读写结合增分写作 第十四组

eq\a\vs4\al(读写结合·增分写作\b\lc\|\rc\(\a\vs4\al\co1(,,,))第十四组)自主练评——试试自己能力如何(先自主构思并写作)一、应用文写作(常考体裁：短文投稿)最新调查指出，人际关系正越来越被“人机关系”所取代，请用英语写一篇短文给校英文报投稿，内容包括：1．描述这一现象；2.分析其原因及弊端；3．你认为该如何改变现状。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。People,TheirPhonesandTheirFamilyorFriends二、读后续写(常考话题：宠物情缘)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Backin2004whenmydaughterBeckywasten,sheandmyhusbandJoewereunitedintheirdesireforadog.Asforme,Isharednoneoftheirenthusiasmforhavingapet.“Butwhy？”theypleaded.“BecauseIdon'thavetimetotakecareofadog.”“Butwe'lldoit.”“Really？You'regoingtowalkthedog?Feedthedog?Bathethedog？”“Yes,yes,andyes.”“Idon'tbelieveyou.”Theydidn't.Fromdaytwo(everyonewantedtowalkthecutepuppythatfirstday),neitherthoughttowalkthedog.WhileIgraduallyacceptedthatIwouldbetheoneresponsibleforkeepingtrackofhershots，toschedulehervetappointments，tofeedandcleanher,Mistyknewthisondayone.MistyandIquicklydevelopedsomethingverysimilartoaVulcanmind­meld(心灵融合).She'dlookatmewiththosesadbrowneyesofhers，beamherneed,andthenwait,trustingIwouldunderstand—which,strangely,Ialmostalwaysdid.Innotime,shewouldrestatmyfeetasIreadandspreadoutonmystomachasIwatchedtelevision.Evenso,partofmecontinuedtoresentthewalkingduty.JoeandBeckyhadpromised.It'snotfair.I'dcomplaintomyselfsilentlyassheandIwentforawalk.“It'snotfair.”I'dloudlyremindanyoneuponourreturnhome.Thenoneday,myhusband'sdoctorutteredanunthinkableword：leukemia(白血病).IspenteighttotenhoursadaywithJoeinthehospital，doinganythingandeverythingIcouldtoeasehisdiscomfort.Duringthosesixmonthsofhospitalizations，Becky,12atthetime,adjustedtootheradultsbeinginthehousewhenshereturnedfromschool.Myworkcolleaguesadjustedtomytakingoffatamoment'snoticeformedicalemergencies.Everypartofmylifechanged;nopartofmyoldroutineremained.Mistystillneededwalking.Atthebeginning，whenfriendsofferedtotakeher,IdeclinedbecauseIknewtheyhadtheirownhouseholdstodealwith.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Asthemonthswentby,IbegantorealizethatIactuallywantedtowalkMisty.AfterJoediedin2009,Mistysleptonhispillow.自悟赋能——看看他人高在何处(再晨读背诵学亮点)一、背“应用文”范文——学范式、学亮点People,TheirPhonesandTheirFamilyorFriendsAsisoftenthecase(定语从句),whenpeoplearequeuingup,havingmealsorwaitingforbuses(时间状语从句),youcanalwaysfindthemaddictedtotheirphones,completelyignoringothers.(第一段：描述人们沉溺于手机这一社会现象)Thisisreallyacommonphenomenoninourlife.Thereasonisthatsmartphonesnowadayscanbeusedforpeopletoplaymobilegamesandkeepintouchwithfriends(表语从句).However,toomuchexposuretophonesisharmfultopeopleintermsofhealth.Moreover,peopleengagedinphonesfailtocommunicatewellwiththosearoundthem.(第二段：分析这一社会现象的原因及危害。此处考生容易在写作要点上主次不分，分析原因是为了说明危害，应以危害为主)Frommyperspective,peopleshouldwiselymakethebestoftheirphonestohelpwiththeirworkandstudy.Andmeanwhiledocaremoreabouttheirfamilyandfriendsratherthanmobilephones.(第三段：如何改变现状)二、悟“读后续写”范文——学构思、学表达[范文一]Asthemonthswentby,IbegantorealizethatIactuallywantedtowalkMisty.EverytimeIsawthebigfigurewalkingaroundme,hearingthesoundshemadewithherfourpaws(时间状语从句),Ifeltacalmthathadnotexistedbefore.AtthatmomentIforgoteverythingthatwashappeninginthehospitaloratBecky'sschoolorinmyworkplace,everythingexceptMisty'sbrowneyes.AsJoe'sillnessgotworse(时间状语从句),Mistyperceivedthedepressingatmosphereinourhouse.ShebecamegentlerandoftenaccompaniedBeckyandmeinsilence.AfterJoediedin2009,Mistysleptonhispillow.Shealwaysburiedherfaceinthepillowandlayonherstomach,stillandmotionless.IknewshemissedJoe,justlikewedid.It'smomentslikethisthatIrememberedwhenImetMistyattheverybeginning,ItoldJoeIdidn'tlikedogsandcomplainedaboutwalkingMisty.ButnowIrealizethattheyalsohaveemotions,likehumans.PetslikeMistyarenotsimplyanimals,butfamilymembers.Theyarealsoourbestfriends.[范文二]Asthemonthswentby,IbegantorealizethatIactuallywantedtowalkMisty.WalkingMistyhadbecometheonlythingthatmademefeellikeIwaslivinginthepast(定语从句).Italsobecameawaytodealwithallthestressinmylife.MistybecamemylistenerandIcouldtellheraboutthedifficultiesinmylife.AlthoughIwastakingcareofher(让