基础写作-地点介绍

说明文—地点简介基础写作Howtointroduce

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Location:1)Sp.

belocatedin(on/to)theeast/north/centerof…2)Sp.

liein(on/to)thetop/footof…

介绍地点常用的短语和句型：

1)Theareaof+Sp.

is…2)Sp.

＋covers/hasanareaof….3)withanareaof…

Area:Population:

1)Sp.

hasapopulationof…2)Thepopulationhasgrown/increased/decreasedto…3)Thecity,withapopulationof…,is…

__________theeastofAsia,China________________9.6millionsquarekilometers__________________1.3billion.Location:intheeastofAsiaArea:9.6millionK㎡Population:

1.3billionLocatedincoversanareaofwithapopulationofLocation+area+populationLocatedin(to/on)…,Sp.coversan

areaof…withapopulationof…History:

1)…has/ownsalonghistoryof…

2)withalonghistoryof…History+symbol+cultureWithahistoryof…,Sp.,whosesymbolis…,isfamousfor…History:over4,000yearsSymbol:FiveGoatsCulture:

LingnanCultureGuangzhou_________________over4,000years,Guangzhou,______________isthe“FiveGoats”,_____________LingnanCulture.Withahistoryofwhosesymbolisfamousforclimate:1)

Itisvery/quitecold(hot…)alltheyearround.2)Sp.hasawarm/coldclimatewithplentyof…3)Theaveragetemperatureof…is…4)Itisneithertoocoldnortoohot.2)Sp.hasawarm/coldclimatewithplentyof…3)Theaveragetemperatureof…is…

Climate:

warm,plentyofsunshineTheaveragetemperature:25.5℃

SanyainHainanProvince,has_______climate____________sunshineand_____________________is25.5℃.Sanya

awarmwithplentyoftheaveragetemperaturescenery

1）Sp.hasmanyfamous/well-knownplacesofinterest,particularly/suchas...andsoon.2）Sp.beafamoussummerresort.1）Sp.hasmanyfamous/well-knownplacesofinterest,particularly/suchas...andsoon.FeishaBeachhotsprings

Taishanhasmany_________________,_______FeishaBeachinShuangchuanIsland,hotspringsand_____.placesofinterestsuchassoonseafoodTaishan____________riceandseafood.riceisrichinLocalproducts:

Localproducts:1)Sp.isrichin…2)…befamous/well-knownfor…3)…behometo…UsefulExpressions写作组合建议运用句型位置+

面积+人口历史文化或特色气候特征名胜景观物产Locatedin(to/on)…,Sp.coversanareaof…withapopulationof…①Sp.isacitywithalonghistory.②Withahistoryof…,Sp.,whosesymbolis…,isfamousfor…①Sp.hasa…climatewithplentyof…②Theaveragetemperature

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…Sp.hasmanyplacesofinterest,particularly/suchas...andsoon.①Sp.isrichin…②Sp.isfamousfor…/behometoPractice基础写作Step1:

审题（内容、时态、人称）Step2:

理清要点，整理成5个句子Step3:句子翻译Step4:

检查、润饰,

添加适当过渡词语ThestepsofBasicWriting

假设你是广州亚运会一名志愿者，请你用5个句子写一篇英语短文，向外宾介绍广州。【写作内容】城市名称广州，广东省的省府地理位置广东省中部面积7434.4平方公里人口9,980,000历史文化不仅历史悠久,还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路(SilkRoadonthesea)”的发祥地;以“五羊”

为象征,以岭南文化著称.气候特征气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水充沛，年平均气温为21.8℃

。风景名胜旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景”。(EightScenesofGuangzhou)Step1:审题第三人称(Guangzhou)审内容：介绍广州审时态：地点简介属于说明文，用一般现在时审人称：

Step2:理清要点整理成5个句子城市名称广州，广东省的省府地理位置广东省中部面积7434.4平方公里人口9,980,000历史文化不仅历史悠久,还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路(SilkRoadonthesea)”的发祥地;以“五羊”为象征,以岭南文化著称。气候特征气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水充沛，年平均气温为21.8℃。风景名胜旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景”。(EightScenesofGuangzhou)①②③⑤④

Step3:翻译句子城市名称广州，广东省的省府地理位置广东省中部面积7434.4平方公里人口9,980,000历史文化不仅历史悠久,还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路(SilkRoadonthesea)”的发祥地;以“五羊”为象征,以岭南文化著称。气候特征气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水充沛，年平均气温为21.8℃。风景名胜旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景”。(EightScenesofGuangzhou)①②③⑤④10分钟◆

Exchangeyourcompositionwithyourdeskmateandhelpeachothertoimproveyourwriting.

在评改时，应注意以下几个方面：

1、在语言方面,重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范;是否使用了合适而且较丰富的句型结构;是否用上了较高级词汇。2、在内容方面，重点评判是否表达全部规定的5项内容，在表达完整的5项内容时，适当添加一些内容，不扣分。

3、在连贯性方面，重点评判5个句子是否构成一篇连贯的短文；是否合理使用了过渡词语。

Step3句子翻译广州，广东省的省府，位于广东的中部，面积是7434.4平方公里，人口是9，980，000。①_____________________Guangdongprovince,Guangzhou,_________________ofGuangdongProvince,________________7434.4squarekilometers______________________9.98million.Locatedinthemiddleofthecapitalcitycoversanareaofwithapopulationof

Step3句子翻译②不仅历史悠久，还是中国古代“海上丝绸之路”的发祥地。Guangzhouis_______acity_______________,_______thebirthplaceoftheancient“SilkRoadontheSea”.notonlywithalonghistorybutalso③以“五羊”为象征，以岭南文化著称。Guangzhou,______________is“FiveGoats”,_______________LingnanCulture.whosesymbolisfamousfor

Step3句子翻译④气候温暖，阳光充足，雨水(rainfall)充沛，年平均气温为21.8℃Guangzhouhasa__________climatewith______________________________and_______________________isabout21.8℃.warmplentyof

sunshineandrainfalltheaveragetemperature⑤旅游资源丰富,如著名的“羊城八景”。Guangzhou_________________________fortouriststovisit,______________the“EightScenesofGuangzhou”.hasmanyplacesofinterestparticularly

Step4:检查、润饰,添加适当过渡词语

①LocatedinthemiddleofGuangdongProvince,Guangzhou,thecapitalcityofGuangdongProvince,coversanareaof7434.4squarekilometerswithapopulationof9.98million.

②Guangzhou

isnotonlyacitywithalonghistory,butalsothebirthplaceoftheancient“SilkRoadontheSea”.

③__________,Guangzhou,whosesymbolis“FiveGoats”,isfamousforLingnanCulture.

④________________,Guangzhou

hasawarmclimatewithplentyofsunshineandrainfallandtheaveragetemperatureisabout21.8℃.⑤_______________,Guangzhou

hasmanyplacesofinterestfortouriststovisit,particularlythe“EightScenesofGuangzhou”.What’sm