大学英语作文The-Differences-between-College-Study-and-High-School-Study

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SchoolStudyWhenI’mahighschoolstudent,I’mlongingforthecollegelifeverymuch.Frommypointofview,thecollegestudyisfreeandeasy.NowIhavebeenstayingintheuniversityforoneandahalfyearwhichshowsthatmypreviousthoughtisn’ttrue.Itisverydifferentbetweencollegestudyandhighschoolstudy.Athighschool,thestudents’subjectsaresame.Butatcollege,thestudentscanhavesubjectstheylike.Inhighschool,yourteacheroftenspenttimegoingovertheassignedreadingandtheassignedproblemsinclassorgoingoverimportantpointsagainandagain.Incollege,learningdoesnottakeplaceprimarilyintheclassroom,andyou,notyourprofessors,areresponsibleforwhatyoulearn.Inhighschool,theteacherplannedmostofthistimeforyou.Incollegeitisyouwhomustberesponsibleforthistime.Managingthisshiftinresponsibilityisoneofthemostimportantthingsyoucandotoincreaseyourlikelihoodofsuccess.Knowingthedifferencesinthewaylearningisstructuredatcollegecanhelpyoubesuccessful.Thekeyistounderstandhowimportantyourtimeisandtouseitwell.Herearesometipsforusingyourlearningtimeeffectively:Planabalancedscheduleofactivitiesincludingschool,work,sleepandfun.Takegoodclassnotesandstudyyournotesassoonafterclassaspossible.Ifthisisnotpossiblereservesometimethedaysofyourclassestoreviewthematerial.Rememberacademicsareyourprimaryresponsibility.Collegeisdifferentthanhighschool,butyoucanbesuccessfulandstillhavefun.Getyourselfagoodplanner,doyourscheduling,andhaveagreatyear!WhenI'mahighschoolstudent,I'mlongingforthecollegelifeverymuch.[推荐词汇]very在写作中使用的太多，可考虑换为extremely,exceedingly,remarkably,intensely。

Improperlyimplemented,dialscanbeextremelydifficulttomanipulate.

如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。

Between1890and1930thewomansuffragemovementbecameexceedinglymilitant.

一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。

ThesurfaceofMarsisremarkablydiverse.

火星的表面参差不齐。

Hewassoinformedandintenselyforceful.

他是那么见多识广，极了不起。[语法检查]ahigh(Wrongarticle)[学习提示]易混词汇:college,university,institute,school,academy均含有“学院，大学”之意。

college:多指大学内的学院，分科学院或科目较少的高等学校。

university:主要指综合大学，一般由多个学院组成。当泛指大学时通常用college表示。

institute:指设立有专门学科的学院，如外语学院、地质学院、建筑学院等。

school:指大学所属的学院或系。

academy:指(高等)专科院校或研究专门学术的学校。Frommypointofview,thecollegestudyisfreeandeasy.NowIhavebeenstayingintheuniversityforoneandahalfyearwhichshowsthatmypreviousthoughtisn'ttrue.[点评]建议将oneandahalfyear改为oneandahalfyears,这是习惯用法。[语法检查]ahalf(Wrongarticle)[学习提示]易混词汇:previous,foregoing,preceding,prior,former均可表示“在前的”之意。

previous:指时间上、顺序上较早的，或指正在谈论的某事的前一个。

foregoing:指前所述的，是following的反义词。

preceding:特指时间和地位上紧接在前。

prior:与previous同义，常可换用，但prior有时强调更大的重要性，对比意味强。

former:系latter的反义词，比prior更着重对比。[错误搭配]halfyear冠词缺失，建议改为halfayearItisverydifferentbetweencollegestudyandhighschoolstudy.[学习提示]易混词汇:different,various,diverse均含“不同的”之意。

different:普通用词，强调事物间的区别或本质的不同。有时侧重对比，不着重差别。

various:通常强调种类的数目。

diverse:语气较强，指性质完全不同，着重显著的区别。Athighschool,thestudents'subjectsaresame.他面色红润，饮食一定很讲究。

Theboyswerepromisinginanotherway.

男孩子则在另一方面出人头地。

Shehadheardoftheseencounterswithpleasurableexcitement.

她欣喜而激动地听到了这些冲突。[搭配统计]动名搭配study...note在教材中出现过25次

SeeAlso:takenote4211,readnote247,studybill47,learnnote21,examinenote15,considernote14,analyzenote8[搭配统计]动名搭配take...note在教材中出现过4211次

SeeAlso:havenote280,acceptnote15,takebill12,admitnote5[学习提示]易混词汇:letter,note,correspondence,message均有“信”之意。

letter:最普通用词，泛指一切形式的书信，尤指邮寄的信。

note:指内容直截了当的短信或便条，正式或非正式均可。

correspondence:集合名词，指全部来往信件。

message:指书信、口信、电报等。Ifthisisnotpossiblereservesometimethedaysofyourclassestoreviewthematerial.[学习提示]易混词汇:if,whether均含“是否”之意。

if:作“是否”解时，多用于口语，引出宾语从句，不能直接跟ornot连用。

whether:多用于书面语中，可与or或ornot连用，除引出宾语从句外，还可引出主语从句、表语从句、同位语从句或与不定式连用。Rememberacademicsareyourprimaryresponsibility.[高分词汇]primary是普通词汇，建议替换为radical或fundamental[学习提示]易混词汇:memorize,remember,recall,recolect,remind均有“记忆，记住，回忆”之意。

memorize:指有意识的下功夫把某事的整个细节都记在脑子里。

remember:含义较广，多指无意识地回忆起往事，也可指通过主观努力去记忆。

recall:比remember文雅，指想方设法回忆已经遗忘之事。

recolect:指在记忆中搜索，设法想起一时想不起的事情或人，强调过程。

remind:指经某人或某事的提醒而回忆起某件已遗忘之事。Collegeisdifferentthanhighschool,butyoucanbesuccessfulandstillhavefun.[语法检查]建议把differentthan改成differentfrom(Revise...)[搭配统计]动名搭配have...fun在教材中出现过11412次

SeeAlso:haveplay1030,takefun267,havesport259Getyourselfagoodplanner,doyourscheduling,andhaveagreatyear![语法检查]语法不规范，请确认[中式英语]getyourselfagoodplanner在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查[搭配统计]动名搭配have...year在教材中出现过8884次

SeeAlso:takeyear6082,have