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Mymother’sgift
Adandelion(蒲公英)inmydictionaryalwaysremindsmeofmylunchtimeswithmymother.
WhenIwasinthethirdgrade,Iwaspickedtobetheprincessintheschoolplay,andforweeksmymotherhadpainstakingly(费力地)practisedmylineswithme.ButnomatterhoweasilyIdeliveredthemathome,assoonasIsteppedonstage,everyworddisappearedfrommyhead.Finally,myteachertookmeaside.Sheexplainedthatshehadwrittenanarrator’sparttotheplay,andaskedmetoswitchroles.
Ididn’ttellmymotherwhathadhappenedwhenIwenthomeforlunchthatday.Butshesensedmyunease,andinsteadofsuggestingwepracticemylines,sheaskedifIwantedtowalkintheyard.
Itwasalovelyspringdayandtheroseleaveswereturninggreen.Wecouldseeyellowdandelionspoppingthroughthegrassinbunches,asifapainterhadtouchedourlandscapewitha
littlebitofgold.
Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyoneofthedandelions.“IthinkI’mgoingtodigupalltheseweeds,”shesaid,suddenlypullingaflowerupbyitsroots.“Fromnowon,we’llhaveonlyrosesinthisgarden.”
“ButIlikedandelions,”Iprotested.“Allflowersarebeautiful—evendandelions.”Mymotherlookedatmeseriously.“Yes,everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway,doesn’tit?”sheaskedthoughtfully.Inodded,pleasedthatIhadwonherover.“Andthatistrueofpeopletoo,”sheadded.“Noteveryonecanbeaprincess,butthereisnoshameinthat.”Relievedthatshehadguessedmypain,IstartedtocryasItoldherwhathadhappened.
“Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator,”shesaid,remindingmeofhowmuchIlovedtoreadstoriesaloudtoher.“Thenarrator’spartisasimportantasthepartofaprincess.”
Overthenextfewweeks,withherconstantencouragement,Ilearnedtotakeprideintherole.LunchtimeswerespentreadingovermylinesandtalkingaboutwhatIwouldwear.Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Ifeltnervous.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aftertheplay,ItookhometheflowerIhadplacedinthepocket.
Readforthemainidea:Mainidea:Myteacherchangedmyrolefromprincesstonarrator,whichmademesadanddisappointed.Mymotherledmeintotheyard,tryingtoencouragemeandhelpmeunderstandsomerealmeaningoflife.摘蒲公英动作链:noticethesmallflower--benddownreachoutmyhandpullituphandittohim妈妈鼓励我的动作和语言描写:Iwatchedmymothercasuallybenddownbyoneofthedandelions.“IthinkI’mgoingtodigupalltheseweeds,”shesaid,suddenlypullingaflowerupbyitsroots.“Fromnowon,we’llhaveonlyrosesinthisgarden.”
“ButIlikedandelions,”Iprotested.“Allflowersarebeautiful—evendandelions.”Mymotherlookedatmeseriously.“Yes,everyflowergivespleasureinitsownway,doesn’tit?”sheaskedthoughtfully.Inodded,pleasedthatIhadwonherover.“Andthatistrueofpeopletoo,”sheadded.“Noteveryonecanbeaprincess,butthereisnoshameinthat.”主题:Relievedthatshehadguessedmypain,IstartedtocryasItoldherwhathadhappened.Shelistenedandsmiledreassuringly.Thedevelopmentoftheplot:Whatwillpara.1mainlytalkabout?Para.1“Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator;"shesaidMymothercontinuedtoencourageme.Mymothersentmethedandelionasagift.照应题目Mother’sgiftIfeltcheeredup,andperformedwellintheplayPara.2Aftertheplay,Itookhometheflower.搭建第一段的脚手架:(给出关键动词)Buildupthewordbankeyes:lookatsb.gentlyintheeye2cast(投以)acomfortingglanceatsb3stareatsb.arms:hold/hug/foldsb.inone'sarmsgently;2throwone'sarmsaroundsbtightlywithouthesitationface:wearashiningsmileonone'sfacehands:wipeouttearsfromone'scheekstroke(轻抚)one’shairpatsb.ontheshoulderAppreciateoneversionPara.1“Butyouwillbeabeautifulnarrator;"shesaid,encouragingandcomfortingmeasalwaysasshedoes.Mybelovedmom,wearingashiningsmileonherscarletface,addedsincerely,“Lifeisnotabedofroses.Eventhoughthenarrator'spartissmall,justlikethedandelion,it'salsoofgreatimportance.Thenshecastacomfortingglanceatme,wipedoutmytears,andpassedadandeliontome.升华结尾:1.Lifeisnotabedofroses.Nomatterhowdisappointingthesituationis,nevergiveup.2.Again
Ithrewmyarmsaroundher.
Whatiscrucialinchildren'sgrowthismother'slove.
3.Thisexperienceislikeaneverlastingflower,
bloomingintheriverofmymemories.参考范文:Backstageonthenightoftheperformance,Ifeltnervous.Myforeheadsweating,Iwasworriedthatthelineswouldescapemymind.Toreleasemynerves,Iopenedthescript,turnedthepagerandomlyandsuddenlysawacurleddandelionbetweenthepages.Mother'sfaceandourlunchtimetalkscrossedmymind.Gradually,Icalmedmyselfdownandregainedmyconfidence.Puttingitinmypocket,Isteppedonstagewitheaseanddeliveredmynarrationsemotionallyandvividly.Ourperformanceyonapplause.(75)Aftertheplay,ItookhometheflowerIhadplacedinthepocket.Uponarrival,Icouldn'twaittothrowmyselfintoherarms,handedittoherandsharedthegoodnews.Shehuggedmet
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