghaiScienceandTechnologyMuseuminthemorning.Besides，wewillclimbtheOrientalPearlTowerintheafternoon，fromwhichwewillenjoythewholeviewofShanghai.OnJan.24th，wewilltakethehighspeedrailwaybacktoLiling.Howabouttheplanforyourwinterholiday?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，WangMingⅢ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Isthereaclearpurposeforthetrip?□2.Doeseachparagraphhaveaclearmainidea?□3.Doesthewriterusethepresentcontinuoustenseforfutureplans?□4.Doesthewriterusecommas，stops，andquestionmarkscorrectly?□5.Areallthewordsspeltcorrectly?□6.Areallthepropernounscapitalised?写作要点Timeandtraveldestination：OvertheOctoberholiday，myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmy.Someotherplacesofinterest：MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum.WearealsogoingtotheXi’anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.Meansoftransport：We’retakingthetrain，leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.亮点表达1.旅游计划①Mytravelplanisasfollows.我的旅行计划如下。②Here/Belowismytravelplan.这儿/下面是我的旅行计划。③Winterholidayiscoming.Ihaveaplanforit.寒假要来了。对此我有一个计划。

2.旅游目的地①Thismonth，IwilltraveltoChangshaandZhangjiajiewithmytwofriends，whichissupposedtobeaseven-daytrip.这个月，我将和我的两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游，这应该是一次七日游。②I’mplanningtotraveltoSuzhou，acitycalledEasternVenice.我计划到苏州旅游，它被称作东方威尼斯。③TheMayDayiscoming/approaching，andIamgoingtotraveltoShanghaitoseeitsbeautifulscenery.五