考研英语写作技法分析

考研英语写作

三段论：第一段一描述图画或图表

第二段一解释寓意

第三段一给出评论

第一段：

第一句

1、Asisshownabove,描述图画（倒装）.Therehasbeena

heateddiscussionaboutapictureinthenewspaper.报纸上有一张图

画引起人们广泛的关注。

描述图画注意：

第一步：寻找图画的中心事物，并确定中心事物的位置。

第二部：描述中心事物，可以从动作和状态两个方面来描述。

第三部；寻找中心事物周围相关的事物，并进行简单的描述。

模式：在图画中央有……（倒装），它……（主谓一致、现在分词、

非限定性定语从句），周围有…（独立主格作状语）

第二句一一总结

①Thepicture,atthefistglimpse,seemstobesimple,but

onlyapenetratingsightcanpiercethroughitssuperficial

meaning.这幅画初看好像很简单，但是只有具有洞察力的

人才能看穿其肤浅的含义。

②Theauthor'srealpurposeisnotthefactitself,buttolead

ustoAndwhathidesbehindtheiceburg.作者的真实目的

不是图画本身，而是要引导我们去探求在图画背后究竟隐

藏着什么。

第二段

第一句--观点的提出

(1)Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwith

the重要主题.Innocountry,otherthanchina,ithasbeen

said,isthisphenomenonmoreobvious.

(2)Thepicturedoesrevelcertaindisturbingsocial

phenomenon,thatis,peopletendtooverlookthefactthat有

害主题.(或Thepicturedoesrevealthat有害主题isnot

onlyharmful,butalsodamaging.)Thepastdecadehas

witnessedahugedevelopmentineconomyowingtothereform

andopening-uppolicycarriedout,bringingsomeproblemsat

thesametime,withtheaboveonebeingtheforemost.在过去

的十年间，由于改革开放政策的执行，我国的经济有了巨大的

发展，但同时带来了一些问题，上面的问题是最严重的。(或

Innocountryotherthanchina,ithasbeensaidmisthis

problemmoreserous.)

万能观点：

①图画主题的重要性

Nothingcanbecomparedwith

••,isnotonlynecessary,butalsoindispensable,

remainstobeanintegralpartin

②图画主题的有害性

Nothingismoreharmfulordamaging.

••,isnotonlyharmful,butalsodamaging.

••,inlargemeasuredetrimental.

第二句一一进一步讲解人们的态度（重视/不重视）

（1）Thepublicfailstoattachdueattentionto有害主题.

⑵Thepublicattachdueattentionto重要主题.

givepriorityto优先考虑

attachattentionto•••对••注意

emphasizetheimportanceof•••强调•••的重要性

stressthefundamentalroleof•••强调•••的根本作用

第三句…对主题进行展开（3-4句）

Bydoingso,"•一个角度平行展开（也可用科学论据法

或举例法）

（一）、十一个万能理由（角度）

物质回报：

①主题canprovide（offer）peoplewithnotonlydelicious

foodbutfashionableclothesandsuchbenefitsas

comfortabledwellingsandhandsomeautomobiles.

②Theindustriousandinsightfulpeoplewillneverfailto

profitsfrom（benefitfrom）doing主题.

时间角度

节约时间

①Itcanmakethemostofone'stime,chanceand

technology.

②主题(e.g.Learningmorewesternculture),occupying

sparetimesoconstructively,makesapersoncontented,

withnotimeforboredom/wonderingandhelpsthem

achieveamorebroadenhorizon.

浪费时间

Asallknown,thedaysofyouthshouldnotbefriend/idled

awayandtimeshouldbecherished,but(主题e.g.star

worship)wasteshours,lavishesdaysandevensquanders

years,whichleadsustosaykillsanevenmurdersyoungster's

primetime.

效率角度

①主题(e.g.Starworship/AddictiontotheInternet)makes

peoplewearyofotherimportantthings,discourageshim

tolearnmore,andfinallylosetheirinteresttolearn,and

leadtolowgrades/lowefficiency/underachievement.

②One'senergygraduallywearsoffandone'sthought,

creativethinkingandexplorationhasbeenstifledbydoing

主题.

方便和快捷

①主题(e.g.WideWorldWeb)providespeoplewith

up-to-date,concreteandaccurateandvividinformation.

②主题(e.g.MSNandotherinstantmessengers)can

shrinkthedistancebetweencitiesandevencontinents;

smooththecommunicationbetweenresidentsandridof

thebarrierbetweenpeople.

安全角度

①主题cansecurehisfoodandshelter.

②主题canshieldpeoplefromvariouskindsofhazards

rangingfrominjury,robbery,assaultstotraffic

accidents.

