特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第16练

特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第16练练中自评——在强化训练中发展自己一、语法填空(2023·商洛三模)MountWuyiisthemostoutstandingareaforbiodiversityconservationinsouth-eastChinaandaplacefor__1__largenumberofancient,relictspecies,manyofthemunique__2__China.ThebreathtakingbeautyofthegorgesoftheNineBendRiver,withitsnumeroustemples,manynowinruins,providedthesettingforthedevelopmentandspreadofConfucianism,whichhasbeen__3__(influence)intheculturesofEastAsiasincethe11thcentury.MountWuyiwaslistedasaWorldCulturalandNaturalHeritageSitein1999for__4__(it)richcultureforthousandsofyears,Danxialandformandawide__5__(various)ofanimalsandplants.Also,it__6__(announce)astheNationalAAAAATouristAreain2007andhaslongbeenanexcitingplaceforbeautifulsightseeingandsummerresorts.ThenaturallandscapeiscombinedwithastronghumanisticandculturalatmosphereinMountWuyi.__7__(take)abambooraftandfloatingdownthestream,visitorscanenjoythenaturalsceneryofwonderfulmountainsandrivers,meetmysterioushangingcoffinsalongthebanksoftheriver,__8__admiretheover2,000-year-oldHanDynastyancientruinsandtheacademy__9__Zhuxilecturedfor10years.Asteaculture__10__(become)moreandmorepopularinrecentyears,teaexplorationisareasonformoreandmorepeopletovisitMountWuyi.锁定最难的那一个——一个都不能错第6题的提示词是动词，如果在知晓空处应该填谓语动词时，需要同时考虑其时态、语态及主谓一致问题，announce与其主语之间为动宾关系，故用被动语态，陈述过去的事情，且主语it为单数，故用wasannounced。微点：解决动词的时态、语态及主谓一致问题时，其常用解题依据有三条：一是主语及时间状语；二是平行的谓语动词与主语之间的关系；三是上下文语境。二、短文改错Iwasgoinghomebybikeinacoldafternoonwhenmybikebrokedown.AsIwaswonderinghowtodo,anoldmancameover.Heofferedtohelpmeandsoonmybikerepaired.Ithankedhimbutaskedhowtorewardhim.Sheshookhisheadandthentoldmeastoryabouthowaboyhadhelpedhimtwoyearbefore.Hisstorymovedmedeep.Ilookedattheman,withmyeyesfillingwithtears.Ineverthoughthecouldkeepsuchalittleincidentinthemindforyears.OnlythendoIbegintobelievethatonegoodturndeservesanother.查找最隐蔽的那一个——一个都不能少把握文章主体时态，从容作答有关时态类题目。本文主体时态为一般过去时，尝试找出与原文不一致的时态。三、书面表达eq\a\vs4\al(体裁：事理说明文)假定你是李华，你校正在组织主题为“Honesty”的英语作文比赛，请你写一篇短文参赛。内容包括：1．诚信的重要性；2.如何做诚信的学生。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________评中赋能——在细节打磨中完善自己推荐最美的那一篇—一分都不能丢eq\a\vs4\al(与其理论说教不如现身说法)悟范文·背范文/在诵读中提升HonestyAsthesayinggoes,“Honestyisthebestpolicy”，whichshowstheimportanceofhonesty.Honesty,acknowledgedasagoodvirtue①，isalwaysadmired.Usually,honestpeoplewinrespectwhilealiarislookeddownupon,becauselyingleadstodistrustandevenruinsone'sreputation.Sohowtobeanhoneststudent?Tobeginwith,don'tcopyothers'homeworkorcheatintheexams.Besides,becommittedtoyourpromiseandtrytodothingswell.What'smore,tellthetruthandnevertelllies.Onlyinthiswaycanyou②makeprogressinyourstudyandmakemorefriends.Ifyou'rehonestwithothers③，you'llbetreatedlikewise.I'mfirmlyconvincedthatanhoneststudentisboundtohaveabrightfuture.学结构·学语言/在仿效中增分(一)学结构布局之妙整篇文章共分三段，结构清晰，层次分明。第一段引入话题“诚信”，并指出其积极意义；第二段阐释话题：如何做一个诚信的人；第三段总结话题：诚信之人才有光明的未来。(二)学语言表达之美1．本文时态为一般现在时，符合事理说明文的特征。2．文章使用了高级词汇，使得表达更加准确、得体，如acknowledge，lookdownupon,becommittedto,beconvinced,beboundto等。3．文章使用了一些亮点句式，体现了作者较高的语言驾驭能力，如过去分词短语作定语(如①句)、倒装句(如②句)、条件状语从句(如③句)等。客串阅卷老师评一番—一题两用把分添eq\a\vs4\al(同一篇习作的改错与升格)Honesty[Honestyisconsideredasagoodvirtueanditisalwaysadmired.①]Honestpeoplewinrespectwhilealiarislookeddownuponbecauseofdishonestyresultsindistrustandevenruinshisorherreputation.Asaying,“Honestyisthebestpolicy”，showstheimportanceofhonesty.Sohowtobeanhoneststudent?[Firstly,youdon'tcopyothers'homeworkorcheatintheexams.②]Besides,keepyourpromiseandtrytodothingswell.Moreimportant,speakthetruthandnevertelllies.[Youcanmakeprogressinyourstudiesandmakemorefriendsinthisway.③]Ifyou'rehonestwithothers,you'llbetreatedthesameway.Ifeelsurethatanhoneststudentwillbelovedbyeveryone.(一)3个错误要避免1．介词多余：第二句中becauseof→because2．冠词误用：第三句中A→The3．副词错误：第七句中important→importantly(二)3个词汇抓住眼(将文中加黑词汇升级)1．shows→reflects2．keep→carry_out3．feelsure→am_convinced(三)3个句式点亮篇1．把①句改写为分词短语作定语的简单句Honesty,_considered_as_a_good_virtue,_is_always_admired.2．用祈使句改写②句Firstly,_don't_copy_others'_homework_or_cheat_in_the_exams.3．用倒装句改写③句Only_in_this_way_can_you_make_progress_in_your_studies_and_make_more_friends.语法填空答案：语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了武夷山的风景地貌。1．a考查冠词。alargenumberof表示“许多，大量的”。故填a。2．to考查介词。uniqueto表示“对……来说是独特的”。故填to。3．influential考查形容词。根据“whichhasbeen”可知，空处需填形容词作表语，故填influential。4．its考查代词。根据“richculture”可知，空处需填形容词性物主代词作定语。故填its。5．variety考查名词。根据“awide”可知，空处需填单数名词，故填variety。6．wasannounced考查时态、语态和主谓一致。分析句子结构可知，空处缺谓语动词，时间状语是“in2007”，用一般过去时；单数主语“it”和“announce”之间是被动关系，故用一般过去时的被动语态。故填wasannounced。7．Taking考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，句中已有谓语动词“enjoy”，故空处需填非谓语动词，“visitors”和“take”之间是主动关系，故用现在分词作状语。故填Taking。8．and考查连词。分析句子结构可知，“enjoythenaturalscenery...”和“admiretheover...”之间是并列关系，故填and。9．where考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，“________Zhuxilecturedfor10ye