主题14 文明礼仪-2021年中考英语作文素材大全

主题14

——文明礼仪

I.主题词汇

saybadwordstoothers,expressmyanger,disturbinterrupt（打扰），cometoanend,bein

trouble,attitudedecideseverything（态度决定一切）,playanimportantpart,getintoagoodhabit

IL常用句型

1.lbbeastudentwithgodmanners,Ishouldn't…

2.Herearesomesuggestions...

3.Ontheotherhand,Ishouldnot...

4.Inordertobeastudentwithgoodmanners...

5.Learningtosaysorryisasurewaytolearnhowtorespectyourselfandothers.

6.Anotherveryimportantreasonofsayingyou'resorryisthat...

7.That'swhatastudentwithgoodmannersshoulddo.

8.Inmyopinion,agoodstudentinmiddleschoolshouldbegoodatbothstudyingandbeingagood

person.

III.模拟试题

Tobeastudentwithgoodmanners

A.Areyouastudentwithgoodmannersorbadmanners?

B.Whydoyouthinkso?

C.Tobeastudentwithgoodmanners,whatshould/shouldn^youdoinpublic?

要点分析

1、这三个要点紧紧围绕主题，让学生阐明自己表现符合/不符合礼貌规范的方面。如果不符合,

应该在哪些方面改进，成为知礼仪，讲规范的学生

2、仔细审题，第二、三问可适当展开。

3、时态：一般现在时

4、切忌不要偏题（如：第二问是写你是一个不礼貌学生的具体表现，不要写为何是一个讲礼

貌的学生）

写作思路

•谈“讲文明，知礼仪”的重要性

1、IthinkthatI'mastudentwithgoodmannersbecause...

2、Asweallknow,goodmannersplayanimportantpartidailylife.

3、Thereisnodenyingthatit'simportantforstudentstohavegoodmanners.

4、Goodmannersarenecessarytous.

•就如何做一个讲文明、知礼仪的好学生提出一些建议

1.ThoughsometimesI'mangry,Ineversaybadwordstootherstoexpressmyanger.

2.It'sgoodtoqueueupwhenwearewaiting.

3.Wemustlitterthefoodwhichwedon'tneedintherubbish.

4.Others9opinionaboutyoudependsonyourmanners.

5.Weshouldspeakinalowvoiceinpublic.What'smore,weoughttokeepsmiling.

6.Togiveothersagoodimpression,weshouldhavegoodmannersfirst.Forexample,weought

tobefriendlytoothersinpublic.Besides,weshouldn'tberudetoothers.Inaword,"better

manners,betterlife79

7.Tobeastudentwithgoodmanners,Ishouldn'ttalkwithothersloudly.Whenotherpeople

aretalking,Ishouldn'tinterruptthem.Ishouldwaituntiltheirconversationcomestoanend.

8.Tobeastudentwithgoodmanners.Weshouldgreettheoldandhelpthemtoshowour

respect.Weshouldqueuewhilewaitingforthebusandpayinginthesupermarket.

9.Here'resomesuggestions.Weshouldn'tthrowrubbishortalkloudlyinpublic.Wemustkeep

quietintheschoollibrary.Weshouldn'tmakeanynoisethere.Lefsbestudentswithgoodmanners.

10.Tobeastudentwithgoodmanners,weshouldn'twalkacrosstheroadwhenthetrafficlight

isred.Weoughttothrowrubbishintothebin.Weshouldhelpthepeoplewhoneedourhelp.That's

whatastudentwithgoodmannersshoulddo.

范文讲评

原文稿

Nowadays,it'simportanttobeastudentwithgoodmanners.Why?I'llgiveyousomereasons.First,

goodmannerscanmakeotherpeoplebefriendlytoyou.Second,ifyouareastudentwithbad

manners,teachersandotherstudentswon'tlikeyou.Whafsmore,tobeastudentwithgoodmanners,

weshouldn'tspeakloudlyinpublic.Therefore,ifeveryonehasgoodmanners,theworldwillbe

morebeautiful.

