读写结合增分写作 第十七组

eq\a\vs4\al(读写结合·增分写作\b\lc\|\rc\(\a\vs4\al\co1(,,,))第十七组)自主练评——试试自己能力如何(先自主构思并写作)一、应用文写作(常考体裁：道歉信)假定你是李华，你和留学生Johnson组队报名参加本周末的排球比赛。比赛在即，但自己因故无法参赛。根据以下要点，请你用英语给Johnson写一封邮件，内容包括：1．向他道歉；2.说明原因；3．提出补救的两种方法。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。DearJohnson，Yours，LiHua二、读后续写(常考话题：挑战自我)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Asthemotherofaneleven­year­oldgirl,Ihavereadseveralbooksthattellparentshowtobringupagirltobebeautiful,elegant,confident,andrich.However,Ihavealwaysbelievedthatgirlsneedtobebraveaboveallelse,butthisiseasiersaidthandone.IstillrememberIcouldn'tseethescreendirectlywhenmydaughterswitchedtotheanimalchannel,whichwasbroadcastingashowaboutsnakes.IstoodasfarawayfromtheTVaspossible,tooscaredtoopenmyeyes.However,mylittleangelwasnotscaredofthesnakes.Infact,shewatchedtheshowwithakeeninterest.Iwasrelievedthatmydaughterdidn'tgettoomanygeneticphobias(遗传恐惧症)．Eventothisday,sheisstillobsessedwithchallengingherselfwithnewthings.Thisyear,IgotachancetostudyinSingaporeforsixmonths.Afterthenovelty(新奇)ofthefirstfewdayshadgone,Ifoundmyselfmissingmyfamily.Withthesummervacationapproaching,myhusbandagreedtomakegooduseofthefactthatIwasstayinginSingapore.Hebroughtourdaughterouttovisitmeandtoenjoythenewexperienceinanewcountry.Thereuniondayfinallycame.MyhusbandandmydaughterarrivedinthesecondweekofJuly.Iwassolookingforwardtoseeingthem.Ihadmademanypreparationsfortheirvisit.Onthefirstday,IarrangedforustoseeGardensbytheBay.WhenwewalkedoutoftheMRTstation,wewereamazedbythesightoftheSuperTrees.WhenmydaughtersawlotsofpeoplewalkingontheSkyway,shecouldn'thelpshoutingexcitedlythatshewantedtohaveatry.TheSkywayisa22­meter­highsuspensionbridgefromwhichyoucanenjoyabird'seyeview.LasttimeIcameherewithmyfriends,Ifirmlyrejectedtheirrepeatedattemptstochallengemetogoupthere.Itwaslikethedaywiththesnakesalloveragain.ButcouldIreallyrejectmylittleangel?注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Mydaughterwaswaitingformyreply.Halfwayacrossthebridge,Ihadtostop.自悟赋能——看看他人高在何处(再晨读背诵学亮点)一、背“应用文”范文——学范式、学亮点DearJohnson，IamsorrytotellyouthatIcan'ttakepartinthevolleyballgamewithyouthisweekend.(第一段：表达歉意)ThismorningIgotastomachacheafterdrinkingsomemilkwhichwasnotfresh(定语从句),andevennowI'mstillfeelingweak.MydoctorsuggestedthatIavoidtoomuchexerciseandhaveagoodrest(宾语从句).SoIcan'tplaythegamewithyou.Butifyouagree,Icaninviteanotherclassmatewhoplaysvolleyballverywell(定语从句)tojoinyou.OrIcanparticipateinthenextvolleyballgamewithyou.(第二段：说明原因，提出补救办法。此处考生容易未理解透彻题目要求而遗漏第二种补救方法)WordsfailtoconveyhowapologeticIfeelandIhopeyoutakemysuggestionintoconsideration!Lookingforwardtoyourreply.(第三段：再次道歉，期待回复)Yours，LiHua二、悟“读后续写”范文——学构思、学表达[范文一]Mydaughterwaswaitingformyreply.Iwasveryworried.ButmydaughterkeptbeggingmeandIcouldn'tbeartorejecther.BraverywasthemostsignificantqualitythatIwantedhertopossess.HercuriositywassostrongthatIcouldn'tresist(结果状语从句).Inoddedslightly,andmydaughter'sfrowningfaceslowlybrokeintoasmile.Myresponsesurprisedmyhusband，whoreactedwiththewildestexcitementaswewalkedtowardstheSkyway.WhenIsteppedonit,Ifoundmyselfhorrifiedbytheheight.Igrabbedtherailing,almostunabletomove.Halfwayacrossthebridge,Ihadtostop.Myheartbeatwildly,castingscaredglancesdownthebridge.Myhusbandanddaughterheldmyhandstightly.IwalkedasifIweredrunk(虚拟语气).Buttheirfirmgazebuiltupmyconfidenceandwekeptgoingtogether.“Mom,look,it'ssobeautiful.”WhatIsawthere(主语从句)filledmysoulwithjoy.Thebayspreadoutfarbelowme.Beyonditstoodthetallandbeautifulskyscrapers.Ilookeddownatmylittlegirlwhotaughthermotherhowtobebrave(定语从句),andbreathedasighofrelief.[范文二]Mydaughterwaswaitingformyreply.Ilookedather,thenattheSkyway.Ifeltmyheartthreateningtoburstoutfrommychest.Myhusband，whowasusedtothiskindofsituationandunderstoodhowscaredIwas(who引导定语从句；how引导宾语从句),consoledme.Hesaidhecouldgowithourlittlegirlinstead.Butmydaughterwouldn'tgiveupeasilyandshoutedoutherownencouragement.Ipluckedupmycourageandtookmy