（新课标）高三英语一轮复习 专项技法10 应用文写作之建议信课件 外研版

技法10应用文写作之建议信

写作点拨

建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构。信的内容要包括写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式〞，通常以firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobegin/startwith,then,later,lastbutnotleast等依次陈述建议，具体为：返回目录技法10应用文写作之建议信第一段：说明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。第二段：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。第三段：对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌，使读者容易接受。返回目录技法10应用文写作之建议信

词句模板

1．段首常用语：(1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…(2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout…andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.2．表达“建议〞常用语：(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable…foryouis…(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat…(3)You'dbetter…/It'sbetterto…(4)AsfarasIamconcerned…/Inmyopinion…返回目录技法10应用文写作之建议信(5)Foronething…，foranother…(6)IfIwereyou,Iwould…(7)Itseemstomethatyoucould…3．段尾常用语：(1)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…(2)Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/con－sideration.(3)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.返回目录技法10应用文写作之建议信(4)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.(5)Iwillbereadyforfurtherdiscussingthismatterintodetails.4．建议信格式模板：Dear________，Iam________．Yourcollectionofsuggestionson________is________.Asisknowntoall,________.Mysuggestionsareasfollows：First,________．(Peoplecan________．)Second，________.(Tomakeeconomicprofits,________．)返回目录技法10应用文写作之建议信Third,________．(Asmanyofthem________．)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouintofurtherdetails.(Or:Yourkindconsiderationofmysuggestionswillbehighlyappreciated.)Goodluckwithyour________．(祝愿)Yourssincerely，LiMing返回目录【活学活用】在紧张的高三备考阶段，英语老师为了提高复习效率，广泛征求学生意见。假设你叫张华，请根据以下提示，给英语老师写封信，表达你们的需求和建议。•适当放慢进度，留出思考时间•反复训练重要、易错知识点•指导方法•减少作业量以保证质量•给予更多鼓励返回目录技法10应用文写作之建议信注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；2．要准确使用语法和词汇且使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；3．词数：120～150。开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearMrWang,We'resopleasedthatyouarewillingtoshareourviews.Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision,whatweneedissolidfoundation.__________________________________

返回目录技法10应用文写作之建议信[解析]

Onepossibleversion：DearMrWang,

We'resopleasedthatyouarewillingtoshareourviews.Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision,whatweneedissolidfoundation.Asyouknow,wedidn'tlearnwellenoughinthefirsttwoyears,sopleaseslowdownandmakesurewehavereallymasteredsomething.Besides,weneedalittlemoretimetothinkforourselves.Asforthoseimportantpointswhichalsomakeusconfused,wouldyoupleasegiveusmorepracticeincaseweforget?返回目录技法10应用文写作之建议信Meanwhile,weneedyourinstructions,forexample,inhowtowriteinnaturalEnglish.Istillhaveanotherrequest:assignuslesshomeworkinorderthatwecandoitmoreefficiently.Bytheway,weoftenfeelfrustrated,whichhasaverybadeffectonourstudy.Wewouldappreciateitifyouwouldgiveussomeencouragementfromtimetotime.Yours，ZhangHua返回目录技法10应用文写作之建议信路漫漫其修道远，吾将上下而求索。——屈原读不在三更五鼓，功只怕一曝十寒。——郭沫假设学习必须与实干相结合。——泰