点评与评分

在这篇文章中，作者能适当运用学过的词组和句式，并首尾呼应。按中考作文20分计算，属

于第二档的文章，可得14分左右，需改进之处：

1.第二个问题的内容写偏了，应写你是一个讲礼貌的学生的具体表现，而不是写讲礼貌的重要

性

2.Whafsmore连接词用错。这里不是表示递进的关系，而是第三个问题的开始

3.第三个问题的内容少了一个建议

修改稿

Nowadays,ifsimportanttobeastudentwithgoodmanners.1thinkIamastudentwithgood

manners.First,Ineverinten*uptteachersinclass.Italkaboutthequestionswithteachersafterclass.

Second,Iusuallyhelpmyteachersandclassmatesiftheyneedanyhelp,lbbeastudentwithgood

manners,weshouldtalktootherpeoplepolitely.Weshouldn'tspeakloudlyinpublic.What's

more,weshouldqueuewhilewaitingforthebusandpayinginthesupermarket.Therefore,if

everyonehasgoodmanners,theworldwillbemorebeautiful.

范文选登

1.IthinkIamastudentwithgoodmanners.WhenIseemyteachersandclassmates.Iwillsay

uhello,9tothem.Whenwehavedifferentideas,Ineverarguewithmyclassmates.Whenmyfriends

areintrouble,Iwillhelpthematonce.

Butthesearenotenough.Itisourdutytoneverspeakloudlyinpublicandleaverubbishinto

rubbishbins.Weshouldhelppeoplewhentheyneedhelpthoughtheyarestrangers.Hownicetobea

studentwithgoodmanners.

2.IthinkthatI'mastudentwithgoodmannersbecauseI'mneverrude.ThoughsometimesI'm

angry,Ineversaybadwordstootherstoexpressmyanger.Tobeastudentwithgoodmanners,I

shouldn'tinterruptthem.Ishouldwaituntiltheirconversationcomestoanend.Whynotbesstudent

withgoodmanners?

3.Asweallknow,goodmannersplayanimportantpartindailylife.Iamastudentwithgood

mannersbecauseIalwaysgreetmyteacherswhenImeetthem.Asafamoussayinggoes,“Attitude

decideseverything.^^Wemustlearntobestudentsloudlyinpublic.Wemustkeepquietintheschool

library.Weshouldn'tmakeanynoisethere.Lefsbestudentswithgoodmanners.

4.IthinkIamastudentwithgoodmanners.whenmyclassmateshelpme,Ialwayssay“thanks”to

them,andIoftenhelpmyfriendswhoareintrouble.Ialwayshelpmyteachers,too.Tobeastudent

withgoodmanners,weshouldn'twalkacrosstheroadwhenthetrafficlightisred.Weoughtto

throwrubbishintothebin.Weshouldhelpthepeoplewhoneedourhelp.That'swhatastudentwith

goodmannersshoulddo.

5.ThereisnodoubtthatI'mstrictwithmyselfespeciallywithmymanners.Forexample,Iusually

helpothersandtakegoodcareoftheoldinmydailylife.Andatschool,teachersalwayspraiseme

formygoodmanners.Inordertobeastudentwithgoodmanners,weshouldbepolitewhiletaking

toothers.Asacitizen,weshouldn'tleaverubbishandshoutloudlyinpublic.Inaword,ifweare

studentswithgoodmanners,ourcountrywillbeproudofus.

6.IrememberbeingpunishedbyDadwhenIwasalittlegirlbecauseofbadmanners.Dadthinks

rulesaremadetobetterourbehaviorsandpurifyourinside.WiththehelpofDad,Ihavebecomea

studentwithgoodmanners.Igreetotherswarmly,keepmymouthclosedwhilechewing,andam

neverlateforanappointment.Tobeastudentwithgoodmanners,Ishoulddressneatly,andkeepmy

voicelow.Ontheotherhand,Ishouldnotinterruptotherswhentheyaretalkingoruserudewords.

Itmaytakealongtimetoreallygetintoahabit,andthere9sstillsomuchtolearnevenifIthinkI'm

doingwell,butIbelievesincerityhasitsrewards.

7.There'snodoubtthatChinaisacountrywithgoodmanners.Inordertokeepthiswonderful

traditionon,westudentsshouldhavegoodmanners.PersonallyIthinkIamastudentwithgood

mannersbecauseIbehaveproperlyinpublic.

