2024高考英语读后续写-高考新题型例题讲解素材

第第四页2024高考英语读后续写——高考新题型例题讲解Ⅰ.Ouraims:1.Weneedtoknowthethreestepsofdoingcontinuationwriting.2.Wecanfinishthewholewritingbyourselves.Ⅱ.Classprocedures:ThreestepsStep1.ReadStep2.ThinkStep3.WriteMakethestoryclearer(梳理情节)事件线时间线地点线物品3.Makesurethetheme(确认主题)主题人与自我识别问题JohnSmith很健忘，打算带孩子去海边小镇，却忘了小镇名字，回家找到名字，又忘了自己该做什么。问题解决顺利想起自己忘记的事情解决途径妻子和朋友的帮助Tips：(1)IfJohnSmiththinksofwhatheisgoingtodo?(2)Whodidthe“cry”inthesecondparagraph?5.Makearouteofthefollowingstory(确定后续故事的大致走向)Para1首句Para1首句“What’sthematternow?”askedhiswife.阶段结果Para2首句Hearingthecry,outrushedtheirneighbors,tryingtofindoutwhathadhappened.阶段结果6.确定每段的具体情节Paragraph1:“What’sthematternow?”askedhiswife.发出者与上个情节衔接点动情微情节1JohnSmith妻子问怎么了解释为什么站在那里害怕,焦急微情节2解释微情节3JohnSmith被质问微情节4妻子得知实情生气Homework课下完成paragraph2续写。Paragraph2:Hearingthecry,outrushedtheirneighbors,tryingtofindoutwhathadhappened.发出者与上个情节衔接点动情微情节1朋友邻居听到争吵打电话生气微情节2JohnSmith接到朋友的电话开车去接孩子焦急微情节3妻子丈夫离开打车跟上丈夫担心原文AfriendofminewhosenamewasJohnSmithhadabadmemory，whichmadehimfamous.Hewassoforgetfulthathesometimesforgotwhathewastalkingaboutinthemiddleofasentence.Hiswifehadtoconstantlyremindhimabouthismeetings,hisclasses—evenhismeals!Onceheforgothehadeatenbreakfasttwice,athomeandatschool.Hiswifelikedtoremindherneighbors,“IfJohndidn'thavehisheadtiedon,hewouldforgetthattoo！”SinceSmithwasaprofessoratawell-knownuniversity,hisforgetfulnesswasoftenanembarrassmenttohim.Itwasn'tthathewasnotclever,assomecriticalpeopletendedtosay,butjustvery,veryabsent­minded.Onehotsummerday,professorSmithdecidedtotakehischildrentoaseasidetownaboutathree­hourtrainrideaway.Tomakethetripmoreinterestingforhisyoungchildren,hekeptthenameofthetownasecret.However,bythetimetheyarrivedatthestation,Smithforgotthenameofthetownhewasplanningtovisit.Luckily,afriendofhishappenedtobeinthestation.HeofferedtotakecareofthechildrenwhileSmithhurriedbackhometofindoutwherehewasgoing.Theprofessor'swifewassurprisedtoseehimagainsosoon.“Oh,mydear,Iforgotthenameofthetown.”“What?Youforgotthename?Maybeonedayyouwillforgetmyname!NowI'llwritethenameofthattownonapieceofpaper,andyouputitinyourpocketandplease,pleasedon'tforgetwhereyouputit.”Satisfiedthatshehadsolvedtheproblem,shesentherhusbandoffagain.Tenminuteslatershewasastonishedtoseehimoutsidethehouseforthethirdtime.注意：1.所续写短文词数应为150左右2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已给出，不计入总词数；