读后续写个人成长类-一次真诚的道歉讲义-高考英语专项复习专项

（2023·江苏镇江·统考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ilookedaroundthecrowdedwaitingroomatthehospitalandsighed.Wouldthedoctorbeabletoseemyeightyearoldsonnext?Icouldn’tstopshakingasthewoundinhisforeheadwasdeep.我环顾医院拥挤的候诊室，叹了一口气。接下来医生能给我八岁的儿子看病吗？他前额的伤口很深，我忍不住发抖。WewereatthehospitalbecauseanotherchildhadthrownarockatLukeduringthebreakashewasrunningaroundthecorner.我们在医院是因为另一个孩子在休息时向卢克扔了一块石头，当时他正在拐角处跑。Lukereceivedfourstitches(缝针).Ifoughtbacktheurgetocry.Forthenexttwodays,hiseyewasswollenshutandblackandblue.IfeltlikeI’dhadamininervousbreakdown.EverytimeItriedtosleeportendtodosomehousework,horriblethoughtscreptintomymind.Whatifhe’dlosthiseye?Whatifhe’dhadbraindamage?Hisdoctorassuredmehewasgoingtobefine,butthewhatifskepting.Fearhadtakenover,andthenthefearturnedtoanger.Iwasangrywiththechildwho’dthrowntherock.Ijustcouldn’tshakeit.Whatwasshethinking?Sheshouldhaveknownbetter.卢克缝了四针(缝针).我忍住了哭的冲动。在接下来的两天里，他的眼睛肿得合不拢嘴，又黑又蓝。我感觉自己有点神经崩溃。每当我试着睡觉或做家务时，可怕的想法就会悄悄进入我的脑海。如果他失去了眼睛怎么办？如果他有脑损伤怎么办？他的医生向我保证他会好起来的，但“如果”的声音不断传来。恐惧占据了上风，然后恐惧变成了愤怒。我对扔石头的孩子很生气。我就是摇不动。她在想什么？她应该知道得更好。Severaldayslater,Luke’steachercalledmethateveningtoseehowhewasfeeling,tellingmeKatiefeltterribleandheartbrokenoverwhathadhappened.IaskedtheteachertomakeKatieunderstandshecouldn’tdothatandremindherofthedangersofthrowingrocks.Theteacheragreed,whichmademefeelbetter.几天后，那天晚上，卢克的老师打给我，想看看他的感受，告诉我凯蒂对所发生的事情感到非常难过和心碎。我请老师让凯蒂明白她不能那样做，并提醒她扔石头的危险。老师同意了，这让我感觉好多了。InoticedthatasLukestartedtohealphysically,Iwasn’tasangry.IthoughtaboutKatieandLuke.Iwantedtostandupformyson,protecthim,butIdidn’twanttomistreatKatiebecauseIlearnedfromtheteacherKatiereallywasanicekidandthatshewasjusttryingtoremovetherocksonootherchildrenwouldtriponit.我注意到，当卢克的身体开始好转时，我并没有那么生气。我想起了凯蒂和卢克。我想为我的儿子挺身而出，保护他，但我不想虐待凯蒂，因为我从老师那里了解到凯蒂真的是个好孩子，她只是想把石头移走，这样其他孩子就不会被石头绊倒。Lastnight,Luke’steacherstoppedbyanddroppedoffagetwellcardthatKatiehadmade.LuckandIreaditseveraltimes,andIcouldn’thelpbutfeelalittlechokedup.Itwasasincereapology.昨晚，卢克的老师顺道过来，把凯蒂做的一张康复卡送了下来。幸运和我读了好几遍，我忍不住有点哽咽。这是一个真诚的道歉。注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。IwantedthistobeateachablemomentforLuketolearnaboutforgiveness._________________________________________________________________________Thenextmorning,LukeandIwaitedforKatiewiththeletterattheschoolgate._________________________________________________________________________文本分析：【故事大意】本文以人物为线索展开，作者的儿子Luke因为被Katie扔了石头受了伤，在医院缝了四针，回到家后作者作为母亲非常心疼，非常担心儿子的伤，对Katie充满了愤怒。几天后Luke的老师打来告知Katie非常伤心，作者请老师转告她以后不可以扔石头。Luke的伤口逐渐痊愈，作者的生气逐渐减少，开始考虑如何支持儿子，同时让Katie不受伤。昨晚老师来拜访时带来了Katie做的康复卡片，Luke和作者看后都很感动。【续写情节发展】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我希望这是一个教导Luke学会宽恕的时刻。”可知，第一段可描写作者和Luke沟通是否原谅Katie，然后两人给Katie写信表示原谅。②由第二段首句内容“第二天早上，Luke和我拿着信在学校门口等Katie。”可知，第二段可描写Luke和Katie见了面，Luke对Katie表示原谅，Katie因为被原谅而感到轻松，作者对此有所感悟。2.续写线索：教Luke学会宽恕——与Luke沟通——Luke写信表示原谅——拿信等Katie——Luke原谅Katie——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①原谅：forgive/pardon/excuse②思考：thinkabout/consider/contemplate/givethoughtto③紧紧抓住：holdonto/keep/retain/grasp④看到：spot/observe/notice/discover⑤停下：pause/stop/case/halt情绪类①愤怒：anger/annoyance/vexation/irritation②仇恨：resentment/hate/hatred③开心的：happy/pleasant/joyful【点睛】[高分句型1]IaskedLukeifhewasreadytoforgiveher.（连接词if引导名词性从句作asked的宾语）[高分句型2]Nosoonerhadsheunfoldeditthanarelievedandhappysmilebloomedonherface,whichmadeLukefeelmuchbetter.（nosooner…than…引导时间状语从句，并引起主句部分倒装）[高分句型3]Wedidn’thavetosayanythingelse;weallknewitwasforgivenessthatwasthemostimportantstepinhealing.（itwas…that…是强调句型）参考答案:IwantedthistobeateachablemomentforLuketolearnaboutforgiveness.

