浙江省杭州市萧山区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

浙江省杭州市萧山区

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年浙江省杭州市萧山区中考一模英语试题

第二节：书面表达（本题有1小题；共计15分）

假定你是李平，你的笔友Peter发来邮件诉说他的苦恼，请你阅读邮件后回复。词数80个左

右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

To:LiPing@mail.com

From:Peter

Subject:Askforadvice

Hithere,LiPing

Fmfeelingbluethesedaysbecauseofmysister.ShealwayswatchesTVathomeinherfreetime

andnevergoesouttoexercise,joinclubsoranything.Ithinkitwillbebadforherhealth.What

shouldIdo?Canyougivemesomeadvice?

Peter

2022年浙江省杭州市萧山区中考一模英语试题

第二节：书面表达（本题有1小题：共计15分）

71.假定你是李平，请阅读你的笔友Lucy的邮件并回复。词数80词左右，可适当增加

细节，以使行文连贯。

DearLiPing,

How'sitgoingthesedays?I'mhavingagreattimeinShanghaiforthetwo-monthexchange

program.It5sagreatplacetovisitandthere'sjustsomuchtoseeanddohere.

LastnightIwenttoaChinesemusicconcert.Ipreferquietandtraditionalmusic,sotheconcert

suitedmejustfine.Doyoulikemusic?Whatkindofmusicdoyoulikebest?

Tomorroweveningmyhostfamilyistakingmetotheirlittledaughter'sbirthdayparty,butI

amnotsurewhatIamexpectedtodobeforetheparty.ShouldIprepareagiftoranything?Ifso,

whatcanIchooseasthegift?WhatelsecouldIdotomakethepartymoreinteresting?

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Allthebest,

Lucy

2021年浙江省杭州市萧山区中考一模英语试题

六、电子邮件

56.以下是某英文杂志刊登的三则志愿者招募广告(Volunteersneeded)o假如你是李华,

你打算参加其中的一项活动，现请你根据举办方的邮址用英语进行回复并留下自己的联系方

式。

HelpoldpeopleWeCleanPeople's

needfourvolunteerstoPark!Weneedfivepeople

Teachmusic!WeneedthreeworkatXinxinnursingwhoarestrongandcan

volunteerstoworkasmusicteachersinhome.YouneedtobehelpcleanupPeople's

SOSChildren'sVillages.YouneedtobehelpfulandgoodwithPark.Weneedhelpto

activeandgoodatsinginganddancing.olderpeople.collectrubbish.

IfyouarefreefortwohourseveryIfyoucanspareIfyouarefreefor

weekend,joinus!threehoursonMay6.fourhoursthisweekend,

Telomeandjoinus!comeandjoinus!

Email:lovekids@Telel/p>

Mail:Mail:

homelove@163.compark699@126,com

DearSmith,

It'smypleasuretowritetoyoutoapplyforthevolunteerworkto.Nowletme

introducemyselfandtellyouwhyIvolunteertojoininthework.

Regards,

Lihua

答案：

2023年浙江省杭州市萧山区中考一模英语试题

71.例文1

DearPeter,

Iunderstandhowyoumustbefeelingaboutyoursister?shabits.It5sgreatthatyou're

concernedforherhealthandwanttohelpher.MayIsuggestthatyouhaveahearttoheart

conversationwithher?Explainyourconcernsandaskhertojoinyouforawalkaroundthepark

ormaybesuggestafunactivitythatyoubothcandotogether.Youcanalsoencouragehertojoina

sportscluborotheractivitiesthatcanhelpherstayactive.Letherknowthatyoucareabouther

andthatyouwanthertobehealthyandhappy.

Bestofluck!

LiPing

例文2

DearPeter,

Icanunderstandyourconcernforyoursister'shealth.Itisimportanttokeepourbodies

activeandhealthy.Youcantalktoyoursisterandtrytomotivatehertobemoreactive.Suggest

dailyactivitiesthatbothofyoucandotogether,suchasgoingforawalk,ridingbikesorplaying

sports.Encouragehertojoinasportscluboranyclubthatinterestsher.Youcanalsosetan

examplebybeingactiveyourselfandinvitinghertojoinyou.Itcanbeachallengefbrherto

changehabits,butwithyoursupport,Ithinkyoursisterwillmakeachangeforthebetter.

Bestofluck!

LiPing

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：要求根据Peter发来的邮件进行回复，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

［写作步骤J

以例文1为例：

第一步，对对方表示理解；

第二步，就Peter的烦恼给出建议；

第三步，书写结语。

［亮点词汇］

©hearttoheart贴心地

②encouragesbtodosth鼓励（某人）去做（某事）

③careabout关心

［高分句型］

①Iunderstandhowyoumustbefeelingaboutyoursister'shabits,（how引导宾语从句）

©Explainyourconcemsandaskhertojoinyouforawalkaroundtheparkormaybesuggesta

funactivitythatyoubothcandotogether.（祈使句和that引导的定语从句）

2022年浙江省杭州市萧山区中考一模英语试题

【答案】例文：

DearLucy,

Ifsgoodtohearfromyou.Everythinggoeswellwithmehere.Tmsogladtohearthatyouare

havingagreatlimeinShanghai,andhavealreadyenjoyedawonderfulChinesemusicconcertthere.

Ilikemusic,too.Ilikeclassicalmusicbestbecauseitcanmakemehappyandrelaxed.

AsforthebirthdaygiftIthinksomehome-madesnacksorapieceofartworkmadeby

yourselfwillbeagoodchoice.Also,ifyoucanperformatalentshowlikesingingasongorplaying

amagictrickduringtheparty,Ithinkyourhostfamilywillappreciateit.Tmsureyouandyourhost

familywillhaveareallyunforgettablebirthdayparty.

Writetomesoon.

Allthebest,

LiPing

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文——电子邮件的写作。在写作时应根据笔友Lucy

邮件内容进行回复，回复内容包括：自己的近况如何；简述露西在上海听音乐会的事情；自

己喜欢的音乐；最重要的对露西要送的生日礼物提出建议；最后是祝愿。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时为主。在叙述内容

时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证内容叙述完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。

2021年浙江省杭州市萧山区中考一模英语试题

56.Onesampleversion:

DearSmith,

It'smypleasuretowritetoyoutoapplyforthevolunteerworktohelpoldpeople.Nowlet

meintroducemyselfandtellyouwhyIvolunteertojoininthework.

MynameisLiHua,astudentfromClass2,Grade3.1amkind,pat