2023年新高考I卷应用文写作课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习

2023新高考I卷

应用文1试题回顾假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样的分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.提出建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

试题解读语篇类型主题语境语体词数正式体80词左右2023考查亮点：今年的应用文写作，对学生在校园生活中，发现问题、解决问题提出了更高的要求，需要更全面地考虑问题，才能更好地达到写作要求。邮件（意见反馈+建议信）人与社会核心素养能力考查点思路点拨时态人称段落安排一般过去时

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一般现在时第一、二人称为主Para1自我介绍+邮件目的Para2说明分组问题（1-2个点为宜）+提出建议Para3盼考虑+回复注意事项1.说明问题时，态度应该是诚恳而非诘责，宜用委婉语气2.提出建议时，应当与说明的问题相匹配，达到写作目的假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样的分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.提出建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

7试题回顾ramdonlyatramdonmatchinpairsdividestudentsintogroupsoftwopairupstudents

Para1自我介绍+邮件目的

I’mLiHuafromClass3.Hopemyemailfindsyouwell

!展信佳！Knowingthatyouintendtodividestudentsintogroupsoftwoatrandomforthepurposeofpracticing/polishingoralEnglish/

boostingourlanguagecompetence,I'dliketovoice/expressmyopinionaboutit.HearingthatwewillbepairedatrandomfortheoralEnglishtrainingafterclass,I’mwritingtovoice/expressmyopinionaboutit.开门见山Para1自我介绍+邮件目的I’mLiHuafromClass3.Hopemyemailfindsyouwell

!展信佳！Withregardto/Regarding

yourgroupingmethodfortheOralEnglishtraining,I’mwritingtosharemypersonalconcernsandadvice.Regarding

therandomgroupingmethodfortheoralEnglishtraining,Ifeelitabitimproperandhavesomesuggestionsonit.语气委婉Para1自我介绍+邮件目的I’mLiHuafromClass3.Hopemyemailfindsyouwell

!展信佳！Though

verygladtolearnthatyouaregoingtoorganizeanOralEnglishTraining,Istillhavesomeconcernsabouttheideaofpairingthestudentsuprandomly.I’msogratefulforyourwell-intendedgestureofpairingupourclassmatesinordertohoneourspeakingskills.However,I’mwritingthistovoicemyhumbleopinionsonrandomlydrawingforpartners.语气委婉Para2说明分组问题（1-2个点为宜）+提出建议可能存在的问题---语言能力①studentsequippedwithdistinctspeakingabilitiesmaybepaireduptogether,whichmaygiverisetolesseffectivepracticeorfrustrationstudentswhoaren'tskilledatoralEnglishmaybedividedintoagroup,thusmakingthemunabletocommunicatesmoothly

orlearnfromtheexcellentones。Para2说明分组问题（1-2个点为宜）+提出建议可能存在的问题--人际关系②ifpairedupwithsomeonetheycannotgetalongwith,studentsmayfeeloverwhelmedbyfrustrationoranger/willsignificantlyreducetheirenthusiasmandmotivationtoparticipate.Para2说明分组问题（1-2个点为宜）+提出建议可能存在的问题----性格，爱好③studentsareondifferentlevelsandofdifferentcharacters.Ifrandomlychosen,theymayfacehugegaps,whichwillbringgreatdifficultyincontinuingthedialogues.Para2说明分组问题（1-2个点为宜）+提出建议可能存在的问题----人数太少④Ithinkitwouldberestrictedforstudentstotalkwithmorepeople.Notalltalkstakeplaceonlybetweentwostudents.Para2说明分组问题（1-2个点为宜）+提出建议针对问题提出建议

---语言能力①studentsequippedwithdistinctspeakingabilitiesmaybepaireduptogether,whichmaygiverisetolesseffectivepracticeorfrustration。mysuggestionisthatgroupsofstudentsshouldbecarefullydividedaccordingtotheirlanguageabilities,thusenablingeverystudenttopracticeingroupsmoreefficiently.Para2说明分组问题（1-2个点为宜）+提出建议针对问题提出建议

---语言能力studentswhoaren'tskilledatoralEnglishmaybedividedintoagroup,thusmakingthemunabletocommunicatesmoothly

orlearnfromtheexcellentones。ifIwereyou,Iwouldpairupstudentsbasedontheirspeakingabilities.IsuggestthatwebedividedintogroupsbasedontheoralEnglishproficiencyandclassperformance.Para2说明分组问题（1-2个点为宜）+提出建议针对问题提出建议

--人际关系②ifpairedupwithsomeonetheycannotgetalongwith,studentsmayfeeloverwhelmedbyfrustrationoranger/willsignificantlyreducetheirenthusiasmandmotivationtoparticipate.wereallyneedthechancetosingleoutourownlike-mindedpartner.

aflexiblegrouping,whichenablesstudentstochoosetheirfavoritegroupingnumbersorteammates.Para2说明分组问题（1-2个点为宜）+提出建议针对问题提出建议----性格，爱好Sowhynotholdatestonstudents'oralEnglishlevelsandobservetheircharactertraitsbeforematchingeachonewithapartner?③studentsareondifferentlevelsandofdifferentcharacters.Ifrandomlychosen,theymayfacehugegaps,whichwillbringgreatdifficultyincontinuingthedialogues.Para2说明分组问题（1-2个点为宜）+提出建议针对问题提出建议----人数太少④Ithinkitwouldberestrictedforstudentstotalkwithmorepeople.Notalltalkstakeplaceonlybetweentwostudents.Threetofivestudentsinagroupmaybemoreflexibletodealwithawiderrangeoftopicsandemergenciessuchasapartner'sabsence.Meanwhile,abiggergroupusuallymeansbettertrainingatmosphereandhelpfrommorepeople.Para3盼考虑+回复①

Iwouldreallyappreciateitifmysuggestioncouldbetakenintoaccount.I'dreallyappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionintoconsideration.②Ihopeyouwillfindmyproposaluseful.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.③Isincerelyhopethatmyabovesuggestionscouldbeconsidered.