Iwantedtoletgoofmyownanger,too.IaskedLukeifhewasreadytoforgiveher.Afterall,hisopinioncountedthemost.Hethoughtaboutitforamoment,smiledandsaid,“Yes.”Heknewshehadn’tdoneitonpurpose.Childrenaresoresilientandsohonest.Theydon’tholdontoresentmentasadultsdosometimes.Theirheartsarepure,sowewroteKatiealettertogether,reading,“Weknowitwasanunfortunateaccident.Weforgiveyou,andwehopeyouforgiveyourself.”Thenextmorning,LukeandIwaitedforKatiewiththeletterattheschoolgate.

FinallycameKatie.Whenshespottedus,shepausedandforcedasmile.Luketrottedbesideherwithwildlittlehops,handinghertheletter.Nosoonerhadsheunfoldeditthanarelievedandhappysmilebloomedonherface,whichmadeLukefeelmuchbetter.Sheskippedtogivemeabighug.Ihuggedherback.Wedidn’thavetosayanythingelse;weallknewitwasforgivenessthatwasthemostimportantstepinhealing.默写版：IwantedthistobeateachablemomentforLuketolearnaboutforgiveness.

_________________________我也想放下自己的怒火。IaskedLukeifhewasreadytoforgiveher.Afterall,_______________________他的意见最重要.Hethoughtaboutitforamoment,smiledandsaid,“Yes.”Heknewshehadn’tdoneitonpurpose.Childrenaresoresilientandsohonest.___________________________________他们不像成年人那样有时会怨恨。__________________________________________________他们的心是纯净的，所以我们一起给凯蒂写了一封信，写道,“Weknowitwasanunfortunateaccident.Weforgiveyou,andwehopeyouforgiveyourself.”Thenextmorning,LukeandIwaitedforKatiewiththeletterattheschoolgate.

FinallycameKatie.___________________________________________当她看到我们时，她停顿了一下，勉强笑了笑。Luketrottedbesideherwithwildlittlehops,_____________________递给了他这封信.No