Tobegood-manneredstudents,weshouldrespecteverybodyequally.Weneedtosay"please”and

“thankyou^moreoften.That'sadisplayofyourgoodmanners.Second,weshouldn'tbemeantothe

poororthedisabled.Ifwealwaysgivethemahelpinghand,eventheairwillbefilledwithlove.

Ibelievethatgoodmannersshowaperson'sinnerbeautyaswellasmaketheworldmore

beautiful!

范文链接

1.Howtobehavewell?

Inmyopinion,agoodmiddleschoolshouldbegoodatbothstudyandbeingagoodperson.As

middleschoolstudents,wearenotchildrenatall.Weoughttoberesponsibleforourselves.Sowhat

shouldwedo?Firstofall,weshouldstudyhardforitisastudent'sduty.Next,weshouldmake

friendswithourclassmates.Nobodycanbesuccessfulalone.Weshouldhaveteamwork.Finally,

it'salsoimportanttofindawayinvolvedinsocialactivities.Lefstryourbesttobehavewell.

2.Learningtosaysorry

Learningtosaysorryisagoodmannerinourlife.Lifedoesnotalwaysrunsmoothlyforusand

mistakesoftenhappen.Whathappenswhenyoumakeamistake?Doyoutrytohidethefact,ordeny

anyresponsibilities?

Inmyopinion,whenyou'vemadeamistake,sayyou'resorry.Itallowsseveralgoodthingsto

happen.Ithelpspeoplebelieveyouagain,andithelpsrepairanydamagethatwascausedbythe

mistake.Anotherveryimportantreasonofsayingyou'resorryisthatithelpsyougainrespectfor

yourselfagain.Itallowsyoutoleavethemistakesbehindyou,andtomoveonwithyourlife.

Learningtosaysorryisasurewaytolearnhowtorespectyourselfandothers.

3・howtousebodylanguageproperly?

Bodylanguageisaspeciallanguagefbrsendingmessagestootherswithoutanywords.

Bodylanguageisveryuseful.Peopleindifferentcountriescanunderstanditeasily.Insomespecial

places,itisverynecessarytonusebodylanguage,forexample,greetingtoourfriendsfaraway,

speakinginaverynoisyplace,talkingwithsomedisabledpeople.

Doyouknowhowtousesomebodylanguages?Forexample,wavingone'shandistosay

“goodbye”.Asmileandahandshakeshowwelcome.Noddingtheheadmeansagreement,but

shakingtheheadmeansdisagreement.

Tosumup,ifyoucanusebodylanguageproperly,itwillmakeyourlifeconvenientandmeaningful.

4.Schoolmanners

Everyschoolhasitsownsetofrulestokeepstudentsdisciplined.Theruleschangefromoneschool

toanother.Someschoolsaremuchstricterthanothers.Itisusefultomakestudentsbecomepolite.

Atfirst,schoolsalsodemandthatstudentswearuniforms,suchassportssuitsorskirts.

Second,schoolsalsotellstudentsthattheymaynotbelateforschool.Theymustgotoschoolon

time.

Third,formannersatschool.Gumchewingisnotallowedinschoolbuildings,asitisdifficultto

cleanup.

Finally,strangehairstylesarenotallowedinschool.

Inshort,everystudentmustobeyschoolrules.It9sgoodfbrthem.

5.Beingagoodyouthoftoday

Beingayouthisonething,andbeingagoodoneisanother.Agoodyouthshouldhavethese

qualities.Firstofall,health.Ahealthybodyisthebestwealth.Withoutit,nothingcanbedonewell.

Secondly,onemusthaveakindheart.Alwaysdosomethinggoodforothers.Helpthoseintrouble

andcareaboutthepeoplearoundyou.Thirdly,onemusthavetheabilitytoworkwithothers.

Cooperationandcommunicationaretwoimportantkeystobetterhumanrelations.Finally,patriotism

isalsosomethingweshouldneverforget.Itmeansloveforone'scountry.Itisoneofthehighest

qualitiesofhumans/

Ithinkagoodyouthoftodayshouldalsohavesometraininginart.Ifeveryonecanenjoyartand

beabletomakemoreofitforothers,peoplewilllivebetterandenjoymore.

