读写结合增分写作 第六组

eq\a\vs4\al(读写结合·增分写作\b\lc\|\rc\(\a\vs4\al\co1(,,,))第六组)自主练评——试试自己能力如何(先自主构思并写作)一、应用文写作(常考体裁：感谢信)假定你是李华，近期你校举办了“成人礼”仪式。在仪式上，你和同学们都收到了父母的祝贺信。信里有父母的道贺、鼓励及期望……请给父母写一封回信，表示你最真诚的感谢。内容包括：1．感谢父母的照顾和引导；2．不负期望，真诚祝愿。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。DearMomandDad，HavingheardfromyouattheComing­of­AgeCeremony，Yours，LiHua二、读后续写(常考话题：爱心助人)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ManyyearsagoIparkedmycarinthetowncenteronmywaytothepostofficetopostmyNewYearcards.ItwasthelastdaytopostNewYearcardsiftheyweretobereceivedbeforetheNewYear.AsIcameoutofthecarpark,Isawayoungboyabout12yearsofageontheothersideoftheroad.Hewasaloneandashewaswalkinghewassobbing.Ithoughtsomebiggerboyshadperhapsbulliedhimandthathewasinpain.IhadtogotohisaidandseeifIcouldhelpwithhisdistress(痛苦)．Theboylookedatmeupanddownandseemednottotrustmeatfirst.ButthenhetoldmethathisbigsisterwhowasanursehadboughthimamobilephoneashisbirthdayandNewYearpresent.Itwashisfirstmobilephone.Hehadonlyuseditforafewdayswhenhedroppeditandcrackedthescreenbyaccidentonhiswayhome!Thelittleguywassosad,tearsrollingdownhisfaceashetoldallthistome.Myheartachedforhim.Itwasclearhevaluedhispresentandknewthatitcosthissisteralotofmoney.Hehadbeentoaphoneshopandtheclerktoldhimitwouldbe￡80togetanewscreen.Ihadtohelp.However,theproblemwasthatitwasveryclosetotheendoftheyearandmybusinesswasbrokenandthatIwasgoingtopaymynextbill.Irememberedsomeofmyfriendsinthemobilephonerepairshop.SoItookthelittleboythere.Iknewtheguyswouldhelpmeoutandgetthescreenonthephonefixed.Iwouldpayforitthefollowingweek.Iknewtheywouldtrustmeonthis.Ibroughthimtotheshopbutitwasclosed!WhatshouldIdonext?注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。IbroughthimtoanATMmachineandwithdrewallthemoneyfromtheaccount—￡20.Igavehimmyonly￡20andmadeupanexcuseforonlygivinghimsolittle.自悟赋能——看看他人高在何处(再晨读背诵学亮点)一、背“应用文”范文——学范式、学亮点DearMomandDad，HavingheardfromyouattheComing­of­AgeCeremony,Iamwritingtoconveymysinceregratitudetoyouforallyouhavedoneforme.(第一段：表达感谢)Thelast17yearshaswitnessedmyamazinggrowingup,whichisduetoyourgreatestcareofmydailylife(定语从句).Besides,youalwayshavesparednoefforttoinspiremetoadoptapositiveattitudetowardslife，enablingmetoembracelifeactively.Withoutyourselflessdevotiontome,Icouldn'thavesuchabrightlifenow(虚拟语气).(第二段：具体描述父母的辛劳付出与我的成长，并表示感恩。注意使用多种句型表达，让句式灵活多变，增强表达效果)Mydearmomanddad,mytrueappreciationisbeyondwordsnow.WhatIcandonow(主语从句)isjusttoworkhardertorewardyourlove,andgenuinelywishyouallthebest.(第三段：再次表达感恩，并承诺回报父母的爱)Yours，LiHua二、悟“读后续写”范文——学构思、学表达[范文一]IbroughthimtoanATMmachineandwithdrewallthemoneyfromtheaccount—￡20.Fromthebottomofmyheart,IhadthestrongurgetocomfortthetearfulguybydoingwhatIcould(宾语从句).Iknewthatthissumofmoneywasn'tenoughtogethismobilephonefixed.ButIsincerelyhopedthatmyoffercouldmakehimgetthemessagethattherearemanykindpeopleintheworld(定语从句)．Igavehimmyonly￡20andmadeupanexcuseforonlygivinghimsolittle.Astheboyreceivedthemoney(时间状语从句),Icouldseehimsmilethroughtears.“Thankyouforwhatyouhavedoneforme，”saidtheboy.“Itisyourofferthatthrowslightonthetruth(强调句型)thatthereisalwayssomeonewhowecantrustwhenintrouble.”IcouldnotfullypayforhisphonetoberepairedbutIreallyhopedthekindnesshereceivedfromastrangerwassomethingthatstayedwithhim.[范文二]IbroughthimtoanATMmachineandwithdrewallthemoneyfromtheaccount—￡20.Solittlefor￡80!IwasdisappointedthatIwasunabletogivehimenoughmoney(宾语从句)torepairhismobilephonescreenFullofshameandregret,Istilldesiredtomaketheguyfeelinagoodmood(mak