七下unit 作文 -我最爱的动物

Writing：MyFavoriteAnimalWhatanivmalscanyouseeinthezoo?Aretheylovely?otheranimalsdolphinKangaroopenguincatmonkeypigbearzebraBrain-stormdog['zi:brə]['peŋgwin]['dɒlfɪn][beə][kæŋgə'ruː]Enjoythevideoandanswer:1.Whatarethepeopletalkingaboutinthevideo?2.Whatdothepeoplethinkofthem?EnjoythefollowingpicturesWhatdothepeoplethinkoftheirdogs?theyarepeople's_______animals.

bestfriendstheworldeverythingimportantfavoriteWhatcandogsdoforyou?playwithmemakemerelaxedbemyfamilyDogscan...makemehappyDogsare_________tothemDogsare_________tothemDogsare_________tothemTheyareso________inourlife,becauseA:Whydoyoulikeit?A:What'syourfavoriteanimal?PairworkB:Because...B:Myfavoriteanimalisthe...

A:Whatcanthe...doforyou?B:Itcan...likebeautifulAfricayearslivesbecauseThisisBecky.Isn’tshe_________?Sheisfrom_______.Sheistwelve______old.I_____Becky________sheissmartandfriendly.She______inBlackwoodZoo.Africayearslikebecauselivesbeautiful

BeckyisJill’sfavoriteanimal.Fillintheblankswiththewordsinthebox.3aPre-writing(page30)appearance外貌country国家age年龄reason原因place地点

MyFavoriteAnimal

Therearemanyanimalsintheworld.What'smyfavoriteanimal，doyouknow?Manypeoplelikeherverymuch.SheisfromChina.Sheisblackandwhite.Shehastwobigearsandeyes.Andshealsohasblacklegsandarms.Shelookskindoflazy,butverycute.Shelikeseatingbamboo（竹子）.Shelikesclimbingtrees.[bæm'bu]Sheissolovelyandfriendly.Ilikeherbecauseshebringshappinesstome.Yes,myfavoriteanimalisabeautifulpanda.

MainBody（主体）为了使文章有层次感，内容连贯，陈述原因时，可以使用什么词连接句子？Beginning（开头）ButBecauseEnding(结尾)And审题体裁：_______________________人称：_______________________时态：_______________________结构：分______段（总分总）第一、三人称（I，my，he,his,she,her）

一般现在时态说明文

三Beginning（略写开头）

用一句或两句话引出话题

Body（详写主体）从外貌、性格及典型事例三方面展开描写Ending（略写结尾）两三句话总结全文,首尾呼应并照应主题ArticleStructure介绍你最喜欢的一种动物，并且喜欢他/她的原因，写一篇至少50字左右的短文.（15分）内容包括：NameAgeAppearance(外表特征)FavoritefoodHobby（爱好）WritingTime

Structure(结构)2分

Isthearticledividedintoparts?（是否分段）Content(内容)5分Allthemainpointsstated?(写作)Language(语言)6分Anyspellingorgrammarsmistakes?（是否有拼写或语法错误）2.Anylinkingwords?（是否使用正确的连接词）3.Anygoodvocabularyorsentences?(是否有好的词汇或句子）Handwriting（书写）2分Isitcleanandtidy?（书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁）熟悉评分标准，精心规划作文（15分）Step5CheckShowTime先自评，再找搭档互相交换欣赏。用红笔修改并划出对方的亮点。根据评分标准打分。Step6Afterwriting中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（0-3分）只能传达个别信息,表达不清楚,只有个别句子可读。SummaryLearnsomewritingski