真题在现

Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"HowcanIgetalongwellwithmy（以《如

何与（老师/同学/家人等）友好相处》为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占

格。）（注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予给分。）

Phrasesforreference4以下短语仅供参考。）•

talkwithshareideascarefor

giveahelpinghandlearnfromshowrespectto

★审(Read)

从作文标题"HowcanIgetalongwellwithmy_"中可得知,主要的与作内容应为如何与...

融洽相处，接下来再仔细阅读所给提示:talkwith,shareideas,carefor,giveahelpinghand,learn

from,showrespectto。读完后会发现，与第4篇话题所给形式类似，提示中并没有太多的框架引

导性问题,对于此类文章，则要结合实际情况，按照传统作文写作的三大段，重新整合思路。新的思

路基本上可以围绕以下三方面展开：1.谁在我们生活中非常重要(Whoisveryimportantinour

life?)2.我们该如何与他/她友好相处(Howcanwegetalongwellwithhim/her?)3.结论

(Conclusion).

★写（Write）

根据之前所讲写作步骤：作文题目一写作框架一添加素材一初稿,

Step1

即可进行如下书写步骤的拆解:

l.Whoisveryimportantin开篇：Parentsareveryimportantin

ourlife.

importantinourlife?

0中间:Wecangetalongwellwith

2.Howcanwegetalongwiththem?

themby...

3.Conclusion.结尾:Ihope...

接下来，我们需要思考，涉及到人际关系类话题时，可以运用哪些词汇及句式，才会使文章的内容

变得丰富。

词汇大搜罗

♦名词：

1.example2.1ife3.matter4.opinion

5.parent6.person7.point8.side

9.thanklO.thing1l.view

♦动词：

1.agree2.appear3.ask4.can

5.complain6.express7.get8.give

9.happen10.have1l.love12.make

13.mention14.respect15.say16.seem

17.should18.speak19.talk2O.think

21.try22.will

♦形容词：

1.best2.different3.important4.more

5.most6.possible7.small8.tired

♦副词；

1.never2.often3.seriously4.usually

5.well

连接词及短语大搜罗

♦表因果

because,dueto,therefore,asaresult

♦表转折

but,however,onthecontrary

♦表举例

forexample,forinstance

♦表层次

first(ly),second(ly),third(ly)

♦表总结

insummary,inaword,generallyspeaking

表达方式大搜罗

l.Whenyouaskme...,Iwill..当你问我..，我会

2.1tseemsthat…似乎.

3.Weusuallydisagree...我们经常对•有分歧

4.Frommypointofview,...依我看,.

5.Tryyourbestto...尽你的全力去..

运用以上单词、连接词以及句式,就可以在已写出的文章框架（开篇、中间、结尾）的中心句

基础上，添加必要的写作素材,从而形成文章的初稿，如下：

初稿：

HowcanIgetalongwellwithmyparents?

Whenyouaskmewhoisthemostimportantpersoninourlife,Iwillsaytheparents.Becausethey

giveuslife.Andwelovethemmost.However,itseemsthatsomedisagreementsoftenarisebetween

us.Forexample,weusuallydisagreewitheachotheroversomesmallmatters.Moreseriously,we

evencomplaintoourparentsaboutthingsthathavehappened.Allthesethathavebeenmentioned

abovemakebothsideswiththem?Frommypointofview,tired.Buthowcanwegetalongwell

becausethey'reourparents.Firstly,respectthemwhateverhappenedSecondly,trytotalkwiththem

whenwehavedifferentopinionsaboutsomething.Thirdly,neverthinkthateverythingyourparents

doforyouIswhattheyshoulddo,expressyourthankstothemasoftenaspossible.Generally

speaking,ourparentsloveusmostinthisworld.Therefore,weshouldtryourbesttogetalongwell

withthem.

★美(Beautify)

根据之前所讲写作步骤:初稿一包装句子,

Step2

初稿=包装句子

则可发现,文章在句式方面出现了如下问题:

初稿:

HowcanIgetalongwellwithmyparents?

Whenyouaskmewhoisthemostimportantpersoninourlife,Iwill(l)saytheparents.

Becausetheygiveuslife(2).Aedwelovethemmost.⑶However,itseemsthatsomedisagreements

oftenarisebetweenus.Forexample,weusuallydisagreewitheachotheroversomesmallmatters.

Moreseriously,(4)weevencomplaintooucparents(5)aboutthingsthathavehappened.Allthese

thathavebeenmentionedabov