身心健康

①(主题)canrelievenotonlypressurebutalsoanxietyand

suchproblems,stress,isolationandsolitude.

②Bydoing(主题)peoplestayhealthy,andthereforeprevent

heartdiseases,hypertension,diabetesorfattiness.

(3)(主题)canalsohaveaddedbenefitofincreasingone's

knowledgeandgivingusanewperspectiveoftheoutside

world.

生活娱乐

①Ifsamajormeansofentertainmentthatrelievesone's

pressure,boredom,stressandburden.

表“受益”的词组：

Broadenone'smind

Enrichone'sexperience

Enhancevigorandputmoreenthusiasmtoone'swork

②Itiswellreceivedasaninstructivemodeofentertainment

thatprovidespeoplewithnotonlyabulkofinformation,

butasourceofimaginationaswell.

③Itprovidesavarietyofleisureactivitiesthatenhanceyour

energy,enthusiasmandcharm.Itaddsaspecialmeansof

entertainmenttoyouseeminglytedious,routineand

monotonouslife.

有助成长和成功(自己和他人)

①Peoplecanobtainfinancialaids,materialsupport,mental

comfort,orspiritualbackfromyoursupport.

②Theycandrawonexperiencefromyou.Throughyour

speeches,instructionsorassistance,theycanbroaden

theirminds,increasetheirincome.

(3)Throughyourencouragement,theycultivatethespiritof

competition,participationandcooperationandAnally

findtheirownwaystofulfilltheirpursuitofhappiness.

④Thoughyourassistance,notonlycantheyaccumulate

wealth,butwillalsoestablishtheircareer,fitintosociety,

andevenattainsocialstatus.

⑤Peoplewhotreatotherswithlove,sincerity,sympathy,

enthusiasm,hospitalityorgenerosityalwayswinrespect

fromothers.

⑥Itdose/doesn'tnecessarilycultivatetalent,confidence,

self-worth,self-relianceanddignity.

文化价值观

①Itcannothelppeopletreattheworldwithbenevolence,

confidenceandtolerance.

②Itcansometimesintensifyconflictsandtensionsbetween

nations.Itputharmonioushumanrelationshipindanger.

Itcannotpromotemutualunderstanding.Itcanbreach

thefriendlyties,andwidenthegapbetweenpeople.

环境保护

①Itmeansthatcentralauthoritycansetasidemorefundsto

eliminateairpollution,noisepollution,reducesoilerosion

ordesertification,preventthethinnessofozonelayers,

reduceindustrialsewage,andrescuethedwindling

tropicaljungles.

②Itgovernmentshouldraisethepublicawarenessof

environmentalpreservationtherebypromoting

sustainabledevelopmentandcreatingamorelivable

environment.

社会宏观角度

①Itcanminimizeinflation,economicstagnation,economic

recession,unemploymentrate.Itcanmaintainsocial

orderandreducecrimerate.

②Itmeansthatrevolutionizethescientificlevelofacountry,

meansofcocommunicationandqualityoflife.

③Itmeansthattheauthoritiescanallocatemorefundstothe

constructionandqualityofinfrastructurerangingfrom

kindergartens,hospitals,medicalcenter,museums,

schoollibraries,trainstohighwaysandexpressways.

④Itmeansthatpeoplecanhaveequalopportunitytocollege

education,employments,self-realizationandpursuitof

materialwealth.

(二)、科学论据法

AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofScience

(CAS),•••

AccordingtoasurveyconductedbyChineseAcademyofSocial

Science(CASS),,••

ChinaDailyinterviewedforpeoplefromfourprofessions-a

surgeon,awhilecollarworker,acarpenterandafarmer.The

surveydiscoversthatallofthemareoftheideathat主题重要或有

害.

(三)、举例子

①Ourhumanhistoryhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamples

of,withthefollowingonebeingtheforemost.我们人类历史上

与这个话题相关的例子有很多，下面这个是最有说服力的。

②AmongallthetouchingfactsrelatingtothatIhavehoard,

noticed,andexperienced,themostimpressiveoneis,•,在我所听

到的、看到的、经历过的所有和这个话题相关的例子之中，最有说服

力的是・・・

第四句(结尾句一一虚拟语气和利弊句)

虚拟语气：

(1)积极的主题

如果没有・・・，我们可能根本做不了・・・

Weretherenosth,neverwouldwedosth.

(2)消极的主题

如果情况继续下去，我们将付出更加昂贵的代价。

Werethesituationtocontinueasitis,wewouldpaythehighprice.

e.g.Werethetendencytocontinueasitis,ourfu