Unit5IntothewildDevelopingideas读后续写拯救小海鸥课件-高中英语

拯救小海鸥

无灵主语ApangofpainstruckmeasIwitnessedthestruggleoftheinnocentcreature.Whatifitdoesn’tpullthrough?Willitdiefrominfections?Thesefearsseizedme.

ThemomentIsteppedontothestage,myfearsseizedme,butthememoryofmyhardworkandpracticestrengthenedmyresolvetoperformwell.Astheexamresultswereannounced,afloodoftensionwelledupinmyheart.

Itwasabeautifulsummerevening,andIwaswalkingalongthebeachnearmyhome.Asusual,seagulls（海鸥）hovered（盘旋）aboveme,waitingeagerlyforapieceofbreadortwo.Suddenly,somethingcaughtmyeye-alittlebirdflappingitswingsdesperately,strugglingtotakeoff.

Irushedcloserandsawthatitwasababyseagull,withafishhookpiercingthroughitsbeak.ApangofpainstruckmeasIwitnessedthestruggleoftheinnocentcreature.Itsmotherwashoveringaboveus,cryingfiercely,herwailsresoundingacrossthecoast.

"Willitsurvive?"Iaskednervously.

Thevetrepliedwithreassurance,"Withourexpertiseandyourkindgesture,itstandsagoodchance."Ifeltaglimmerofhopesparkinsidemeasthebirdwastakenawayfortheoperation.

AsIwaitedoutsidetheoperatingtheatre,Iwasfeelinganxiousandhadanuneasyfeelinginmystomach.Whatifitdoesn’tpullthrough?Willitdiefrominfections?Thesefearsseizedme,butthememoryofthedeterminedmotherseagullstrengthenedmyresolve.Paragraph1:

Finally,afterwhatseemedlikeages,thedooropened.Paragraph2:

Atthebeach,Icarefullyplacedthebirdonthesand.Para1:Isawalittlebirdflappingitswingsdesperately,strugglingtotakeoff.Para2:Itwasababyseagull,withafishhookpiercingthroughitsbeak.Itsmotherwashoveringaboveus,cryingfiercely,Para3:Iheadedtowardstheclosestveterinaryclinic(兽医诊所),holdingthelittlebird.Para4-7:Thehookneededtobeextractedsurgically.thebirdwastakenawayfortheoperation.续写：Paragraph1:Finally,afterwhatseemedlikeages,thedooropened.Paragraph2:Atthebeach,Icarefullyplacedthebirdonthesand.Ahappyending?Para.2：Atthebeach,Icarefullyplacedthebirdonthesand.续写框架：五五拍戏法Para.1:Finally,afterwhatseemedlikeages,thedooropened.承上启下演员：I,thebabyseagull&itsmother承上演员：I&thebabyseagull兽医出来了，说海鸥的伤情。康复后，准备带它去海滩。我听后的心情。把小海鸥带回家养伤。12345①②⑥⑦Tip3：戏份不够，细节/环境来凑。情感态度价值观升华小海鸥的母亲看到孩子飞了过来。我将永远记住这次经历。看到他们团聚，我很开心。对小海鸥的生活产生了很大的影响。12345

海鸥飞走了。③④⑤⑧⑨故事结局Finallyafterwhatseemedlikeages,thedooropened.我的反应NosoonerthevetsteppedoutitthanIrushedtowardshim.

（Nosoonerhadsbdone...thansbdid一...就）Finally,afterwhatseemedlikeages,thedooropened.我的反应Anxiousandconcerned,Ihurriedtoaskthevetaboutthesituationoftheseagull.

（我的心理、动作）Finally,afterwhatseemedlikeages,thedooropened.兽医的反应

Thevetappeared,saying,“Theoperationwasasuccess,butitwillneedtimetorecover.”,hisvoicefilledwithrelief.

(兽医说了什么、)兽医的心情)

主题升华Asshedisappeared,IfeltasenseofpeaceandconnectionwithnaturethatIhadneverexperiencedbefore.AsIwatchedthemdisappearintothehorizon,IknewthatIhadmadeadifferenceinthelifeofthatlittlebird,andthatwasallthatmattered.Shehovered

aroundmeforafewsecondsbeforetakingoffhighintothesky,leavingmewithafeelingofjoyandanunforgettablememorythatIwouldcherishforever.Paragraph1:Finally,afterwhatseemedlikeages,thedooropened.Withasmileregisteringonthevet’sface,hesaidthattheoperationwasverysuccessful.(兽医的反应)Thisbabyseagullwasoutofdangerbutstilltooweaktofly.Hearingthat,myanxietywasreplacedbyasenseofrelief.(我的反应)AfterIexpressedmygratitudetothevet,Itookithomeanddidmybesttocareforit.Afteramonth,theseagullsrecovered.

SoIbroughtittothebeach.(带到海滩)

表达感谢Thetinybirdseemedtobethankingmeforrescuingher.Thetinybirdturnedherheadfromsidetosideasifexpressinghergratitudeforsavingherlifetome.Itsmotherseagulllookedupatme,asifthankingmeforsavingherchild.Paragraph2:

Atthebeach,Icarefullyplacedthebirdonthesand.Immediately,themotherseagullflewtowardsus.Shenudgedthelittleseagullgently,asifcheckingtoseeifitwasalright.(海鸥母亲出现及反应)Witnessingthereunion,myeyesfilledwithtearsofhappiness.(我的反应)ThenthebabyseagullanditsmotherflewuphighandIwavedmyhandtosaygoodbyetothem.Astheydisappeared,IfeltasenseofpeaceandconnectionwithnaturethatIhadneverexperiencedbefore.(主题升华)Paragraph1:Finally,afterwhatseemedlikeages,thedooropened.Thevetappeared,alookofexhaustionmixedwithreliefonhisface."Theoperationwasasuccess,"heannounced.

Afloodofjoy

seizedmeasIrushedtoseethelittleseagull.Itseyeswerestillclosed,butitsbreathingwassteady."We'veremovedthehook,andwithsomerestandcare,itshouldmakeafullrecovery,"thevetadded.Ithankedhimsincerelyandtookithome,holdingitclosetomychest.Afteramonthofmycarefulattention,theseagullrecovered.Iknewitwastimeforittogobacktothenature.Paragraph2:

Atthebeach,Icarefullyplacedthebirdonthesand.Itsmotherimmediatelyflewdown,gentlynudgingh